ArHi OS: One More Day *Sequel posted on IF P. 15*

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

To everyone asking me why this is dated Sep 5th, Me and Haffy res'd this for something else, which we never got around to, and I just posted my OS here!

So no, the CVs didn't steal my idea, although I wish they would! :')

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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

I didn't even NOTICE the date. 🤣

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@Tish_Ani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Omg...so gud!!! Dis ws an awesum piece
wish it neva ended

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amritab

@amritab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

oh geez come on, really?? *sighing heavily* well done - the twist at the end and the build-up to it - just great. the conversation between arnav and khushi - a real possibility.

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pavi1

@pavi1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

fabulous...

beautifully written...

thanks for the pm...

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Brilliantly written...The last line of your OS is lingering on my mind...Guess,He didn't have to make a choice after all ...Thanks for the PM

Edited by bhadraprasad - 12 years ago

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akanshya

@kingofme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

sooo painful but lovely...

thanks for the pm...

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Jessica

@jessicad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

What everyone resd except me? :O
where was i dying?
i will unres soon promise :')

-Edited-
Whatt! no!
OMG that was so sad. Beautiful, but so sad! I'm so pained atm!
When Arnav came back and took her into his embrace, my heart swelled with Happiness. But the very next minute, he shattered all dreams by making her choose. He listened to his mum, but not clearly enough.
she said don't hurt the one you love.. but taking Khushi away from her mother is bout the biggest wound he could lash out on her.
I'm hoping on hope that he doesn't do this!
AND SHE MEETS WITH AN ACCIDENT? :O Awww ! :'(
Beautifully written and so poignant Ridz!

Love it but its so painful. </3

Edited by jessicad - 12 years ago

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ayushma

@aycma98

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

although i hate that khushi is the victim once again... this show is literally pushing my buttons.. and honestly, i'd rather see her dead than die everyday living with the Raizadas! :(

I loved the last line... it knocked me senseless! he didn't, did he?

Edited by aycma98 - 12 years ago