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AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: mistyrains
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Muskaan. Sigh. One second I was smiling wistfully ( even though I knew it was a dream ) and the next I felt like crying (which is a lot worse than crying actually). My heart breaks for Arnav and I read the dream sequence, twice, and I can't get over the beauty of that scene.

Exquisite chapter Rae!

And I thought the last one was the best till date, but it just keeps getting better and better :D

I am truly humbled, Sona, specially with THIS coming from you who has the uncanny ability to make me emote some way or the other with everything she writes. Thank You so much. :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: ...Doctor...
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I'm crying..I'm literally crying today.
Arnav's dream was so cute, so adorable...just perfect. For a moment I thought that they actually had a baby & all but it was a dream.

Lovely chapter Rae. Arnav's helplessness, his desire to be with khushi, his dreams, everything was perfectly written.

I wonder where is khushi & the Raizadas? Will we get to read about their feelings too?

Continue soon!

I am humbled that I could make you emote. No questions can be answered as of this moment, sorry. Just keep reading to know what happens. Glad you are liking it. Thank You so much for the wonderful comments till now. :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: curledup
Its marvelous Rae , the vision captured is absolutely stunning. I like the slow unravel. The depth of Arnavs feelings have been exhibited perfectly. Continue with this vigour of emotion.

Thank You so much. I am so glad you are liking. Shall try to meet your expectations. :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: Crazy_soul
Great update.sorry abt that rushed comment.bt i read the 3 parts in one go.
Now coming to 4th part,arnav's dream brought a wistful smile on my face.bt the very next moment realised it was just a dream.u penned his feelings beautifully.
Thanks for the pm!

'khushiji' really?.it reminds me of that creep.i prefer arnav's husky khushi

Thank You for your comment. Glad you are liking this. :)

@Bold - It was a term of endearment and light teasing from Arnav to Khushi. I am sorry that it reminded you of Shyam but I use it sometimes in my stories as a light teasing moment between the two, taking inspiration from, of course, Khushi's "Arnavji".

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: Maddy1270
that dream arnav had was so damn real it fooled me... for a minute I felt happy at how content he was before his world came crashing down around him... even if he's to blame for losing khushi, his pain leaves you with a pang in your heart and the hope that he might yet find khushi and regain his lost happiness... hope that dream has a chance of becoming real

Thank You so much. :)

@Bold - Thank You once again as this is what I wanted to portray with this chapter and the others in a way.

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: V323
This is heart touching. It is amazing how you always make me want to cry, after reading this update.

Considering, that I was JUST getting angry at some people on the CE blog page.

This was heart rendingly poignant. Arnav's dream!! #Sigh

Thank you for the PM!

-V

Thank You so much. :)

And after I read your comment, I went over to Chains of ? (a thing I like to do...ask Anne about it :p) and read the comments to the last chapter and some just made me laugh really hard and then shake my head, so I can understand what you must be thinking reading those comments so I am glad this made you feel better...in a strange way considering it made you want to cry...

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: bushrayou
sh*t wow! I legit have a lump in my throat. I am wow!

Firstly how can you possibly make the same lines said in the show mean and feel so much more in your writing? I feel like i was going ot start crying my eyes out!

every emotion ever single feeling is so overpowering and makes me just want to shake him and yell at him to go to her!

Man this is a beautiful beautiful story. Your writing transforms every idea and every emotion!

thank you!!!

Thank You so much. :)

You have an uncanny ability of making me blush hard after reading your comments and very kind, too kind actually, praise for my work. The part in bold just made me go all red and am so humbled, as did all the rest but the part in bold specially. And I am glad that this is making you emote because really there is nothing better for a writer than his/her readers being able to feel the emotions of the character.

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ShiningStar18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Such an amazing story! ❤️

Read all the four parts in one go!

I loved how you described Arnav's feelings and his memories.

Simply awesome!

Update soon :)

P.S I am extremely sorry i couldn't comment on the chapters separately since i didn't know about this story before your PM. 😳

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: ShiningStar18
Such an amazing story! ❤️
Read all the four parts in one go!

I loved how you described Arnav's feelings and his memories.

Simply awesome!

Update soon :)

P.S I am extremely sorry i couldn't comment on the chapters separately since i didn't know about this story before your PM. 😳

Thank You. :)

Glad you are liking it.

And I sent out initial PMs to everyone on my IPKKND Fan Fiction list, else how will you get to know about it. :)