ArHi OS: One More Day *Sequel posted on IF P. 15*

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Mariam

@--Amy--

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Amazing OS...loved it!!

I was so happy when Arnav came and he didn't call off the wedding...I wanted to hug Arnav then but in no time the mothers issue came in!!

I felt so sad for Khushi...She had suffered so much in the past and even now her husband abandoned her!! She met with an accident😭

Very well written...

thanks for the pm...

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@flowers4u

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

omg so heart breaking ...beautifully written

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Syca

@Syca

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Brilliant OS can you please please pm me if you update next please.

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Mahi

@Mahi1219

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

OMG! Poor Khushi! She died? Anyway, a great os! almost made me cry!

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

I was sooo happy when Arnav came and did not cancel the wedding

And then he made her choose between him and her mom...really???

Poor Khushi

I guess Arnav will realize what he lost if she is gone

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

I don't particularly like it when khushi has to pay ths price for everything, she deals with enough trash from everyone on he show but you wrote this oh so well that you literally took my breath away, the final confrontation was brilliant , so fierce, so much energy and so fantastic. I loved it.

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

thanks for the PM

awesome OS

so heart-wrenching, Khushi again pays the price for falling in love

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blck234

@blck234

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Sad. Poignant. Heartbreaking. He didn't have to make a choice after all. Awesome O.S! If this was bad. I am wondering how your best will be.:D

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

I knew it Ridz.. I know u..!

You will for sure make me either cry os shell shocked at end. Given the show is at it worst negative now, I know u would add some spice to enhance it.

Oh Thank God, U finished it before I started crying. But you know what.. This one I liked it.

Though Garima is deceived it would take time for Arnav to accept her. He cant accept her just like that, can he?

I'll wait to see how this is handled in show.. Will it be like yours?

I wish it handled in same way but though I dont want the same ending like yours.

Next time, promise me a Happy OS, will u, Ridz? Or I have to threaten u in scraps!! :P

Thanks for the pm dear!