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Posted: 19 years ago
#41
Part-16..:Kumud cant belive:garv?what did u say?how cud u say this?
K cries.G is very sad:promise if u truly luv me
K:garv…no..
K cries. G:won't u fulfil my last dream.plz promise
K hesistates.
G:its my last wish
K weeps.Slowly she holds G's arm:promose
K cant control her tears.Suddenly she realizes that G's arm on her arm is still.K looks at G.
G is still with eyes open.
K:garv..
K removes her arm from him.His arm fall down.
K screams:garvvvvvv

G's funeral is over.K is lost.

Kashish goes 2 kshitij's house.His mom Naina opens the door:yes
K:I'm kshitij's classmate
N:I'm his mom
K:hello aunty
She touches N's feet
N:hey no need beta
K smiles.
K:shall I meet kshitij?
N:kshitij has gone out.i'l take tea 4 u
K:no thanks aunty
N:no,u've 2 as u've cum here 4 the 1st time
N goes 2 kitchen.K enters ks's room.
K sees a diary.She opens it.She was shocked 2 see Kumud's photos in it.
Its written 'I luv u kumud' by Kshitij.
K is shocked:so kshitij neglected me bcoz of his feelings 4 kumud?


Later after reaching home K phones Ks:I'm kashish
Ks:kashish?
K:I'd cum 2 ur house
Ks is surprised. Ks:I'm in my car now
K:I want 2 see u
Ks is speechless as he's not interested
K:don't worry,its not 2 desturb u confessing my luv


Ks meets Kash.
K:do u luv kumud?
Ks is shocked.
K:u mayb thinkin how I no about it.leave it.that's not imp now.why don't u confess ur luv 2 her
Ks:its too late.she loves another man
K:its not late.did'nt u no that kumud's lover garv is no more?
Ks is shocked:what?
K:he died due 2 an accident.kumud is shattered.he needs sum1 as a comfort.kshitij,u need 2 go 2 her.she needs u now
Ks is stunned

WHAT WILL KSHITIJ DO?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
nice part 👏
plz cont soon.... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
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Very emotional 😭 😭 Fantastic.
Plz cont. soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
jasmine dear first of all me very sorry that i could not comment earlier...woh darasal main zara busy ho gayi thi..sorry for that... 😭 this story is tooo damn good yaar.. i totally loved it... it is totally ROCKING.....keep up the good work....... 👏
ab please jaldi se kshitij kumud ko ek karo aur let kashish realize that uska sachcha pyaar sujal hain kshitij nahi.......... 😉 i'am sorry once again for the late comments but i hope you understand......... 😃
please continue soon...me will be waiting... 😊 😛 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
Part-17..Kumud is in the temple.she is dull.K is shocked 2 see kshitij infront of the temple
K:kshitij?
Ks:I'd gone 2 ur house.they said u r here
K:God is my only comfort.otherwise I wud've died
Ks:god sends different ppl 2 world 2 comfort us.do u no that?so god wud've sent sum1 2 comfort u
K:never
Ks:u feel so.mayb there is a friend 4 u 2 comfort
K looks at his face.
Ks:myself
K is surprised.
Ks:why not?u cant belive?but I promise that I'l b ur gud friend
Ks goes.K is confused.

K's mom Gayatri is feeling difficult 2 breath.K is upset.Does'nt no what 2 do.suddenly she remembers Ks's words.
K phones up Ks:hello
Ks:kumud?
K:plz cum 2 my house.its urgent.i need ur help
Ks:sure

ks goes there & helps K 2 take G 2 the hospital.K is tensed.
Ks:don't worry kumud.ur mom wil b alright.sure
G gets ok.K is relived.
Ks:did'nt I tell u that she'l b alright?
K smiles
After Ks goes,G tells K:what a nice boy
K smiles.

Later K phones Ks:hi kshitij,I'm..
Ks:kumud,I can recognize ur voice even during sleep
K is dull
Ks is now aware of what he said.he tries 2 change the topic:how is gayatri aunty?
K:fine.actually I dunno how 2 thanku.no one was there at home.that time its only bcoz of u,my mom is well now
Ks:there is no need 2 b thankful & all.ok then bye
K:wait..i did'nt finish
Ks:tell,anything imp?
K:I agree with u now that god has sent me a friend 2 comfort me
ks is extremely happy.K smiles & keeps the ph down.

Sujal is driving the car.He sees a crowd.He gets down & see.He was shocked 2 see kashish lying on the road with blood covered all over the body.Sum1 says:I think this girl is no more
S cant believe:noooooooo
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
omg...........ths was a nice part.....n hope suajl saves kash...i m sure he will
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
jasmine dear a toooo goodddddddddd part..... really very very nice......simply wonderfull.. 👏 the part was indeed very coollllllllll............ 👏
it is good that kshitij & kumud are getting back together... 😉
but now what has happened to kashish.. 😭 please kashish ko kuch hone mat dena......... 😃
dear u know what i think my guess is that now sujal will take care of kashish aur phir during sujal kashish will come close to each other......... 😉
plz continue soon..........i can't wait longer...... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Jasmine...It's damn good yaar. I'm really loving ur fan-fics. Plzzzzzzzzzzz cont./ soon...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
jasmine please continue soon.... 😊 😛 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
Part-18..Sujal:no,kashish cant die
He touches her:she's alive
s is relieved
S takes her 2 hospital.
DR:who r u 2 the patient?only then we can do the surgery
S:i..i'm her husband

The surgery takes place.Dr:u r a lucky husband.ur wife is well now
S is very happy:thanku dR

After sum time,kashish opens her eyes.
K:where is this?
DR:after a heavy accident,u hav been brought here.now u r ok.its ur husband's prayer
K:husband?
Dr:ya.he was so nervous.poor man
K is confused:who brought me here as wife?
K:DR,shall I meet my husband?
Dr:why not?I'l call him here
Dr goes out & tells sujal:ur wife wants 2 see u.i told her that her husband only brought her here at the right time
s is nervous:what'l b her reaction knowing that I lied 2 the dr that she's my wife?
S goes inside.K is surprised:sujal sir?
S:sorry,I'd 2 lie that I'm ur husband 2 do the surgery
K smiles:why r u telling me sorry?I must thanku 4 saving my life.thanks a lot sir
K's eyes r full of tears.
S smiles:hey kashish..whats this?wipe ur tears
she keeps crying.S wipes her tears.
s:I'm sorry
K smiles:u r always telling sorry unnecessarily
S-K smile.

Kshitij-kumud become really gud friends & they share precious moments.
Kashish is at home.ks phones her:hi kashish,how r u?
K:I'm taking rest after a big accident
ks is shocked:accident?
K:ya Ks:then I'm coming there 2 see u

Ks goes there.Ks:I cant believe this
K smiles:whats ur news.i no that u wont call me unless there is sum pretty news
ks smiles:ya,kumudhas got sum changes.she started smiling.started behaving like b4
K smiles:that's why I told u 2 b a gud friend 2 her.i new that ur influence wil make her smile again
Ks smiles.K:u no who saved me?sujal sir.he lied 2 the dR that I'm his wife 2 hav the surgery.if he was'nt there,I wud'nt hav there in this life 2day.i'm really gr8ful 2 him
Ks is surprised.Ks thinks:I cant hide that truth anymore.i've 2 tell kashish abt sujal sir's luv 4 her

WILL KSHIIiJ TELL THAT 2 KASHISH?WHAT'L B HER REACTION?

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