OS: Arshi : Delirious

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Tia.0

@Tia.0

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Absolutely amazing piece of writing... Very gripping and poignant...

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boreddamsel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Girl.. hats off! Brilliant!

I have goosebumps..

Brilliant!

Yes, write when you are upset.. write when you are happy.

Write what you are feeling a strong emotion.. that is what brings out the best in you!

Great job once again!

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durba

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Amazing and brilliant stuff 😊

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Oh god, you made me cry. Why did you write such a sad story?

I couldn't bear my Arnav in that horrible state.And why Khushi died? They are soul mates. They can not live without each other.

The story reminds me of Devdas.

Such an emotional OS! My heart is still aching for my beloved Arnav and Khushi.

Brilliant writing!

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S.B.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

So emotional...awesome work

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smitzy

@smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: boreddamsel
Girl.. hats off! Brilliant!
I have goosebumps..

Brilliant!

Yes, write when you are upset.. write when you are happy.
Write what you are feeling a strong emotion.. that is what brings out the best in you!

Great job once again!

Thank you for your lovely words! You're absolutely right.. one should right when feeling a strong emotion, that's what makes the fic more honest and from the heart

thanks again for stopping by :)

cheers

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smitzy

@smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: sohara
Oh god, you made me cry. Why did you write such a sad story?
I couldn't bear my Arnav in that horrible state.And why Khushi died? They are soul mates. They can not live without each other.
The story reminds me of Devdas.
Such an emotional OS! My heart is still aching for my beloved Arnav and Khushi.
Brilliant writing!

😊

I apologize to have made you sad.. but thank you for your lovely comment.. Devdas? haha you're not the first one to remark that!

cheers!

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beyonddarkness

@beyonddarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

very nice and emotional
😭

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smitzy

@smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: kbtr
OMG! Speechless!

That's the smallest comment I've seen you make *EVER* 😆

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Swetha

@ipkkndfanforeva

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Smitzyyy🤗

That was simply amazing!👏

Tbh...writing sad OS's is much better cause u can put all ur feelings in it!
After i wrote my OS, i tried to think abt diff ideas bt only sad ones came to me!😛
And im pretty sure if i start thinking now only sad ones will come to my mind!😉

And this was just heart-breaking!
i mean the way Arnav acted , felt was just...😭

What a brutal way to kill Khushi yaar...

But it was just Beautifully written!😃

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