*Completed* Th#2 ArHi SS:Unconditional

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#801

oh dear lord that was so painful
beautifully written , you almost had me crying by the end
I am desperate for some light to enter the poor girls life

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coronapsyche

@coronapsyche

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#802

Zehra,Fantastic Update👏
I was waiting for Khushi's POV!

OK- bud have some questions-
1. That soothing touch- was it Aman's?? Or the doctors??
2. - the black liquid- was it for her nambness??
3. The motherly hug- it was when Arnav huged her seeing her bruises,right??

I feel like Aman has more to offer in this SS!

Update soon,plss😃

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sonia jangotra

@abraxos

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#803

when will you update😭

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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#804

thanks for the pm .

Beautifully written Khushi's POV

I do hope that the 'footsteps' as Khushi perceives them manages to make her cross than thin line from darkness to light!

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Aliya_hzsn

@Aliya_hzsn

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#805

WAITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ive never been this addicted!!!!!!!!!!!!

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tamanna

@Tamaru

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#806

Awesome I really likd it pls accept my buddy request😊<3<3

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yusam

@yusam

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#807

UPDATEEE SOOON ZEHRAAA... IM STALKING LOL..! IM SOO ADDICTD TO THIS..

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star12

@star12

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#808

this is such a meaningful update!!!1

its good that Kushi understands that she is pregnant...i jope that will give herr some hope yo live...

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smitzy

@smitzy

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#809

beautifully written. Subtle yet absolutely to the point. She was in a delusional state. I love the metaphor of lights you have used.

really brilliant 👏. Looking forward to more!

cheers!

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laddoo598

@laddoo598

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#810

She lives, and she is fighting hard to come back for the sake of her baby. Zehra, it was great to finally see things form Khushi's POV. Just make her come back soon. Loved the way you wrote this chapter, abstract on surface but still so much depth hidden in each sentence.