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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: damonelena
It was truly beautiful.

The pain, and then the happiness was portrayed beautifully.

It was wonderful reading a different concept for Swaron.

Thanks a ton for the comment Sneha

Edited by Rutu - 13 years ago

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

rutu...i luv dis os sooo mch...a grand piece of writing it is...swaron in dis condition nd dier emotions...u potrayd dem wit acte perfection yaar...swayam being sch a carin hsbnd...sharon cravin fr a child...i hve noo wrds...hve read dis a long long tym ago bt cudnt rply cuz i didnt hav a acnt earlier...i read dis os vry often...nd evn though i hve read it lyk a hundred tyms i nvr get bored...swayam wntin to hve 6 babies..sharon's pain..it ws absolutely awesmeee...nd d bench scene...

"After a while Sharon felt something soft on the backside of her hand. She opened her eyes to see a baby pink flower resting on her hand, it was light weighted and due to the breeze landed up on her hand. She gently caressed the petals feeling the softness of it. With her other hand she placed the flower on her palm and just when she was about to close her palm, due to the breeze it escaped from her hand, and for the situation to be more of ironical, it reminded of their baby. She twitched a bit on seeing that but Swayam was fast enough to get hold of the flower and placing it on her palm he closed her fist. This gesture of Swayam made her realized that no matter what their destiny has planned for them, he will try his level best to make destiny change its plan and promised that he would always be there by her side."

it ws sooo ironical...where do u gt dese ideas frm...do wrte mre...it absolute a treat reading ur writins...nd once again...A BRILLIANT OS...👏👏

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: swaronehad3
hey nice 1 👏
i jus love ur writngs 😃
thnx 4 pm 😊
keep writng such ossum os 👍🏼

Thanks for the comment😃

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Luvsd3
awesome os rutu...this os has everything the emotion ,the pain, guilt, and in the end the happiness...beautifully written luvd it!!

Thanks for the comment Himani

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: like.no.other
oh hw beautiful!! 😳

Originally posted by: TANHA_H

trueeely BEautiful writing...+ Emotion 👏

Originally posted by: frankyfio
simply loved it

Originally posted by: mili1987
wow..what a beautiful OS👏...really loved it😊

Originally posted by: beeny
it's simply nice
loved d OS

Originally posted by: Karen_sharon
Can't describe it it was beautiful...😃😃😃

Thanks for the comment people😃

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: luvSwaron4ever
amazing OS...the love swaron have for each other is depicted so beautifully...so pure...so many emotions...they are each other support

Thanks a ton for the comment 😳

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Srishti_TanHa
Rutu, that was an awesome OS. I love sad OS's that end on a happy note. And the concept was awesome. It really devastating when that happens. Beautifully penned Rutu. <3

Thank you for the PM

Thanks for the comment Srishti, well sad writing do have a lasting effect on our minds so tried with one.

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: tanzz15
Wow!!!it was just amazing!!! the emotions were beautifully portrayed...you suceeded in expressing their pain perfeclty...loved it from the core...huggs bud...

Tania thanks for the comment and yeah hugs to you too🤗

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: swaronilicious
you are the best when it comes with us connecting to the os i could reaaly feel their pain
the best part for me was when the petal flies away from sharon and swayam catches it . It was👏

pls pm me whenever you write something on SwaRon

Thanks for the comment dear😳

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