OS: Revenge tale!!!!!!! part 2 updated&noteon pg 6 - Page 3

Originally posted by: krasforever

awesome concept yaar...

d3 has become a torture now a days...i really hate the rey which they r showing now...

your updates really acts as a medicines for Kriyanshians...

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finally guys i completed the last part...as promised im posting now

and haa if u didnt get anything feel free to ask...hope i matched sweetu aka meows 1st part..hopes jyaada honge i know ..

i tried my best to make it good...

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He first refused to open as he didn't want to meet anyone ….the guilt he was feeling was eating him up like hell….he felt so conscious even in the presense of swayam , Sharon and even Vicky who was his best buddy since he started remembering the things in childhood…..he just want to bein the dark…and let the dark destroy him completely ..with which he had filled HER life and worst part she don't now it…..

How could u rey???? Aise kaise karsakta hai tu??? Wo teri pehli pyaar thi…aur tu itni aasani se use bholne laga?????? And top of it taani ke saath……….

He banged his hand on the floor thinking the closeness he shared with taani in the past 1 month….he closed his eyes feeling disgusted of himself…..but the door bell rang again……

"rey!!!!!!aap ho kya???"he heard a angelic voice…..his head shot up….whats she doing here????and in this tym…its late in the evening…and how will I face her…..

"rey I know aap andar ho I heard the sounds…..plzz jaldi kholo bahar andera hai dar lag raha hai…"she said seeing around and shouted

He stood ...she will fear a lot if she was alone outside…….so he switched on the lights and opened the door……..as soon as he opened he saw her with the same cute face filled with fear and her eyes glancing around the dark front of his house…….and finally she turned around ……..she saw him and gave a heartysmile……….

Something pricked his heart when he saw that innocent smile…….but he tried a lot to maintain himself…..

Rey: tu yahan???? Wo bhi iss tym mei???

He managed to speak up……

Kriya: wo…rey andar aasakti hun kya??? Dar lag raha hai

She said glancing around……he quickly led her in closing the door back of him…she walked in and looked at the house she was impressed with his choice……

He stood behind her 6 feet away and looked at her…..after a long silence she asked….

Kriya: aapne aisa kyun kiya rey???

His heart stopped for a second and and started beating fast…..she came to know what he did in the past one month…..he felt even if she kills him now he would accept it happily coz this guilt is tearing his soul into pieces…..as she turned he looked down…….

Kriya: aap teen din se college kyun nahi aarahe ho aur kisika calls bhi lift nahi kar rahe ho aur upar se jab se mai aayi tab se aap mujhe ignore kar rahe ho….

She said lyk a baby pouting but pain of being away from him clear in her voice………he looked at her…..but soon looked away controlling his tears……

Kriya: rey I m really sorry …..mujhe waisa karna nahi chahiye tha…but mai kya karti…..maa ne bola ki agar mai footloose mei participate karoon toh mujhe aapko aur dance ko hamesha keliye chodna padega…..

He looked at her shocked……he knew she didn't do anything wrong .it was cleared on the day of her arrival but he doesn't know the actual reason…….he silently prayed to her in heart to not tell the whole truth as he was feared how big that guilt will be…..but to his fate she continued..

Kriya: sorry rey mujhe aisa karna nahi chahiye tha……I took u for granted par mai apni frnds ko chod nahi sakti yeh jaan ne ke baad ki agar uss din hum perform nahi kar paaye toh who hamesha hamesha keliye self confidence kho denge…..isiliye mujhe unhe choose karna pada…..isiliye maine bola ki I will choose swayam over u….par I really didn't mean in the other way….i really loved u rey…mujhe pata hai aap mujhse bohut gussa ho isiliye aap mujhe ignore kar rahe ho….im really sorry rey..mujhe laga aap move on nahi karoge….aur mai kabhi wapas nahi aaungi…par universe ji mujhe aapse door nahi rakh paaye ….aur mai wapas aagayi …..rey mujhse baat bhi nahi karoge???

She asked him looking at him……..she was craving for his those talks which used to drech her in his love and take her to a totally different world……

He gulped hard knowing the truth…..he couldn't feel her love????? She felt his love and trusted him beyond limits and hurt her to core……..but he???? he was feeling very hard to stand before her…..silence took place for 10 mins…..he never looked at her…….

After a long silence he got startled when her soft palm touched his cheek…..she turned his fae towards her……

He looked at her……tears filled her eyes and were on verge of making its way out……

Kriya: mere taraf dekhna bhi nahi chahte ho????

She choked……as a drop made its way out……he quickly wiped it and hugged her with all his strength……she too responded…….dug her head in his chest and cried the tears out…….he cried to the worst…..his eyes burned….after sometym she wiped her tears and rested her head on his chest feeling safe…….back to home!!!!! She smiled and closed her eyes taking in the moment……..but he was just crying hif guilt out……he looked at her and her smile……..his heart bleeded seeing the heavenly smile…….

Rey: kria…….

He said as he started shivering….."hmmm"came her reply…she was peacefully lying in his arms….never knowing whats ahead in her way…….

Rey: kria actually……….i m really sorry kria……..really sorry…….ek toh tujhe samaj nahi paaya aur tumhare jaane ke baad doosri ladki ke bare mei sochne laga wo bhi itni short tym mei………

"hmm"came another reply……..he was shocked….he looked at her……she was already lost in her own world…….he was just looking at her when he felt her stiffen……..he too stiffened knowing whats gonna happen…..she snap opened her eyes when she finally realised what she heard………she looked at him with fear ……she wants it to be a lie……..but he closed his eys and said what all happened in her absence……..he felt her grip loosen…….he looked at her……she was shocked……….numb…expressionless…..no tears……he didn't expect this…..he expected high toned scoldings a,shouts, hrd punches…..but she released herself from his embrace her eyes never leaving his….she took two steps back in disbelief …….she looked down digesting his words……and finally looked up with teary eyes

Rey: I m really sorry kria…..

A tear rolled down her cheek ….he moved front to wipe it but she stepped back looking down …….and wiped her tear…he stopped and looked at her…tears rolled down his eyes……he lost her TRUST!!!! He cried over his own fate and hated himself to core for what he did……

She looked up blinking her tears away…….and faked a smile and spoke…….

Kria: mai aapkeliye bohut khush hun rey….aapko aapki asli py…….she bit her lip to control herself and spoke……pyaar milgayi…..

She said with a wide smile filled with pain……his heart crushed more knowing that she called someone his love and replaced herself ……..for the first tym he felt her pain and cried hard……she rushed towards the door but stopped as soon as she opened the door……he took secs to take in the situation and rushed to her……she was standing outside the door …..he stood before her chanting sorry and forgive me when he noticed the fear in her eyes,,,,…..she was looking at the dark surroundings….

Rey: kria im really……

She folded her hands and gripped her hands tight and ran into the dark before he completed…she went away in the dark ….she preffered dark than me……I broke her to the core……he fell on his knees crying his heart out………

(huys im not focusing on the smriti and kriya past etc etc…..just imagine har part keliye ek sochna its too difficult I just want to explain kriyaansh……but if u want that to then tell me I will edit…..kk….feel free to tell ur opinion…..sadist hun par itna nahi :P )

Next day he decided to go to college and talk to her…or atleast try to support her coz he knew she was broken totally……kya mai sach mei use pyaar karta hun ya phir mai acting kar raha hun…????? He asked himself……yeah he lost trust on himself…..SHE trusted him more than he trusted himselfloosing her TRUST made him loose him self confidence and all……he got ready and lead towards the college……he entered the gate when he saw her……just lyk before getting down from auto checking her watch and rushing before she becomes late…..he wondered why she was runningas she was early to the college….he parked his bike and ran after her to apologise

As he followed her he saw her enter the rehearsal hall……..then it clicked ….ahh.!!!!!! inter college competition…..even though they won footloose they wanna participate and take it to higher levels……

Rey too entered…..everyone hugged him and swicky scolded him and Sharon punched him him twice …..he just gave a small smile……he finally looked at her….she was composing herself with a lot of difficulty he could say that……he cursed him for being the reason….all looked at the two….

Everyday whenever rey used to come kriya would make sure to wish a "hi"to him even though in return she gets a faint smile…….but total she plainly ignored him…..her behaviour changed….swaym went to her and hugged her sideways….all kept themselves busy not to make her conscious…

Swayam: kya hua????

Swayam whispered to her……..in return she gave abig smile and said with a short laugh*fake*

Kriya: mujhe kya hua??? Tumhe dekho mujhe hi bhi nahi bola ab tak……wo qsn mujhe poochna hai…

Sw: oohh…..sorry,…….hi …

He said waving his hand…..which made her laugh …she thanked him in her heart for giving those few secs of laugh …which she needed…all started discussing and decided a group couple dance….

Sw: acha toh fixed..nil and simmi,vicky neha, bharat vishaka,rinni amar….mai aur..sh.sharon….

All "oo"ed when swaron blushed slightly…..

Sw: and rey aur…..

He was cut……

Kriya: swayam……mai dance nahi kar rahi hun…….kal raat ko table lag gayi and my ankle is paining……

Rey looked down…..he knew why she was ding this……..swayam asked in concern if its paining a lot but she said she just wanna take rest and she was fine……

Kriya: rey ki partner taani ban sakti haina……..think…..locker room mei kuch kaam hai mai abhi aayi….

Saying this she left.i m really sorry kria….i hate myself…his heart cried silently…

Rey: guys I quit….mujhe nahi karna….

All looked at him shocked…..

Sw: yeh tu kya bol raha hai….??? We will change it hum group performance denge….

Rey: swayam I quit…. Not this competition… I QUIT DANCE…..and I mean it…….

He said looking away leaving all shocked to core…he moved and sat on the chair….thinking abt how to apologise her…..

All: ARE U MAD!!!!!!!!

All after coming to reality shouted and started their bak bak…..rey shouted…

Rey: guys plzz…its my own decision…and plzz guys dnt talk abt that…..

Sh: are out of senses rey??? U are

Rey: Sharon please yaar……..i dnt wanna talk abt it..

He said and left ….all were confused……..days passed…they noticed the distance b/w kriyaansh..even when they fought they didn't feel this much distance..one day in canteen all were sitting ….rey was trying hard to tell sorry to her but she ignored him thinking he had really moved on……so she should never come in his way

Rey: kriya tumhareliye kuch????? Pastry?????

He asked hoping she would atleast talk to him……all looked at them ….

Kria: thanks rey par no need mujhe kuch khane ka man nahi…

She said with a small smile and turned away and started talking with neha……neha too joined her still *confused* all looked at her and rey…..his face fell down..acter 2 mins Vicky stood up…

Vic: mai kagu keliye burger lane jaa raha hun kisiko kuch chahiye???

Kr: Vicky…..do samosa???

Vicky looked at rey….infact everyone……who was looking at kriya……tears started forming…….

Vicky: huh?????hmm……..kk

He said and left frowing…..the gang was totally confused by their behaviour….

The bell rang but they have no classes in the after noon session which they used for reharsals

All were sitting when kriya said she had some work and left…….swayam followed her…..when she was in the corridor he caught her by arm……she looked back at him confused because of the harsh grip of him on her….

Kria: kya hua swayam????*confused*

Sw: what the hell is going on kria??? Care to explain….???rey hume ignore karne ki koshish kar raha hai aur jab tere paas aata hai u ignore him….ye kya khel khel rahe ho kya????

Kria: swayam….plzz…..its all finished now…….leave abt it….

Sw: khatam??? I can see the love for each others eyes for gods sake dammit…

Kria: swayam its all finished…just ended…neither I feel for him nor he does for me now….mujhe jaane doge????

Swayam left her arm…..she rushed away….he knew she was crying …but aisa kya hua??? Maine socha wapas aagayi toh sab theek hoga….

After 15 mins all were in rehearsal hall…..rey was pulled along .he would just sit and watch…..and kria ….hmm……she does the same too….all were practising ……te decided a couple dance each…….swaron on rumba etc etc…..all were decided by swarons song was not yet perfect……rey stood up and started to go towards the door when kriya went to Sharon to decide some phenomenal steps…and both stopped in their tracks as swayam played a track….their last dance played before their eyes……….as both were opposite to each other they ended up looking at each other…….the pain of separation was visible in their eyes……rey took the lead and came to her and took her hands in his……..all were shocked but stood quite to see whats gonna happen…….they danced lyk none are watching them …….all saw them with awe with each and every move every lift rey did……and every jump kria did totally trusting him their feet moved along with sink…..eyes never leaving the other…….finally they ended in each others embrace…….he slowly whispered "SORRY KRIA"

With that she came back to senses and slowly pulled away and walked out silently…….he looked at her back helplessly….he looked down as tears formed before anyone can open their mouth he walked out slowly..with each step he tookthe pain increased he just rushed into the FE to cry his heart out but as soon as he turned around he saw her in the same state as his……he walked to her when she climbed up to leave……..he caught her hands and took her palms into his she looked at him…….he slowly went on his knees and looked down closing his eyes and gripped her hand tight and was silent…..she knew what he was going through…..but it was not easy for her too to digest the fact that he moved so closely to another girl ……….they remained in the position for almost which seemed lyk forever…..before she flung into his arms hugging him tight and crying her heart out….he dug his face in her hair and closed his eyes and gripped her as tight as he could……..finally she stopped and they parted away,…..

Rey: do u really think I love u kriya???

Her head shot up…….he was frustrated she could get that but y???????/ she dnt know it…….she looked at him confused…….

Rey: tumhe sach mei lagta hai???? He asked pain clear in his voice……..

Kriya: haan rey I belive that…I trust u….u love me a lot…….

Rey: but I don't believe me……..move on kriya he said and left FE …leaving her shocked……...she forgave him its more than enough for him……he lost belief in himself……he rushed to his house where he broke down totally……..

so kaisa laga??????

yes this is the end...which i wanted to be lyk this...

sorry sweetu no tym so seedha post kar rahi hun...but this is what i felt it is ri8...if u felt annoyed or anything let me know...

abrupt ending?????lemme know abt that too...

ps: i gave this end coz guilt is the most painful thing in the world forgiving urself is very very difficult...just implemented my thoughts

jhoota maarna hai????? okies im getting ready to run...

(jhoota maarne ka ri8 tujhe bhi hai sweetu)

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