ArHi OS: One More Day *Sequel posted on IF P. 15* - Page 3

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lazyblues

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow the os was heart breaking . And breath catching. Arnavs cold choice . Dadi s plans. They resulted in the accident of kushi.that was a beautifully written Os. I luved it . Thnx for the Pm

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lara3110

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Posted: 12 years ago

Beautiful OS and oh so sad. Why????? always Khushi has to suffer.

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masam

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Posted: 12 years ago

I really liked the monologue in the beginning about spirited people and how world stamps them down.
The twist, it really intrigued. At the end of the day, it is all about choices.

Great work! :)

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Amanram

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Posted: 12 years ago

I always love your poignant OS and missed them so much!!

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Anaya S.S

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Posted: 12 years ago

You know I haven't been commenting on if cos I was saving my 300th post for something special...

Holy fycking shit...that was so intense and angsty

You broke my heart into tiny little pieces...the pain the hurt and the ending...she died thinking that

Oh god..why am I awake at 9.25...reading something so heartbreakingly sad

Beeeautiful work Ridz

Naya x

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achu_arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey ridz!!

this can't be happening

you are going to continue this and save her

please i beg you

but this very emotional os

loved it

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sun_shine_girl

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Posted: 12 years ago

This hurt big time...

They could not see eye to eye on the issue of their respective mothers.

Despite loving each other so much they could not be together...sad sad sad...

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Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

oh shit!! you cant leave it there!!! arnav's reaction!!!!??? I neeed it..

great os!

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Vee

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Posted: 12 years ago

This bought back the particular scene from chains... FRESH into my mind.

I hate you, man. I'm still bloody crying. This was out of the world amazing. :D

Thank you for the PM!

Anne. Lucky girl. She got a dedication. 😆

-V

OOSSOOOSSSHHH- Do a part two. I'd LOVE to see Arnav's reaction

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Gals

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Posted: 12 years ago

dat was beautiful..
gr8 work..
thanxx for d pm.

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