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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

What have we done to you? Have we liked you or your stories any less for you to write this...I mean...why? why? WHY?

I hate this update..HATE it...no actually it is so damn sad I had to say it...it's Arnav and Khushi being apart it what I hate 😭

Arnav's impossible dream...

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

*EDITED - The rest is on a restricted blog due to blatant plagiarism of my work.

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Sona

@mistyrains

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Needless to say I love your Anjali.

A full circle indeed. Anjali's character, even on the show (barring the recent ups and downs) has so much more to it. She has been a mother, a sister and a friend, too at at times. I think I was almost crying (you are doing it to me, a lot these days:/) when Anjali told him that she hadn't raised him right, all those lines were way to emotional and were highly moving.

Arnav, I feel like crying with him. Losing all his loved ones even when he was almost never at fault. That part where you write about him going back to his room. I wonder if he would ever be at peace there, for reasons so obvious. You hit at all the right places Rae. Terrific chapter!

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masam

@masam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Part 4 :

The dream. It had me so hooked and gripped!

Shit.

A dream of a bright future, a loving life with his Khushi and the gifts she would have bestowed his existence with would be just that - a dream.

Loved it!

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masam

@masam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Part 5 :

Khushi's Amma is the woman because of whom our Maa committed suicide. Because of whom Maa left us. Because of whom your marriage broke. Because of whom we were thrown out of our own house. Because of whom-Garima is that woman.")

Life had indeed come full circle.

And nothing seemed to have gotten better.

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segad

@segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

i applaud your anjali but her test lies ahead after knowing the "truth"

isn't arnav a bit too old to run to "mommy" after pushing his "wife/love of his life" away?

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: segad
i applaud your anjali but her test lies ahead after knowing the "truth"

isn't arnav a bit too old to run to "mommy" after pushing his "wife/love of his life" away?

Thank You. :)

A question to your question - are you ever too old for that?