*Completed* Th#2 ArHi SS:Unconditional

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Malvika18

@Malvika18

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#781

Beautiful update Zehra.. Seriously! Hats off! 👏

Firstly, I really feel for Khushi, I mean she's still daunted by the darkness and somehow its even more compelling for Arnav to take a step ahead!. I had goosebumps reading this!

Such a brilliant update! Very well written, and thanks for clearing out that stuff. :)

Continue soon! Thanks xoxo

Quote

rashmi

@morning_dews

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#782

here comes the comment for chapter 6😆

this was very beautifully written Zehra...

not even for a second i felt am reading some SS or FF or those words were from someones' point of view, it was quite emotional...😭

did understood the points you had written...for me this was the best update in the forums which can make you emotional and and and...

i have no words left to tell...THIS WAS THE BEST UPDATE...😳

as far as SS is concerned, yep Khushi's POV was necessary and i knw the footfalls will win one day and she will reach the light successfully...😊

thank you so much for such an fabulous update dear, you proved once again you are one of the bestest writer in IF :))

Edited by rashmi24sya - 13 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

GoGreen

@GoGreen

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#783

According to my gutter mind Asr success will be when Khushi discribes pain he gave into plessure he is giving and she want more.

Okay me running before chappals and rotten tomatoes on my way.

Sumu runs from here.

Quote

Paru

@paru_rox

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#784

This is one of THE BEST chapters I have read in both Destroyed & Unconditional ... You Aalsi have some real talent my friend 👏

Hugs 🤗

Quote

phillips_2909

@phillips_2909

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#785

darling its an awesome ff
i dont want to miss
plz do pm me n dont deny me..

Quote

ekiholo

@ekiholo

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#786

hey just read ur ss...loved it...will plz pm me when u update nxt!!

Quote

gowri1712

@gowri1712

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#787

loved it completely ZEHRA
When are you updating next?
I'm waiting

Quote

maith

@maith

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#788

waiting 4 d next part

Quote

sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#789

Khushi is responding, finally, albeit slowly...

Even in this stage she thought about her child and decided to move towards light...

Loved this progress.

Quote

garlic

@garlic

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#790

Oh ! my what a writer you are?Not taking any names yet you wrote every thing so well that happened in DESTROYED and UNCONDITIONAL...awesome👏

Quote

1 ... 77 78 79 80 81 ... 89

Related Topics

The Unending Dream OS [Completed]

In Every Birth, Find Me The night air in Mathura was thick with monsoon rains. In her small room lit only by a flickering diya, Radhika drifted...

Expand ▼

Moh-Maya ~ MayRa OS [Completed]

Whispers of Maya The glass towers of Delhi glittered under the cold moonlight, but inside the corner office of Ruan Publications, darkness...

Expand ▼

Pyaar Ya Rebound? ~ Rumya SS [Completed]

Intro: Rudra fakes a relationship with his best friend Soumya to impress glamorous Bhavya-but ends up falling for the one girl who truly knew...

Expand ▼

ArShi OS : Pyaar Ka Naghma {Completed}

[NOCOPY] P Y A A R. K A. N A G H M A. "Friends?" a little boy extended his hand towards a girl which she responded. They smiled and embraced...

Expand ▼

Student of the Year: When Love Lost Its Way [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @JasmineRahul in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: The alternative version of the...

Expand ▼

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".

Completed Th#2 ArHi SS:Unconditional - Page 79

Related Topics

Explore Topics

*Completed* Th#2 ArHi SS:Unconditional - Page 79

Related Topics

Explore Topics

Completed Th#2 ArHi SS:Unconditional - Page 79