*Completed* Th#2 ArHi SS:Unconditional

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sushan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#761

You are a great writer very well written

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asdfjkl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#762

Reading from Khushi's POV was so painful, but much needed. Her reactions to the events were tastefully written and left room for some interpretation for the reader while you were pointing towards the general direction. Amazing job

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kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#763

wow awsuuum update dear...really loving it n thnx 4da pm dear...

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umama shahid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#764

loved khushi's pov...thanx for the clarifications...update soon

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Manal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#765

Zehra...this chapter gave me goosebumps...it was beyond brilliant.

This has to be the best you have ever written. Loved how this entire chapter belonged to Khushi. It started of with pain...a lot of pain...and now slowly...very slowly the pain is deteriorating...a sense of tranquility is cloaking her life...there is still a ray of hope...a purpose to live...to breathe...there is a life inside her...

Khushi has been through a lot...it is going to take a lot of time and a lot of love to heal the scars of hate...but I believe she will get to the light...very soon...

You couldn't have written this more beautifully than you did.

This chapter simply defined your talent Zehra...BRAVO!

Thanks for the PM.

Manal <3