OS: Revenge tale!!!!!!! part 2 updated&noteon pg 6

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Chaithra_Arsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awwseme awesme awesme Deethu...nice concept.plsss continoue...

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raina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

amazing update
waiting 4 d nxt part
update soon

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Deetha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Chaithra_Arsha
Awwseme awesme awesme Deethu...nice concept.plsss continoue...

thank u...and haa all credit for this concept goes to meow😳

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REDWINE

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

deeta i hate u

pucho why...?

are pucho na

chalo main hi pata deti...

aapke saare work...awesome blossom hote hai...

but u stopped at mid...

aapko hume tadpane main kya maza aatahai...

ab plz update soon...

plz plz plz

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can call me Mrs Enrique Iglesias

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

res

Unres

Just one word perfect

I wonder how he forgot her

The guilt is worth it he cannot for get the true love of his life

Must say greatly written and presented

Edited by enrique - 12 years ago

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a_happy_2000

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Deetha and Snigdha .. great start ..

But .. a comment .. please don't mind .. also please don't be angry .. I had to comment on what I felt when I read it ..

I don't think Kria was a character who would confess so easily to Rey .. that to infront of all ..

Couldn't digest it ..

I know in our other FFs we mould her as we want ..

But .. this was like a D3 continuation .. so felt that ..

Please no hard feelings ...

Maybe there is some surprise which is in store for us .. so you did that ..

Waiting for the next part ..

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Deetha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: a_happy_2000
Deetha and Snigdha .. great start ..
But .. a comment .. please don't mind .. also please don't be angry .. I had to comment on what I felt when I read it ..

I don't think Kria was a character who would confess so easily to Rey .. that to infront of all ..
Couldn't digest it ..
I know in our other FFs we mould her as we want ..
But .. this was like a D3 continuation .. so felt that ..

Please no hard feelings ...

Maybe there is some surprise which is in store for us .. so you did that ..

Waiting for the next part ..

thanks a lot for this lamba cmnt...

and i expected this qsn...

actually its an os and we wanted the confession part to be quickly done

so that we can go on with the story...

yeah ri8 kriya would but for story we did it lyk dat...

but hope u like it ...😳

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Deetha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: enrique
res
Unres
Just one word perfect

I wonder how he forgot her

The guilt is worth it he cannot for get the true love of his life

Must say greatly written and presented

thanks a lot dear...

sweetu is very talented u know...im scared to post the next part...kyun ki wo maine likha tha...

mumma!!!!!!!!

kharab na hojaye🤢

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Deetha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Kriti_rox
deeta i hate u
pucho why...?

are pucho na

chalo main hi pata deti...

aapke saare work...awesome blossom hote hai...

but u stopped at mid...

aapko hume tadpane main kya maza aatahai...

ab plz update soon...

plz plz plz

haha thanks a lot for the complement...

i think ur aware my name...sadist...

hehe...living upto my image...

rep ki dhyaan toh rakhni padegi ri8...

yeah second part on the way...

as said will be in 2- 3 hrs😉