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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely Letters 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: babli0204

REALISATION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Arnav came to know the truth at long last !!!!!!!!!!!!! WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What would Arnav do now!???????????
Love you Smitzy for this!!!!!!!! Just wish they could have shown somthing like this also in the show!!
THANKS A LOT for the PM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


thanks dear, I'm glad you liked it! 😊 Yeah I wish they had done something like this too.. every person's entry or exit should be clean. What will Arnav do? well what does he do when he gets mad? Get into ASR mode of course 😉

Originally posted by: sohara

Awesome!

So Arnav came to know about the truth of Garima's innocence.His father is the man who lied to her. But I don't think his father is also guilty. Though he was married to Arnav's mom, but he never loved her. When he saw Garima, he fall in love with her.May be it sounds immoral to fall in love with somebody else while you are married.But any way Garima was just an innocent victim there. I wish Arnav understand this and forgive Garima and go back to Khushi.


thanks dear! 😊 That's an interesting take. Yes it is not wrong to fall in love when you aren't in love with anyone else. Technically I don't think it constitutes adultery. However, because he was married and had a family, the gravity of his lies increases manifold. Arnav will do what he's got to do (sorry about the mysterious comment, I don't want to give away the plot of the upcoming scenes) 😉


Originally posted by: spvd

chap 12 scene 1
OMG that was awesome...
Rajeev he never loved Arnav's mom but Daadi told him everything the other way...
and Rajeev loved Khushi's mausi...
poor Garima shes the one who is heart broken and cheated...
and Daadi how could she tell such lies?
just to keep herself right and her son right?
cont soon dear...
hope u will post the next part too in few hours...


Hey there! thank you 😊 Yes you are right.. Garima was the wronged woman yes yes working on the next update.. will put it up soon!
cheers!

Originally posted by: ridizzz

awesome...wonderful...just awesome

loved it
dadi's game over...i am doing a dance over here
wonder what will Arnav do now...waiting for the confrontation...and love to see all the family's reaction for this...


thanks dear 😊 Yeah even I'm really excited to write the scene.. Actually I've written it already, but I'm still not entirely happy with it. So adding some parts to it. hahaha we are all dancing dear 😉
cheers!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ixray

what !!!


no no no !!! why did you just leave it there ???!!!!

please please pretty please update soon !!!

i m on tenterhooks to know what ASR does to his dadi !!!

thx awesome updates. i usually find it hard to read when things are written in the hindi version but for your ff i have completely ignored your english version and just read your original one.

thank you , n love your ff

gitz.


thanks so much gitz (is that your name?? 😲) stay tuned for the next updates. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bhadraprasad

Wow...Amazing update...Secrets are unwrapped...Garima is proven innocent...Can't think of Arnav's rage...Thanks for the PM


Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

awesome update

finally the truth is in front of arnav
waiting to know his reaction


Originally posted by: risat

Freaking awesome update. OMG can't wait for the next update


Originally posted by: angie_g82

HOLY HELL BALLS!!! You are freaking awesome... Loved it...👏



Originally posted by: khusipra

face off... I LOVED IT👏


Originally posted by: meradil

OMG I'm absolutely speechless... this is AMAZING... you my friend have immense talent!


Thank you all for your lovely comments 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ayshaomar

FANTASTIC UPDATE

FINALLY ARNAV KNOWS THE TRUTH
THANKYOU FOR HIS FATHERS DIARY AND NK SUGGESTION TO GO TO THE DUNGEONS WHERE HE FOUND IT
NOW ARNAV WILL KNOW HIS DADI IS A LYING COW, GARIMA WASNT AT FAULT AT ALL, AND KHUSHI DIDNT DESERVE ANYTHING HE HAS PUT HER THROUGH

YAY THIS IS GONNA GET MEGA MEGA INTERESTING CANT WAIT👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏


Originally posted by: nazibah

So we finally got to read what was in the diary...the first diary entries were very father like but then...he started to write about Garima...and I can't help but think of Shyam while reading them...and Dadi is such a !@#$%^!!!!! But I do feel terrible for Arnav...wonder what he'll do next!


Originally posted by: -kitzdoll-

omg i was right...the diary has almost all the answers...wow freaking amazing update dear...gosh arnav knows the truth now...dadi is in big trouble...hehehehe...i could imagine arnav screaming like he did in the series...oh what his next option going to be????cant wait to find out...please update soon...this was a mind blowing update dear n thnx 4da pm...



Thanks dears! I'm glad to see this is becoming exciting for you too as much as it is getting exciting for me to write it. As for Arnav, wait and watch what he does 😉

thanks for your lovely comments!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smitzy


thanks dear! Lai, khushi ki fikar lag gai tumko, Dadi ka band bajte hue nahin dekhna hai tumko? 😆 ok just kidding, abhi to next two updates are going to be super exciting! aage aage dekho hota hai kya darling! grovelling to banta hai boss!

cheers! 😆


Smitzyji chaa Gaye tussi, dhaasu update toh tha , feel god factor bhi tha !
Nahi mujhe Dadi ki koi chinta nahi, unhe toh Hamara ASR chaltey phirte tight kar dega yaar ...am sure you have exciting rendezvous planned lol😆 ...rocking !!!
Haan ...grovelling ke liye cannnooot wait 😛!!! Are you still planning to do khushis monologues as well ? The Arnav one was too good !


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mxk3444

Holy hell I'm so freaking excited for the next update


Originally posted by: Annie12

Very nice update... Super... Cant wait to see arnav daadi confrontation now


Originally posted by: sumali

Yayyy...I knew that the journal will reveal the truth. good, now please write a good confrontation scene between Dadhi and Arnav please. 😃


Originally posted by: pakpearl

o dear...i m shocked by d revelation...wonderful job👏


Originally posted by: ARHI-SKLOVERS

awesome update wow finally Arnav came to knw the truth now he will confront Dadi n it will be Ta-ta bye bye for Dadi i'm so happy



Originally posted by: AllSmiles86

The much awaited agonizing scream when his Dadi's lies let go of his true love! Oh, I cannot wait for this to unravel. Yes, you are right that though the serial gave us the happy marriage of the couple, this truth that you have unraveled oh so slowly is beautiful. I like this track SOOO MUCH BETTER. I like the characters to go through their own revelation and self worth journey. It only makes the destination of their marriage that much sweeter. Beautiful work :)


Thank you all lovelies for such nice and generous comments! I'm glad you're enjoying yourselves! Stay tuned for the next update! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva

*And I'm Back!!
Missed this place a lot!😆

Waits for a few minutes, to just process what happened in the scene! 🤪

Smitzzyyy🤗


Holy Shit!!😲
What a Freaking Awesome Chapter!!⭐️
Loved Loved Loved it!!!❤️
I seriously dont know what to say...

*Starts collecting her thoughts again...


I really liked the diary entries at the start, abt Arnav, Anajli they were very cute!
The dude played cricket with the tutor!! Lol! soo adorable!😊

The entries since he started "stalking" Garima reveal soo much abt the character of the guy!
He was obsessed with her! Damn!

And the thing is, hes so easily & happily saying that he loves G and would leave his family!
Thats just cruel!😡

He married Kavita i.e arranged marriage, fine.
But those 25 years, when he was married, had kids...was it so easy to throw it away!
And on top of it he thinks that if he asks an apology, everything would be ok and he would get what he wants!!! *seriously pissed

Damn, i wish he was alive! I would have killed him!🐷
Hes just like the damn Creep!🤢

Dadi is a complete Bitch!!😡☢️
I mean the knew the f*****g truth! But she chose to twist it around and feed lies to everyone!
She just doesnt want to believe that her son could actually do something like that!
Shes totally screwed, cuz even after 14 yrs she just cant accept the truth & shes still supporting her bloody son!!
I really want to know how her brain is working, cuz im confused!

Thanks for writing the truths told by Grima and Dadi!
What Garima told was truly heart-breaking!🥺
And do i really need to say anything abt Dadi!☢️

I soo feel for Arnav!😭
Its just too much to bear, especially after the complete bag of lies that hav been fed to him!

Im soo waiting for the next chapter!!
God im soo excited!!😃

Arnav-Khushi confrontation gaya bhaad mein!
Arnav-Dadi confrontation is what i want!! *jumps in excitement😃

This is the best chapter yet!
Tops it all!👏

And im pretty sure the next few ones will be even better!😳

PS - I'm soo glad that im back to commenting first on this chapter!
And is still seriously pissed at RSM & Dadi!


Muah
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Hey bhagwan

*sees the length of the comment and faints*

Shwethaaa 🤗 tussi chhaa gaye ji!! Kya comment likha hai! Nai comment kehna iski tauheen hogi.. ye to ANALYSIS post hai boss! 😊

Ab main itna bada reply to nahin likh paungi but let me see ji... early diary entries about kids.. I didn't want to show Arnav's dad as a complete jackass.. There are men who survive love-less marriages but are very very fond of their kids, so just wanted to show him that way.. People shouldn't completely hate him outright.. So ya he is worried about his kids, proud of them, happy about them and sad about them.

When he starts writing about Garima, well I didn't want any doubts to remain in Arnav's mind that Garima was not trying to lure his father as Dadi had told him. If Arnav's dad was the one who started the affair then it needed to be clarified that way.

Dadi being a bitch.. well she thinks her son can't do any wrong.. this mothery feeling is strange yaar, jab hum Maa banenge tabhi samajh aayega humein 😆 You'll get an insight into this evil woman's mind in the next scene.. oh I'd love to see your reactions to that, I have it all planned out. It will be a surprising read for sure! 😉

confrontation to maine promise kiya tha meri jaan! I'll deliver for sure! bas thoda sa intezaar kar lo, update hoga soon! promise!

cheers sweetheart.. and you get the bestest comment award for this lovely feedback 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kbtr

Great!

I am sooo happy he knows the truth, now. I hope there is another entry he reads where Garima shuns his dad and tells him to go back to his family. Now, Arnav what will Arnav do now? He has cooked his goose. He shunned his only love and life. How will he get her back? Ooo! I cannot wait for your next scene. I hope Kushi does not forgive him so easily. After all, he did not trust her. And he is supposed to love her more than life itself? Yeah! Gimme a break!!!
He should really really, really pay for the consequences!!!! (But not for long, eh?) But I really feel Kushi should not forgive him easily. But then Kushi is so loving, she can't bear to see anyone hurt, especially those she loves. But please, at least make him suffer a bit. And I don't mean just an ear splitting cry! I mean mental and emotional suffering. Serves him bloody right for hurting her in that way!!
WHEN ARE THEY GOING TO MEET???? (*In frustration*)
🤢🤢🤢
I hope it's an explosive meeting! (In emotions I mean!)

Please, please try to make your scenes a bit longer. Please think of us poor souls who are dying here to have those two together.
Cannot wait for the next update. Thanks for PMing me.😃
And thanks for writing these scenes. They are great!😃


Hey dear! I'm sorry about the length.. it is difficult writing really longer scenes when I'm updating almost everyday I'll try my best!

We all love the redemption track don't we 😉 no don't worry I won't make him suffer too much.. my FF will stop otherwise hahaha THEY WILL MEET WOMAN!! don't get frustrated.. they'll meet very soon I promise okay? relax now.. breathe! 😛

stay tuned for the next updates 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asr13

Smitzyji chaa Gaye tussi, dhaasu update toh tha , feel god factor bhi tha !
Nahi mujhe Dadi ki koi chinta nahi, unhe toh Hamara ASR chaltey phirte tight kar dega yaar ...am sure you have exciting rendezvous planned lol😆 ...rocking !!!
Haan ...grovelling ke liye cannnooot wait 😛!!! Are you still planning to do khushis monologues as well ? The Arnav one was too good !


hahahaa thank you ji thank you ji 😊

LOL! ASR tight kar dega 😆 ya I'm planning to do Khushi's monologue, but got to time it right.. ayenga ayenga.. pehle Dadi ka band bajao session ho jaye.. ek ek karke sab kaam karenge!

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