Barsaat-Sujal,Kashish,Kshitij,Kumud

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Sujal:The favourite lecturer of college
students.He loves his
brilliant student Kashish

Kashish:She is a reserved middleclass college
girl who is in a
dreamworld.she loves Kshitij

Kshitij Oberoi:A cool college boy.Very rich.He loves Kumud

Kumud Kapoor:A smart middleclass
college girl who
believes in luv.She loves Garv
& is dreaming abt
a life with him

Garv Sachdev:Kumud's bf & he
loves her very much.He is
reserved & is an engineer
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Posted: 19 years ago
#2
jasmine dear me so happy that you started a new fanfiction me was waiting for such a long time for you to start a new fanfic... 😃this stories new concept is really very cool...... 👏 are wah sujal loves kashish , kashish love kshitij , kshitij loves kumud , kumud loves garv.....wah wah wah really very intresting..keep up the good work... 👏 i liked reading the first part very much.. 😊 😛 😃 but it was toooo small....... 😭 plz continue soon me eagerly waiting for the next part... 😊 😛 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#3
great starting!!!!! keep it up..........
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Posted: 19 years ago
#4
Part-1..Early morning.Kumud gets up from the bed.She
looks at the clock:oh!its going 2 b 8 o' clock?
K phones Garv:namaskar Mr.Garv Sachdev
G:kumud?
K:ya,I'm kumud.u did'nt expect my call?
G:actually I expected.bcoz I new that u'l phone & scold
me
K:its almost 8.then why did;nt u call & wake me up?don't
u no that u r my alarm 2 get up in the morning
G laughs:sorry dear.ok,u go & get ready fast.otherwise
u'l b late 2 college
K:ya.actually I don't mind bunking class.but 2day I've 2
reach at the right time as 1st hour is my fav sir's
class
G:Mr.Sujal?
K:ya,who else?he is the only lecturer who does'nt make
us sleep.i luv his class.he's like a friend 2 every1

Kshitij is standing at the gate.Kashish is coming 2 the
college.K is happy 2 see Ks there.
K:hi kshitij
Ks:hi kashish
K:r u waiting 4 any1?
Ks hesitates 2 tell.He thinks:its better not 2 tell her
that I'm waiting 4 kumud
Ks:no,lets go 2 class 2gether
K smiles.They walk 2gether
K says in her mind:I no that u were waiting 4 me
Ks says in his mind:kumud,why r u not coming?
K enters the class.
When Ks was about 2 enter the class,sumbody calls him
from behind:Kshitij!
Ks turns back.It was Sujal.Ks smiles:Gud morning sir
S:gud morning.how is ur music fest's rehearsal going?
Ks:its going well sir
S:gud.this time also u've 2 win.u r our college's
hope.so this time,plz b serious in ur work & concentrate
very less in other masti activities
Ks smiles.

The bell rings.All r sitting inside.Kashish is looking at
Kshitij.Suddenly kumud enters the class.she
sits near Ks.Ks is happy. Ks:cute
K:wht? Ks:u luk very beautiful in 2day's pinl salwar
kameez
K:I don't need ur compliment
Ks is embarrassed.Sujal enters the class.Every1 wishes
him.

S: 2day I'm going 2 teach u about Shakespeare.As u all
no Shakespeare has created very eternal luv stories.he
proved that luv never dies.
S's eyes r on kashish
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Posted: 19 years ago
#5
nice sotry..i m sooo glad like oderz dat u finally started a new sujal kash story.....not even a luv triangle...its sumthin like a hexagon...lol.....keep it up jasmine....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#6
Part-2..Sujal:I'm going 2 teach u about the strong luv
of
Othello & Desdimona.Othello
was so much in luv with
desdimona that he was very
possessive abt her.kumud,what
do u say abt it?
Kumud thinks:what wil I say abt
that boring person's
luv?
K:If Othello loves desdimona
very much,very nice
Kshitij's eyes r on K.Sujal
notices that:kshitij,r u here?
KS:ya. Su:then giv
ur view
Ks:luv is always beautiful.i
admire the ppl who luv
Kashish:Sir,I've an objection.I
cant digest othello's
luv.His possessiveness does'nt
prove that he loves her
deeply.True luv is
trust,possessiveness has no place in
it
Su:Amazing!this is the way,u
shud share ur views.kashish is
the only person who gave
serious opinion.she thinks
deeply abt it while all others
take it silly.well done
kashish
Kash:thanku sir
Ks tells
himself:ya,kashish is the only studious person.is
that the only reason why sujal
sir is so fond of her?
Kumud who hears it:I don't
think so.i think sumthing is
there btw them
Ks smiles.

After the class,they r going 2
diff sides.Sujallooks at Kashish.Kash
looks at kshitij.Ks looks at
kumud.
IT rains. Kashish:wow!rain!
K dances in the rain.Su
smiles.Ks also dances in the
rain.
Ks:kumud,why don't u cum &
dance with me?
Ku:dance with u?never!
Ks says in his mind:kumud,1
day,u'l dance with me
Ku thinks:If garv is not
there,the rain is not
romantic.then why shud I dance
in rain?
Ks dreams of dancing with
Ku in rain while kashish
dreams of dancing with
Ks.Sujal dreams of dancing with
kashish in rain.Kumud dreams of
dancing with Garv.
song:barsaat…{barsat}

During interval students r
talking abt next day's prom
nite preparations.
Ks:kumud,what r u
planning 2 wear 4 prom nite?
Ku:I'vent decided
Ks:make quick
decisions.who'l b ur partner?
Ku:partner is necessary
Ks:but on prom nite,every1
wil find one
Ku:so what?I don't care.its so
boring
Ku goes out.Ks thinks:why
kumud is like this?I've 2
struggle a lot 2 win her heart

Kashish:who is ur partner
kshitij?
Ks:lets see 2morrow,actually
til now I'vent got any1
K thinks:I'm always ready 4
that

Ks goes out.he sees
Sujal. Ks:Sir..
Su:ya kshitij Ks:what r
u planning 2 wear 4 the
promnite?
Su laughs:prom nite is 4
students,not 4 teachers like me
Ks:cum on sir.all the
teachers enjoy it.then why do u
hesitate.i'm sure that u r the
hottest among the
teachers.kashish wil b
impressed
Su:what? Ks:I no ur
softcorner 2wards kashish,sumthing
romantic?
Su is shy:no,I'm fond of her
as she's the best student of
class
Ks:Oh really?sir,unlike
other teachers u r like our
friend.that's why I'm free
with u.i can read ur
mind.however u try 2 hide,ur
feelings 4 kashish wil cum
out
Ks goes.Su smiles
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Posted: 19 years ago
#7

hey i just catch after long time...its really good...keep it up

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Posted: 19 years ago
#8
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OMG......Jasmine, It's fantastic...plzzzzzzzzzz cont. soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice story jasmine...plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#10
Part-3
Garv & kumud in the car.G is driving.K's eyes r on G.

G:why r u looking at me like this?
K is shy:how cum u no that?u were driving
G:ya,I'm driving.but my eyes r also on u
Both laugh.
K:I missed u very much wen there was rain.all the lovers
of college were dancing 2gether
G smiles & holds her arm:tho there is no rain now,we can
dance as rain is not needed 4 lovers 2 dance
K:what?
G stops the car.G-K cum out
G takes her in his arms
K:garv,u r naughty
G:how can't I b naughty with my naughty gf
Both laugh.They sing & dance with a sweet romantic
touch.song:ye jo dil hai..{barsaat}
Then they get inside the car.G:how was it?
K:it was cool.i realy enjoyed it
G smiles. K:2morrow is our prom nite
G:wow! K:but I don't want 2 go
G:why?how can u miss such a thrilling nite?
K:u r not there,then why shud I?I'l b chosen 2 hav
another stupid partner
G:cum on kumud.don't b silly.partner 4 1 day is ok.he's
not going 2 b ur partner 4ever.I'l b ur life partner
K smiles.

Kshitij thinks lying on the bed:kumud,2morrow I'l b ur
partner.i'l b ur partner 4 the whole life

Next day,Kshitij wears white shirt,black ant & overcoat.
Ks looks at the mirror:u luk hot gorgeous.kumud wil b
impressed
HE hears a voice from behind:I'm already impressed
He turns back & is surprised 2 see K there with a
smile.She has worn a tight glittering white frock.K cums
closer 2 him & her fingers go thru his face.Ks is
excited.Ks closes his eyes.then opens.K is vanished.
Ks:where is kumud?she has gone.oh!it was only my illusion

Ks feels embarrassed.

then he goes 2 Sujal's house.Su is not ready yet
Ks:u did'nt get ready?
Su:actually I'm confused what 2 wear
Ks:but I'm not confused.i no what suits u

Su is dressing inside the room.Ks is waiting outside.Su
cums out.
Ks:wow!I just cant believe this.u r much hotter than we
students
Su smiles:kshitij,ur complement is too much
Ks:no sir.i'm absolutely right.otherwise also,girls r
crazy abt u.u cant count the no:of the female students
who r mad abt u.how many luv letters u've got from u.u r
really hot.that's why,girls r not missing ur class.i
wish I get ur glamour.then my luv wil also b fulfilled
Su:ur luv?kumud?
Ks is speechless. Su:I no that.during class,u never
listen,but always observe kumud
Ks smiles:why shud I hide from a friendly sir like u?u r
right.anyways,2day all the girls wil fall 4 u again
neglecting young hotties like us
Su smiles: but the girl whom I luv …
Ks:so finally u admitted that u r in luv
Su is shy. Ks:ur luv wil b fulfilled soon.i've felt that
kashish likes u very much.but it'l take sum time 4 her 2
admit it as she is always dreaming abt her studies
Su smiles

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