FF|Arhi|Th#2 How IPK should've been[Ch14/Sc3 pg122 - Page 33

wonderful, absolutely wonderful

now the hard part begins. how does he make amends?

Hehe, I know...I just wrote what came in my mind when I was reading it...😳 lol

You are right...a loveless marriages I can understand, what I can't understand is betrayal...cheating over their spouses...really? I mean, after marriage, thinking about some one other is forbidden, a sin...I am not saying this only because every religions considers it a sin, but When someone is getting married they are giving the the rights over their heart, body and soul to the person they are getting married to...so If he/she can't give their husband/wife love, so why give that to some one else? Does being in a loveless marriage gives them the right for cheating over their wives/husbands?

So, the logic is:- If someone is in a loveless marriage, so are their wives/husbands...so betrayal,cheating is not an option, If they can't give love to each other...the least that they can do, is to give their my soul and body to her/him? and not to some one else? they should not give their heart,body or soul to anyone else...Don't you agree?

Hey,btw, how could I forget, Garima was younger then Him...If she wasn't married that time, so she must be 20-25 years old...and He must be 45-50...Yaar, how could he fall for some woman,who was so close to his daughter's age? How can Fathers like him fall for girls/woman so young? How can they not see "a daughter" when ever they see a woman close to their daughter's age? how can they lust over her? I mean, I think every good father, when ever sees he sees a young girl/woman, they see his daughter in her/them...Then why didn't he? Why he didn't think about what he will feel if some old Man of his age fell for his daughter?

I do...I do...REALLY? Oh, I am *I-am-going-to-read-it-sitting-on-the-edge-of-the-my-sofa* excited...you don't have to say anything else...main samajh gai...!!! 😃 lol

You don't have to say thank you, but as you said it already so Anytime...😊 but you can't say it again...ok?

But am so glad that I finally did read your FF and I am smitten !!!! Smitzy your writing has smitten me !! Amazing 👏

I loved many things about your FF, story I will not comment too much because I want it to remain uninfluenced by any of the readers. Why? Coz when I started reading this story and got hooked to it, it was completely yours and thats what I want to read 😉

Despite this I will say that you have remained so true to the characters of IPKKND. Arnav's impulsive behavior, Dadi's malicious intentions, Khushi's strength and determination and devotion to her family, Garima's innocence and a lot more all of it...⭐️ I loved how you have not neglected Akash and Payal... 😉 And am happy Anjali is not all over the place here (honestly am really not liking her ways these days)

Now after that your style of writing (the script way) - haven't seen it before but I loved it - totally !!! 👍🏼

Another thing, actually two that caught my attention and raised my respect for you as a reader were how you are so caring about your reader and have provided an english version of every update. Though I speak hindi and don't need english translation but I do understand that for those who are not very comfortable with hindi it would have been very disheartening - so great going there 👏

Next was in the later update Chapter 12 Sc 1, you gave the extracts of the truth version of Dadi and Garima, that was so so thoughtful of you. Since I read the whole FF recently it was very fresh in my mind but I do know it happens so many times that while reading other FF when a reference is made or the current update is based on some previous chapter that were updated few weeks, months back - I literally struggle to keep up and end up reading most of the old updates just to get my understanding on the same page. Trust its not always a welcome thought - it does get annoying... Also I love the frequency of your updates (if I am not wrong they are almost daily). You do know how to keep your audience engaged 😉

All in all great job! Thank you for sharing it on IF and letting us have the pleasure of reading your FF 👏

Oops I didn't know I wrote such a long comments 😆😆😆😆😆

Hopefully this will make his grovel at Khushi's feet and hopefully she will make him work for her forgiveness. After all, for someone who confessed to loving her and not being able to live without her, he allowed his anger and obsession with the past get huge precedence over his love for her.