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Posted: 13 years ago
wow Masam..
it was simply amazing..you won't believe but i felt m living this story..
the way you have narrated the story,the occurrence of the events it was simply done in beautiful way..
i am seriously feeling her pain, his pain..
all your stories are superb but somehow i loved this one alot..
please update soon..and thanks for pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing chapter, very beautifully written
the words you use in the narration is excellent
waiting to read the next chapter.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww..
Just woww.left me in awe.,
beautifully written..
gosh the routine which had become the habit..he became her habit.his silence..
But then one day things have changed..he wanted more.but she couldnt give.and how could she??..he never said anything..
His resolution of letting her go..without thinking that not only him ..he too has become her habit..
Gosh that day when the news flashed on screen.felt for khushi. Sad end to their story..so naive she is na..
But again he couldnt let her go..he was there..if possible do write more .cont the story.

He was in store,buying cigrete to just have a glimpse of her..
Her stalker..
I just watch u miss gupta..
There was so much between them yet nothing..he ended it all so easily..he couldnt or i say didnt wanted to give a name to that pull..
Edited by .Saraa. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Why did he do what he did

Now what you can't stop here

When is the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Such an amazing story...just loved it...would love to read more! Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow. Lovely.. End wasn't quite expected.. !!

Thanks for PMing!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updateee...
arnav leaving her without telling and she is crying like she lost her lovee...
now why he came again left la kyaa😕..
update soon
thnx 4 pm😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful simply beautiful
hope u write more
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Posted: 13 years ago
You gottta be kidding me if this was the end. Why?? Why? Why do you have to leave us at mysterious cliffhanger??
WHat does it mean by he would be there no mattter?? Please enlighten me as I am too confused right now
But a big applause for giving us such unique ones that leaves beautifulmemories in our brain forever
👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow that was an awesome update really liked and I enjoyed it

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