Barsaat-Sujal,Kashish,Kshitij,Kumud - Page 7

jasmine dear please jaldi se continue karo.. 😃

Part-21:They r sujal & kashish.
Sur:papa,u'd promised that u'l take me 2 amusement park
S:papa remembers it beta,wel go 2day itself
K:Sur is completely papa's beti,whatever she tells,u agree.usually teachers like u make kids obey u.but here sur makes u obey her
S laughs:that's a fun
K smiles.

S-K go & enjoy in amusement park with Sur.
They r back in the car.
S:this place is so different
K:ya.after moving away from Bombay,I feel strange


A party.Kshitij cums in a glittering outfit:hi,I've invited u all here 2 attend a lovely person's b'day party.
The smiling Kumud cums down from the staircase with matching jewellery.She was holding the small fingers of a small cute boy
Ks:that person is none other than our dearest son Prateek
All smile.Ks & K wish P:happy b'day beta
They both kiss him & he kisses them back.
K holds P's hand & cuts the cake.K-ks puts their own cake piece int P's mouth.
ks-K sing happy b'day song

Ks gives a gift 2 P:this is papa's gift
P:thanku papa.but where is mama' gift?I'm angry with u
K smiles:how can I 4get 2 giv gift 2 my pyari son?
K also gifts him.
P:thanku mama
K:welcum beta

Ks seems 2 b upset.Kumud:what happened kshitij?u luk sad
Ks:there is a lot of work 2 do in office & its urgent 2 go 2 Delhi 4 meeting.i dunno what 2 do
K:its ok kshitij.i'l attend the meeting
Ks:but kumud..
K:don't worry.i'l manage everything.u take care of the office
Ks smiles:thanx a lot kumud
K smiles.

Kumud is ready 2 go 2 delhi. Ks:I cud've easily arranged a flight 2 delhi.but u refused
K:my family background is different from urs.i want only a simple life.i'm not used 2 the journey by flight.i'm more comfortable with bus
Ks smiles:as u wish
K:bye kshitij Ks:bye
K turns back & walk.Ks:kumud
K turns back:I'l miss u
K:I'l miss u too

K gets inside the bus.The bus has almost reached delhi.but unexpectedly it meets with an accident

WIL KUMUD DIE?

very nice parts... 👏
gud gng... 👏 dear..
plz cont soon... 😊

Part-22


The bus is crushed heavily.Many of the ppl r taken 2 the hospital.Sujal-kashish car passes by that way.They go near the bodies.They feel unbearable seeing the dead bodies in a pathetic stage.
Sum1 says:this one is not dead
S-K look at that person.they r shocked
K:that's kumud

They take kumud 2 the hospital.
Kashish cries:we r seeing kumud after 5yrs & its in this situation
S is sad:don't worry kashish.nothing wil happen 2 kumud

Dr cums:kumud has overcum the danger
S-K r happy.
Ku:thanku so much Dr
Dr:but…
S:but..?tell DR
Dr:she lost her eyesight
S-K r shocked

Hearing the news of Kumud's bus accident,Kshitij screams:noooooooooo
He goes 2 Delhi.he cud see only the dead bodies.Ks weeps.Naina cums near him with tears.Ks:mama,kumud…
N cries & hugs him.They use sum1 else's dead body which is completely spoiled 4 funeral thinking that its K's.

2 days r passed.
They enter Kumud's room with tears.Dr removes the cloth stuck on on kumud's eyes.
Kshish:kumud,open ur eyes,its ur old friend kashish.Ur fav sujal sir is also with me
K is surprised:kashish-sujal sir?I'm so surprised
K tries 2 open her eyes,but feels difficult,finally she opens.
S-K r tensed.K is stunned:I cant see anything,DR I cant..
Dr:sorry kumud.u wont see anything anymore
K is shocked:noooooooooo
K cries loudly.Kashish weeps & hugs K:don't worry kumud.everything wil b alright

S-K take kumud 2 their house.Sur runs 2 them:who is this?
Kash:this is mama's classmate & ur dad's student too
Sur:this aunty luks so nice
Every1 smiles
S:Sur liked kumud very much
K:Sur?
Kash:Sur is our daughter
K smiles:so sweet
Suddenly she becomes emotional:but I'm so unlucky that I cant see ur sweet kid
S:tell about kshitij.do u hav kids?
K's eyes get filled up with tears

😭
OMG...It's v emotinal part, u made me cry...
Plzz cont. soon jasmine.

jasmine dear first of all sorry me commenting a bit late... 😃 the part was tooo goodd.....simply superb , fantastic...it was really nice....you keep up the good work........ 👏 see i told u sujal & kashish would save kumud see i was right........ 😉 dear but what is this kumud has lost her eyes.... 😭 & kshitij thinks kumud is dead....... 😭 please unite kumud kshitij soon... 😉
plz post the next part soon...me will be waiting... 😛

Part-23:Sujal:my college students r crazy of kshitij;the cool rockstar
Kashish:Earlier u used 2 perform.then why did u stop?
Kumud:after my son's b'th,I cud'nt find time 4 it
Kash:wow!u've a son?whats his name?
K:yes.Prateek
Kash:so cute.we'l inform kshitij now itself.whats his number?
K weeps:no plz
S:what do u mean?
K weeps:if kshitij sees me in this condition he'l b heartbroken.i don't want 2 make him upset.so its better not 2 inform where I'm
S:what nonsense?he'l b upset not seeing u.he'l b searching 4 u
K:ya.but but that pain is bearable.but this is not like that.kshitij was planning 2 conduct a grand show 4my return 2 this industry.but if he sees me blind…no sujal shud'nt see me
Kash:ok.u can stay here.but don't b shattered.u'l get ur eyesight back.then we'll inform kshitij.u'l do more shows & wil b a famous rockstar again.God wil bless u
K is still weeping.K thinks:but I've no hope

Kshitij & kumud r crying thinking of the moments they've spent 2gether
Song:tum kahaan…{salam namaste}

K cries thinking of Prateek.Sur cums there:Aunty,why r u crying?
K has no answer.S wipes K's tears:u must not cry anymore.ok?
K smiles.
S:aunty,cum with me.we'l go outside
K:outside?no Sur
Kashish cums:why not?
K:u no that I am…
Kash:u r not alone.Sur is also there with me.kumud,just bcoz u cant see anything,u shud'nt think that ur life is confined 2 a room.u shud go out.enjoy
K:what enjoyment is there?
Kash dunno what 2 say:I cant explain u that.but still going out with this innocent kid wil b a relief
S:cum on aunty
S takes K out.Kash smiles:sur,luk after aunty well
S:ok mama

Sur-kumud go out
S:small shops r there.1 old uncle is drinking tea.he is cute
K smiles.
S:1 aunty is going with her sweet twin children
K smiles.Suddenly Prateek cums 2 her mind & her eyes r filled up with tears.
They hav reached the garden. S:this is a beautiful garden
K tries 2 touch the plants.
S:now u r touching a white flower
S picks it & keeps it on K's hair
S:it'l luks gud on u
K:thanku Sur
Its raining. S:wow rain.aunty do u like rain.i luv it
K:yes yes,rain..i can feel it
S starts dancing.S holds K's hand & makes her dance.K enjoys

hey jasmine dear very nice 👏 n touchy... 😭
gr8 gng... 👏
plz cont soon.... 😊

jasmine dear the part was really nice.. your stories twists & turns are always very damn intresting.. i always keep thinking that what will happen next... 👏 hmmm..tho kumud does not want to tell kshitij that she is alive....you know one side me angry with kumud as she is not letting sujal and kashish to inform kshitij about her... 😡 but then on the other side me even feel sad for kumud.... 😭
good that sujal kashish are in support of kumud & standing by her... 😃 sur is also very sweet........ 😃 😊 i hope kshitij comes to know where kumud is soon.. i'll be very happy if that happens........ 😉
please continue soon...me will be waiting... 😃