Barsaat-Sujal,Kashish,Kshitij,Kumud - Page 6

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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
jasmine dear really a very damn well written part.. i liked it very much... it was toooo gooddddddddddddddddddddddddd........... 👏
tho sujal told the doctor that kashish is his wife.....haannnnnnnnn.......i'am sure yeh baat bohat jald such hogi........ 😉 it is good that kshitij & kumud have become good friends....... 😃 now i hope kshitij tells kashish that sujal loves her.....mazaa aayega..me waiting to see kashish's reaction........ 😉
plz continue soon.......... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
Part-19:

Kshitij:do u no how much sujal cares 4 u?how much he luvs u?
Kashish is shocked:what?
Ks:yes kashish.sujal sir loves u from the beginning.he was heartbroken wen he realized that u don't luv him.how can u not see the heart of such a nice person?
K cant belive.
Ks:do u no what true luv is?u think deeply about it.then u'l realize that ur true luv is sujal sir.if u become late 2 realise that,u'l regret a lot
K is stunned. K thinks abt her moments with S.

Kash is waiting 4 bus outside.sHe sees S's car going.She runs after it:sujal sir
S stops it:kashish?
K:I was waiting 4 bus 2 my house
S:get inside I'l drop u
K:no thanku
S:cum on kashish
K smiles & gets inside the car.S is driving.K is looking at S & smiling.
K:is this not my luv?
IT rains heavily.
K:wow,rain.i luv rain
S stops the car.K gets down & dances in the rain.S smiles.
K:cum sir,dance
S:no,I cant dance
K:I'l not leave u unless u dance with me
K holds S's hand.S is stunned.They look at each other.
Then they both dance.They 4get themselves & become very intimate.Song:pyar aaya {barsaat}
Both of then hug.It was really passionate.S becomes conscious.S moves away.K is upset.He becomes very emotional:I'm sorry kashish.i was wrong
K:no u were right
K goes closer & keeps her arms on his face:bcoz I luv u
S is shocked:what?
K:I luv u like u luv me
S is surprised. K smiles.They both hug again.

Sujal-kash's engagement party.S is in costly shervani.K is in decorated red choli.S-K exchange ring.Then they put music:aria RAI ARAI{DIL TO PAAGAL HAI}
S-k dance.ks has worn jeans & white shining t-shirt.Kumud is in tight black outfit with a pony hair style.
Ks-k look at each other.Ks cums near her:wil u dance with me?
K hesitates.Ks extends his arm with hope.K catches his arm & they dance 2gether.

Ks with a mike:in this wonderful occasion filled with luv,I wud like 2 inform every1 a sweet news
All r eager 2 no. Ks:I want 2 confess that I luv kumud
All r surprised.K is shocked.ks cums near Ks:kumud,wil u marry me?
K is stunned

WHAT'L B KUMUD'S REPLY?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
jasmine dear a toooo goodddddd part... the part was really very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... 👏
me so damn happy that sujal , kashish are together...& their engagement is taking place... yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
👏 tho finally kshitij is proposing to kumud that's nice....... 😃 & my guess is that kumud will say yes for the marriage.......... 😉 anyway you please continue soon...me waiting for the next part.... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
hey jasmine very very nice parts.... 👏 😛
really gr8 gng... 👏
plz cont soon.... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55
jasmine please continue soon..me waiting eagerly to read the next part...😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
YES...YES...YES...that would be my answer If ever kshitij asks me... 😳

👏
Jasmine...woowwwwwwwwwwwwww..ur fan-fic...is simply superb...plz cont. soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
Part-20..:Kumud slaps him.All r shocked.
K cries & runs away.sujal-kashish r upset.Tears fall down from kshitij's eyes.
S:kshitij,don't b upset.everything wil b alright.if ur luv is true,favour cums 2 u.i'm telling this from my experience
Kashish:like I was late 2 realise who my true luv is,kumudwil also realize who her true luv is
Ks is silent & goes.All r sad.

Kumud's dad Suryaban:I wont blame kshitij.after knowing abt pritvi also,he's willing 2 accept u.he is gr8
Gayatri:yes.kshitij is a nice boy
Kumud is irritated:stop it
S:r u planning 2 remain unmarried 4ever?
K:why cant I?
S:u r taking such stupid decision 4 garv.but don't 4get that garv wanted u 2 marry & liv happily.
K is stunned
G:kshitij loves u very much.
K weeps & goes 2 her room.
She sees garv's face on mirror.K smiles with tears:garv!
G:did u 4get that u promised me that u wont remain single?garv is a nice guy.i'm sure that u'l b happy in his arms
K weeps:garv..
G is vanished.K gets irritated & she throws the powder tin on the mirror & it gets cracked
She was shocked 2 see garv there.K gets irritated:why did u cum here?
K turns back.G catches her hand.K is angry:how dare u?
G starts singing:luv tujhe..{Barsaat}
After K realizes that it was her illusion.K is confused:whats happening 2 me?

Kumud reaches a hill where ks was standing.she shouts him:kshitij!
Ks luks at her. K:I came her 2 tell u not 2 wait 4 me.bcoz I don't luv u
Ks:u ask ur heart whether u luv me or not
K is speechless.Ks pulls her closer 2 him & sings:humko sirf tumse pyar hai{Barsaat}
K 4gets herself & she sings along with him.K hugs him with tears:yes,I too luv u
ks smiles.

5 yrs leap ..

4yr old Sur at school.Seeing sum ppl she runs 2 them:papa…mama…
Sur's parents hug her.

WHO R THEY?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
nice...i guess dat da parents r kumud n kshitji...gud job...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
jasmine dear a very gooddd part....keep up the good work......i always enjoy reading your stories... 👏 it's nice that kumud has atlast accepted her love for kshitij....... 😃 par no sujal-kashish in it except for the first scene..... 😭
please continue soon..me will be waiting eagerly for you to continue....... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
👏 Brilliant, Fantastic..I'm glad kumud realises her luv.
plzz cont. soon

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