ArHi OS: One More Day *Sequel posted on IF P. 15*

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

dis was soo nyc..:(:(he askd her 2 choose 1..w/o evn askin n xplntn 4m Garima..nw he has lost evrythin..he wud regret 4eva..Khushi has alwz been wid him..no mttr wteva he did 2 her..n he left her..clld off d marriage?!!so disappointin..nw he has juz 1 thing..!!!1REGRET!!loved it..:)Beautiful..:)

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Swetha

@ipkkndfanforeva

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Beautifully written!👏

She could see hope when he said he would still marry her...but, damn the past!
Ruined everything!

And the end...😭

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

I cnt write much ridz..dis one wrenched my heart out..
i was so happy wen arnav came..he ddnt go back on his words, i thght..
bt then d bomb dropped..n it left me thinking..whom 2 support???both r justified frm their own pov..then who is right???
bt then wen khushi met wid an accident, which ultimately i guess brought her end, i 4got evrythn else..only n only khushi..y she has to suffer again????
u made me cry ridz..so cnt write nemre..m too dsturbed..

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

OMG ... U sadistic lil minx 0:) u killed her ... Hoe could you *wails*

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

This is such a sad one!

And the end! Literally killed me.

Although Arnav seems like the culprit here but when looking deep, he also does have a reason for not liking Garima.

Anyways, really sad piece, this was.

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Curiousmind

@Curiousmind

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Beautiful os. This show is making it sooo hard to choose sides. Ecuase no one is wrong just like in your os but the bad thi g is that khushi always ends up hurting the most:(