ArHi OS: One More Day *Sequel posted on IF P. 15* - Page 4

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SHALINI

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved the OS... you really have a way with words gal.. the ending was just perfect...
loved the way Khushi stood for her mom..

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snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow that was a painful ending pleased Khushi stood up for her mother but what a sad ending

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diya33

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Posted: 13 years ago

great. u shuld continue this story. its really nice

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-bansi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

Beautiful piece of work...!!

Sad at the end...Khushi really died..?!! Aww...

Loved it..!!

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SaJanLuv14

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Posted: 13 years ago

:( *sobs* i really hope something like this doesn't happen in the show, felt really bad for Khushi but even if Arnav chose her he can't have her with conditions that's not fair to her :( feel so bad! I wish there was a second part to this really want to see Arnav repent,
Beautiful and bittersweet

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1DAlice

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Posted: 13 years ago

Lovely OS!!

Poor khushi!!

I feel bad for her!!😊

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medha

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Posted: 13 years ago

sad but marvellous!

i guess this is a kind of thing that old ASR wud have done!

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inajnar

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Posted: 13 years ago

Sob Sob ...but written Fabulously

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S.B.

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Posted: 13 years ago

it was really heart breaking.. awesome OS

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emistry

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Posted: 13 years ago

really good OS!! my heart broke for both of them! they are both in a catch 22 situation!

I liked this OS alot!

PS. i wonder why the date on this is September 5th? didn't you just write this?

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