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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: bong.girl

Hello there!

Such a sad and emotional OS. Well written.

I hope some day we see ASR grieving and shedding some tears in memory of Khushi. That would certainly be the day.


you came!! 😊 🤗

thank you for your comment dear.. yeah I know, Arnav being broken in Khushi's memory would indeed be the day.. gosh we sound like sadists 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Hey! 🤗

Oh I had to come and read. I had promised. 😊 Though you have to forgive me for I haven't read the others. This one seemed short so I thought I would begin with this. You write very well.

Yes, we are sadists. Make him pine for her some more. 😈
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Beautiful but I am in tears! 😭

Brilliantly written and very different 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: bong.girl

Hey! 🤗

Oh I had to come and read. I had promised. 😊 Though you have to forgive me for I haven't read the others. This one seemed short so I thought I would begin with this. You write very well.

Yes, we are sadists. Make him pine for her some more. 😈


aha! promise you did 😊

If you want to see him pine, I suggest you read the long FF I've written.. we are just getting to the good part now 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Very nice OS. 😛

Well written. Very sad 😕

PM me when you write more 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: BigIPKKNDFan

Very nice OS. 😛

Well written. Very sad 😕

PM me when you write more 😛


thanks!

Sure will do 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
that was depressing but splendidly written!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: christmas

that was depressing but splendidly written!


Thank you dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
A very beautiful OS. Somehow Arnav is like that bottle of whisky-- shattered and then again broomed together. Khushi's unexpected, horrifying death had its turmoil in the worst, saddening condition possible.
Ramu Kaka. The only witness to the destruction, loneliness.

Great work.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
OMG!! this os made me cry!!

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