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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

unres... Guilt... *sigh... The most painful feeling... I guess even stronger than ny kinda hatred or jealousy... N dats exactly wat was here... They still loved each other hell badly bt the guilt which Rey had brought a wall b/w them... Applause to both of u deethu n meow... U guys did a fab job... Ur team work really rocked... Awesome update... 😃

Edited by akanksha_arsha - 13 years ago

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Preeti ArsHa

@preeti_kreya

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Have no words deetha.. M speechless.. Its was out of the world.. Bt yaa i wish tum happy ending deti :'(

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aishasully

@aishasully

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

wooow deethha nyc upddate yaar am loving it man but yara aisi ending zarurat thi i wish if kriya cums bk 2 d3 it dosnt end dazt way lol but luv the update it was super cooll luv u keep riting luv u maa

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

NOTE:

okies mujhe pata lag raha hai ki reaction kya honi wali hai...if sweetu has no probs i can continue it into ss and give on two more parts

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Misha

@Born2Dance

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: deetha
[font color="#006600"]NOTE:

okies mujhe pata lag raha hai ki reaction kya honi wali hai...if sweetu has no probs i can continue it into ss and give on two more parts[/font]

Di r u serious???

Yippee...!!!

U no wat???

I jus luv u n meow Di fr dis...🤗

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Payal

@sweetangelpayal

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

mujhe iska pm nai mila

yeh to cheating hain

but fir bhi main cheating nahi karungi..i'l comment coz yeh kriyaansh ke baare mein hain...

wad do i say...i loved loved loved it...both d parts were fab...itni khushi hui mujhe rey ko aise dekhkar! baatcutter ke alawa kisi aur ke baare mein socha na usne!! bad boy!!

d endin was too gud 👏

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: deetha
NOTE:

okies mujhe pata lag raha hai ki reaction kya honi wali hai...if sweetu has no probs i can continue it into ss and give on two more parts

Problem n me?! NOOO FREAKYY WAY!!*Kiya's style*

I will be the most happiest person to read infact..🤣🤣

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kriyansh19

@kriyansh19

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Upade was awsome ..!
Bt little confuse abt d ending ..!
U would had given a happy ending ..!

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Omg... Its exceptionally amazing!!
I guess if kria wud come bk.. Exactly dis wud happen..

N m glad tht u dint mk kria forgive rey immediately...
Evryone says if kria comes bk rey shud apologise n thn kriyaansh togethr...
I believe in wht i read in ur update.. Its not dat easy.. She sacrificed her own self jus hor rey so dat he cud move on in life.. She trusted him more dan him n wht he did.. He moved on,n dat too so easily.its not easy to forget n forgive...
Finally rey realised wht bad he has done to kriya...
Yes i was in tears readin d update bt em happy coz wht kriya did(though she cudnt control herself frm coming closer to rey forlong) was right..
I loved d update:)
It was emotional n as always kriyaansh essence..bhr bhr k tha...!!
N plz continue it as a ss plz..
N vry bad.. U dint pm me:(:(
Nt fair.. Bt koi na

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raina

@--RAINA--

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

awsome update...
Lykd it...
Agar happy ending hota to aur acha lagta...
waise mene abhi deetha ka note pada to kya m samjh lun ki yaha happy ending hone wala h?
Update soon

Edited by kitttu1309. - 13 years ago