OS: Revenge tale!!!!!!! part 2 updated&noteon pg 6

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

nw the 2nd part by deetha

1st i ll cmnt on the beginning.the ain,the shock it ws depicted so beautifully!!loved it 2 the core n i understood ur emos clearly!

bt the end ws brutal!if i write anythng depressng,ppl feel lyk killing me n here u r gvng sucha sad end?god save u nw!!lolx...well no jhootis 4m my side bt ending it in guilt?well i thnk thr shud b an additional part in it tat kriya brings him bck!!anyways nicely written

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shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

this ia awwssuummm... Jst read both parts nd i thnk ending is perfect...:) whatevr going in shw i thnk he deserve this guilt... He don't deserve her luv... Actually she trustd him a lott but he broke her trust... Trust is lyk mirror whch broke once...hurts lottt to that person... Thanks 4 pm

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Shreya

@krasforever

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

awesome work snigdha n deetha...👏

but u guys made me cry😭...

the pain through which both r going was clearly visible...it really touched my heart...

thanx for converting it into a ss...

n if possible, let Kria assume that Rey loves taani n then Rey will make her understand that he only loves her not taani...just a suggestion...

n update real soon...😊

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risha.dance

@risha.dance

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

GUILT! Really it is the most painful thing in the world!! This OS is amazing but continue it naa! KriYaansh are better together :)

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

god dis abrupt ending juzz killed my hopes..!!

cont dis n giov it a happy ending plzz..!!

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kuhu bhatta

@kuhu_Arsha

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

deethu jst one word MINDBOLOWING,,😃👏

i m speechless,,,,,,it was out of d wrld,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,i m loving it

😃

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senoritashweta

@senoritashweta

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

jutte?? no ways...it was beautifull..!!

u tow..2gether r jus superb..! dynamic duo !!

an ya...luved d end...i totally agree wid guilt being d most horrible feeling...we cnt even forgive ourselves 4 it...i jus luved each an every word of it...kria's innocence...her trust...gosh had tears in my eyes aftr reading it..!!

hats off !!😊

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shemli

@ShemliArsha

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

i just loved it...i just felt their guilt n pain...
actually the ending was perfect for the current situation...
but still i want KRIYAANSH to be together forever...
loved it to the core👏

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Sreya Roy

@sreya19roy

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Guilt is undoubtedly the most painful feeling n it is hell lot of difficult to overcome that feeling 😔

Awesomeee update guys...Beautifully written n exceptionally well penned down emotions as well 😊

The ending was very realistic n if it was a real life story it wud have seemed perfect from an audience's pov...bt u know at the end of the day, it is a fiction n ppl do want to see happy endings which doesn't always happen in real life...so, I wud really like u to give it a proper happy ending 😊