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Originally posted by: mistyrains

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Needless to say I love your Anjali.

A full circle indeed. Anjali's character, even on the show (barring the recent ups and downs) has so much more to it. She has been a mother, a sister and a friend, too at at times. I think I was almost crying (you are doing it to me, a lot these days:/) when Anjali told him that she hadn't raised him right, all those lines were way to emotional and were highly moving.

Arnav, I feel like crying with him. Losing all his loved ones even when he was almost never at fault. That part where you write about him going back to his room. I wonder if he would ever be at peace there, for reasons so obvious. You hit at all the right places Rae. Terrific chapter!

Originally posted by: Maddy1270

a beautiful portrayal of a very sensible woman... loved the depiction of how much of a mother and support she had been to him... blaming herself for arnav's actions that hurt khushi so, was painful to read! thank god there are no more secrets even if it leaves behind a world of pain!

Originally posted by: Hot.Pink.Heels

I absolutely love your Anjali.

She is more sensible, mature and truly the older Raizada.

And the storm of emotions that you portrayed on both Arnav and Anjali's behalf was brilliant. Each new emotion that was brought into the picture was so apt and fitting!

And Anjali's dialogues were perfect. Truly brilliant.

Originally posted by: emistry

Wow nicely written!!

I guess my quick thing is the story moving forward really slowly... I understand it's all in flashback and Arnav is going through what he has done and lost! But the story is moving a little slow...