SwaRon OS: Having you by my side - Page 8

Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRon

Beutifully written...perfect mixture of feelings...culd feel sharons pain when she lost her first child...the irony about the flower was very well written...loved swayams idea of footloose team...n ending was perfect.

Originally posted by: tashu20

omg swayam want footloose team😆😆

it was beautiful & heart touching...loved it...!!!!!

Originally posted by: drooler

beautifully written,awesome OS

loved every bit of it

sharon's agony and pain is very well depicted

thanks for the PM

one of your best works👍🏼

Originally posted by: --Rumeli--

dis is awesome Rutu!!u wrote it so beautifully dat i cud really read the pain they are goin through!loved the fact dat swayam stood beside her all the while..no matter what he didnt lose hopes,sharon re-living the pain for the loss was best describes,the trauma dey passed through still swayam hid his grief to make her alright was just amazing..n dey found happiness again!
Dis is totally one of the best pieces I have ever read on swaRon!!

Originally posted by: ---Priya---

Rutu awesome OS!!!👏

swayama wanted to make a team for footloose competition 😆

but the next moment when i got to know that SwaRon lost their child felt really bad

the pain both of them went through, you have written it so well

and again the last part was so cute..

a happy family 😳

Originally posted by: an_skyfighter

okay seriously u made me cry :')

u r bad ahahahaha *just kidding)

but this is by far the best os i have ever read and i think it we remain the best for me

with all these rumors or wht ever

after reading this

i just love u who wrote this and i love swaron

thankyou so much

thanks a ton 😊

Originally posted by: tannu_swayam

rutu...i luv dis os sooo mch...a grand piece of writing it is...swaron in dis condition nd dier emotions...u potrayd dem wit acte perfection yaar...swayam being sch a carin hsbnd...sharon cravin fr a child...i hve noo wrds...hve read dis a long long tym ago bt cudnt rply cuz i didnt hav a acnt earlier...i read dis os vry often...nd evn though i hve read it lyk a hundred tyms i nvr get bored...swayam wntin to hve 6 babies..sharon's pain..it ws absolutely awesmeee...nd d bench scene...

"After a while Sharon felt something soft on the backside of her hand. She opened her eyes to see a baby pink flower resting on her hand, it was light weighted and due to the breeze landed up on her hand. She gently caressed the petals feeling the softness of it. With her other hand she placed the flower on her palm and just when she was about to close her palm, due to the breeze it escaped from her hand, and for the situation to be more of ironical, it reminded of their baby. She twitched a bit on seeing that but Swayam was fast enough to get hold of the flower and placing it on her palm he closed her fist. This gesture of Swayam made her realized that no matter what their destiny has planned for them, he will try his level best to make destiny change its plan and promised that he would always be there by her side."

it ws sooo ironical...where do u gt dese ideas frm...do wrte mre...it absolute a treat reading ur writins...nd once again...A BRILLIANT OS...👏👏

Originally posted by: Rutu

Done with replying to everyone, I had forgotten to reply to the comments earlier🤔

Anyways thank you for the response

Originally posted by: Ananya.SwaRon

reserved**

unres***

firstly i beg you for an apology! i took so long to unres' the comment..you know i had my exams so was not able to come to IF.

the OS started on a lighter note as i read Sharon laughing hard i thought it must be some lame joke cracked by Swayam but what i read further was more intriguing. my face grew pale as i read that she couldn't bear a child. then i realized that it was something serious. the aftermath of sharon's loss was really heart-wrenching it made my heart sink. i liked the fact that neither swayam nor sharon blamed each other for the loss in-spite considered themselves individually to be the one at fault. the silence which occurred between them spoke out in volumes that how much empty and lonely they were feeling. but you made up for the whole gloominess in the end..

still adorning the last part where the baby's little fingers wrapped around the huge ones..awww😳!!!!!!!!

loved the OS! SIMPLY AWESOME!

P.S: sorry again.