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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was so sad, very well written though.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was very touching i have tears in my eyes
thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😭I am crying reading Arnav's state of mind and behavior. Hate Shyamu for being so stupid and crazy! This may be a one shot but do continue and make Arnav strong so that he can beat the crap out of Shyamu.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dis is emotional; but beautiful!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It has kind of theater touch...isnt it?...like middle age?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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God, Ma Lady that was beautifully written, and That was a really sad one...😭
Ahhh...Mr.Snakewa is really a...a...ya, any word, in any language doesn't justice to his evilness...Yaar, Haat dho ke para hai phiche...Not only in IPKKND but also in OS,SS,FF...Iski toh...!!! 🤬 lol

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Posted: 12 years ago
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well...today i rerealised i m n emotional fool...i felt so bad for arnav reading d story but dats a big hats off to you...i cud actually picturise helpless arnav in front of me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: tv_watcher

well...today i rerealised i m n emotional fool...i felt so bad for arnav reading d story but dats a big hats off to you...i cud actually picturise helpless arnav in front of me...


even the best of us become emotional fools at some juncture in life.. nothing to be upset about.. thank you for your lovely words 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

God, Ma Lady that was beautifully written, and That was a really sad one...😭

Ahhh...Mr.Snakewa is really a...a...ya, any word, in any language doesn't justice to his evilness...Yaar, Haat dho ke para hai phiche...Not only in IPKKND but also in OS,SS,FF...Iski toh...!!! 🤬 lol


hahahaha oh god.your every comment manages to make me laugh.. oh you poor thing, you absolutely hate shyaam don't you? I can see you almost cheering when I start writing about his angle in my FF story 😊

thanks for the comment!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sun_shine_girl

Shyam killed Khushi!
Your OS brought tears in my eyes.
I so wish that the Arnav in your story is rescued by someone, another Khushi, maybe?


I don't have any intentions of dragging this onto the next chapter.. but thanks for commenting 😊

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