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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Awesome concept and beautifully written!

I hope along with you that he doesn't leave her! I'll want to hurt someone from the CVs too!

So much pain, just reading it makes me want to cry!

Thank you for the PM!

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masam

@masam

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

You are hell bent on making us crying aren't you, Miss Rae-zada?

It was so emotional that I feel as if my life is in the shades of grey. And I absolutely loved the last para.

Great update!

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Wonderful update Rae... Arnav's pain and his suffering.. 😒

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Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Just found this!!

Arnav's helplessness in the first chapter...his will to be with Khushi...but his lost fight against fate, which had decided something else in the course of his life...you have depicted it beautifully!!

Then Arnav's pain and suffering...which has plagued him throughout his life...scarring him..and his will to try and move on and to try and be happy...but his life always took on another turn and made him face another nightmare...Arnav's emotions can be felt so clearly...very poignant chapter!!

Beautiful writing!!! 👏Loved this!!❤️

Edited by raomedhz - 12 years ago