FF:Bringing Back My Family UPDATED PART 5 - Page 3

Originally posted by: kbtr

Hi; Just finished reading all five chapters of "Bringing My Family Back."

I just loved it. I loved the monologues of both Kushi and Arnav. I really hope she does not give in to him so easily. I know that in love you don't want the other person to suffer, but he made her suffer so much. He really should realize what he has done (from his monologues he seems to, but he's still too arrogant in thinking she will come running to him, he needs to have a fear of "what if...she doesn't come back, or she doesn't love me [you touched on that when she said loved and not love and he thought that too] or she doesn't want to see him or she will run away again...) She should tell him to stay away or she will go away again. Then he will be forced to stay away from him, as he does not want her to suffer any more. But then, how would he win her back? Yeah, I know this is your story and I should let you write it the way you want, eh? Just sharing my musings, I guess.

Please update quickly and PM me. tfs😃

Originally posted by: pup03

very nice 😊

Originally posted by: vivagal

Love your fic ...looking forward to more moments of Arnav trying to convince Khushi

Wooww...Amazing FF

Update Soon..want to see wht happens in the Party

and plz pm me