OS: Revenge tale!!!!!!! part 2 updated&noteon pg 6 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
It is just beautiful... ❤️i hope if in actual also if kriya come back dey should show like dis...

dis is wat happens in reality i can relate to kriya's emotions d way she trusted him more dan herself nd even after knowing his mistake though after a lot of time she forgave him... bcoz its her pure nd innocent love,

but reyaansh can't forgive himself he lost his trust in himself yes it really do happens d way his confidence broke made me cry nd yup d ending is indeed fr some instant was correct bcoz ven rey has already shattered nd lost himself he doesn't hav courage remain in him nd he left some unspoken feelings hanging...

but deetha yeh humare kriyaansh hai at least dey deserve to b together after so many hardships plzz unite dem na...

so its a request plzz continue nd convert dis os in ss...

thanx fr pm...😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Awesome os ..!

Loved it ..!

Have no words deetha.. M speechless..

pain of love visible in both heart...

nice ending...

i wish they are together...

os is fab dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
beautiful os...

The feeling of guilt is above all... rey is going through so much pain...

it can be seen clearly..but he was wrong
how can he forget his love that to so easily...

i liked the ending... but i dnt want to end this way..
after all its my kriyaansh.. they are made for each other...

mujhe iske 1st part ke liye pm nhi mila tha... but chalega

meow nd deethu.. big hug to u

hope u write next part too...

update soon

thnx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Fabulous work guyz 👏...
It was just Mind Blowing 😃...
The way u described Kria's insecurities and Rey's guilt was Superb 👍🏼...
Loved it ❤️...
Hope u continue it for a Happy ending 😳...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Really speechless. There is no word how to describe ur work. Plz happy ending kardo.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
SPEECHLESS ...😃

d guilt which rey was feeling was clearly visible...
Amazing team work...👏

luved it😊

plzzz ek happy ending de do is os ko...
Edited by cool_star14 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
SPEECHLESS👏...bt whud definately say dat was an awesome 1...so plz 1 more post n gave it a happy ending..plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
i like the end
but i want happy ending
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
it is said...love stories neva have a happy ending...coz dey neva end...

i m just speechless...was reading d whole update wid a aww...

just awestruck...d feelings...emotions...love...care..friendship...and GUILT...aww...it ws beautiful yet simple...!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
ok i ll comment abt it in 2 parts
1st 1 z 4 meow!!
u did a fab job meow!!i loved it n lyk always i appreciate ur writing!!u rock grl!!

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