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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva

Smitzyyy🤗

That was simply amazing!👏

Tbh...writing sad OS's is much better cause u can put all ur feelings in it!
After i wrote my OS, i tried to think abt diff ideas bt only sad ones came to me!😛 And im pretty sure if i start thinking now only sad ones will come to my mind!😉
And this was just heart-breaking!
i mean the way Arnav acted , felt was just...😭
What a brutal way to kill Khushi yaar...

But it was just Beautifully written!😃


Thanks so much dear!! 😊 I completely understand what you mean by writing sad OS.. it's all about finding your niche area you know.. some people are good at comedy, they can't write anything else as convincingly.. but once you enter the dark genre, there's no stepping back.. moreover, you can make people feel what you want them to feel.

Brutal way to kill Khushi.. hmm ya I guess it was 😛.. i was actually struggling with an apt sideline story, but that is the only thing that seemed good enough that could affect Arnav this way..

I'm actually writing another one right now, based on the latest promo and that is going to be sad too 😆

stay tuned 😉 and thanks again for the lovely comment!

cheers!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very touchy and emotional..sumthin off track. Loved it. Though wud never lyk to see such a scene on screen
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: smitzy


hahahaha oh god.your every comment manages to make me laugh.. oh you poor thing, you absolutely hate shyaam don't you? I can see you almost cheering when I start writing about his angle in my FF story 😊

thanks for the comment!


Haha, I am glad I can do that, Ma Lady...🤗
I dooo, You don't know how MUCH...I crazily HATE him...I am so so In HAte with him... lol
Haha, Oh ya, whenever something bad happens to him, I go all "HA, on your freaking face Shamu..." 🤪 "What you will do now, Haan? Haan?" 😈 lol

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 2189mansi

Very touchy and emotional..sumthin off track. Loved it. Though wud never lyk to see such a scene on screen


I don't think they will show something like this dear.. relax.. it's just a piece of fiction 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
man that was so beautifully sad
finding it hard to type due to the tears
man what happened to him
i guess without khushi he is barely functioning right
why did this have to happen
poor arnav so lost without her
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Painful...but really very beautiful...got choked while reading this...his emotions were so well expressed...loved it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
gaaah!!

that was sad! and i love ramu kaka!!

all of us are going all anxious waiting to know wat will happen. the part where arnav mentioned he drinks soo much so he can meat her.. awww :'(

loved it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow, that was a really well written OneShot!
It was very emtional, great job!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chavvi16

man that was so beautifully sad
finding it hard to type due to the tears
man what happened to him
i guess without khushi he is barely functioning right
why did this have to happen
poor arnav so lost without her


yes indeed arnav is lost without her... thanks for the lovely comment 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello there!

Such a sad and emotional OS. Well written.

I hope some day we see ASR grieving and shedding some tears in memory of Khushi. That would certainly be the day.

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