Barsaat-Sujal,Kashish,Kshitij,Kumud - Page 10

Created

Last reply

Replies

95

Views

22.5k

Users

11

Likes

1

Frequent Posters

jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#91
Part-29..:Kshitij cums 2 the hospital with kumud
Sujal:kumud's operation shud b done now
S-K r surprised.

Kumud's operation is done.
DR:operation is successful.kumud wil b avle 2 see like b4
Sujal,kashish,kshitij smile.
Ks:but I want 2 no with whose eyes kumud is going 2 see
Dr is dull:they did'nt tell u that?
Ks luks at S-K.their eyes r full of tears
Dr:its their daughter Sur's eyes
Ks us shocked:what?Sur..
Sujal-kash cry.
S:we lost Sur
S tells everything.
Ks weeps:I cant believe how this happened 2 nice ppl like u.Sur..she was such nice girl.she & kumud loved each other very much
S:sur loved kumud so much that she presented kumud her most valuable thing

Sur's funeral is done.

After a few days,Kumud got ready 2 open her eyes.K opens her eyes.she was very happy 2 see sujal,kashish,kshitij
K:where is sur?I want 2 see her.she was the one who made me 4get my pain of loss
Sujal-kash weep.Kashish bursts into tears.
K:what happened?
Kash:Sur left us
K:what?
Ks:Sur is no more.its with her eyes now u see things
K is shocked:Surrrrrrr!nooooooooo
K cries loudly.

K is discharged from the hospital.K weeps looking at Sur's framed photo:Sur,1st u gave me happiness.u made me smile.but now u gave pain along with happiness.u gave my eyesight back.but u left me 4ever
Ks cums:sur went away after giving the most precious thing 2 u
K weeps.

After 2 yrs.A party. Kshitij,kumud with Prateek.
Ks:2day is our son prateek's b'day.also another cute girl's 1st b'day.that b'day girl wil cum soon
Sujal-kashish cum with their cute baby girl.
Ks:this us our sweet baby girl.Her name is Sur
Al smile.They celebrate Prateek's & Sur's b'day 2gether

END


Rajeev_gr8 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#92
Fantastic ending 👏
m happy that sujal & kashish got their sur back 😊
-De.De- thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 19 years ago
#93
👏
👏
👏
👏
👏
👏
👏
👏
👏
👏
👏
👏
Fantatic, brilliant, maervellous ending.
group_1223 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#94
awwwwwwwwn.....that was sweet...i felt soo bad 4 sur....poor kid.....but gud job ...dat was an awesome story..keep it up....gud job...
Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#95
jasmine dear tooo good , very very nice , fantastistic , cool endind dear..i liked it very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
👏
sorry i couldn't comment all these days..actually was caught up with some work..sorry......... 😭
ab this story was totally perfect , it was very different from your other stories...you keep up the good work......... 👍🏼
now all i can say is this story was toooooooo gooddddddddddddddd...............ab please jaldi se ek aur fanfic start karna...me will be waiting... 😛
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
GK-KK~ROCKS thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#96
Superb ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish

6 years ago

Kassir ...Sujal&Kashish...Part 28 - Pg 33

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".