FF:Bringing Back My Family UPDATED PART 5 - Page 2

I accepted the buddy request😊

Thanks a lot for loving my works

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Yeah yaeh..thanks for reading😊

Just re-read through chapter 5...

Khushi certainly is being consistent in her denial of Arnav's rights and her feelings...

Arnav is being patient, charming, determined and cute in his pursuit of her...

Like that Dhruv is plotting with Arnav...

Waiting for more of their story...

I just loved it. I loved the monologues of both Kushi and Arnav. I really hope she does not give in to him so easily. I know that in love you don't want the other person to suffer, but he made her suffer so much. He really should realize what he has done (from his monologues he seems to, but he's still too arrogant in thinking she will come running to him, he needs to have a fear of "what if...she doesn't come back, or she doesn't love me [you touched on that when she said loved and not love and he thought that too] or she doesn't want to see him or she will run away again...) She should tell him to stay away or she will go away again. Then he will be forced to stay away from him, as he does not want her to suffer any more. But then, how would he win her back? Yeah, I know this is your story and I should let you write it the way you want, eh? Just sharing my musings, I guess.

Please update quickly and PM me. tfs😃