MG OS Dharkan Zara Ruk Gayi last part /Pg 24 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
work...
writer...

hope u like.. thought to try smthng new... 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting twist...:) like da new entry.. bd character is
something to look forward to..:) nd da way geet got all settled
in her new life .. Seems to b so
can't wait to wat will c say now that
Geet has bumped in to her lolz
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Posted: 12 years ago
man all was well then is bd going to be trouble for maneet
one hopes not man
oh dear this had to happen naa
but am sure geet will make it all okay
loved maneet they are so sweet and so made for each other naa
cheers for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing party is superb and bd ki twist ke saath entry hope aab geet bd se takrai hai too bd geet ko kuch bole na...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: simrancuty

work...

writer...

hope u like.. thought to try smthng new... 😆



No i dont like it

i love it

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update buddy👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
i loved how maan said meri geet so cute😃😃😃😃😃😃 loved d family environment nd big dadi is really adamant
do cont soon buddy 👏👏👏👏👏
thnx fr d pm😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
GEET HAS ADJUSTED SO WELL IN THE FAMILY
AND MAAN ALSO LOVES HER
BUT HOW WILL SHE COPE WITH BADI DADI
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Posted: 12 years ago




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Part 4


Geet bumped to BD…and whole milk fell on bd saree, which she was carrying for maan..

(Bari Dadimaa)



" dadi" a shaking whisper came out from geet mouth followed by maan's. BD glared them and left without saying a word.



"maan ab kya hoga " geet asked scared



"kuch nahi geet. You dont worry , I will talk her .." both went behind BD. Bd was in her room and room was looked . Maan knocked again n again but she dint replied. Geet went to dadi and told everything



"m sorry dadima sab meri wajah se hua " she was verge of cry



dadi wiped her tears. "nahi geet.. isme aap ki kya galti. Ye to galti se hua na.. chaliye hum baat karte hai didi se" both went to bd room where maan was still trying. Dadi called " didi !! .. didi !!" door opened and a puffy bd appeared. Dadi chukeled seeing her but controlled as maaneet were very upset.



Geet- bari dadimaa.. I am very sorry .. please mujhe maaf kar jijiye.



Bd saw her then turned away. Now maan was getting angry. He dint like bd attitude but could not say as it would increase trouble for geet.


Dadi- didi..please ab maan bhi jaiye.. look children are also upset. '' bd looked dadi fuming.


BD- choti .. you dont come between us.


Dadi- per didi geet ne...


bd glared her and she went quite. " I have to sleep. Gud night" saying she closed door. Dadi turned to geet and patted her face seeing it pale. "geet beta..aap kyu fikar kar rahi hai.. she will be ok till morning. You go beta.. sab thik ho jayega'' she looked maan. Maan held geet shoulder and took her to room.



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geet was sleeping on maan arm, upset. "maan maine jaan ke nahi kiya.. ''


maan- I know geet. It was not your mistake .. aur look ..you dont have to be worry hmm.. mai hu na.. " he kissed her nose. She smiled. " maan !!


"hmm


"aap bahut achhe ho ''


achha !! " he teased her. She shied and hides her face in his chest. He hugged her tight and slept...



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it was midnight. Two elders were sitting in BD room.


"didi..ye jyada ho raha hai .. she was very upset''


"choti.. I know whatever I am doing is not right.. per I am afraid ki that girl will care and respect for you or not. Mai nahi chahti choti jo mere sath hua..wo tere sath ho '' BD wiped her wet eyes..


"didi..'' dadi touched her shoulder to console her..


BD- choti geet might be very nice .. innocent but yet let me assure myself that she will care you... I cant see you suffering like me choti. Maine dekha hai .. kitne gharo ko bikharte hue.. tut te hue.. srf ek galat larki ki wajah se.. when my bahu separated my sons , I could not do anything. I was alone but not you. I am here for you. Maine zindgi se bagut kuch sikha hai.. bahut kuch saha hai per mai tujhe ye sab nahi dekhne dungi choti...you are my little sister.. its my duty and responsibility to save you from all suffers. And I am doing dear..


I want to see how much patience that girl has. On what extend she can respect you and me and then I will die in peace, when my choti would be in safe hands of her grand children '' She smiled.. dadi hugged her feeling so emotional... both wiped their tears.


BD- jaa choti so ja jaake .. kal ka drama jo karna hai '' she winked


Dadi- didi aap bhi na.. bilkul nahi badli ''


BD- kyu choti.. hum budhe (oldage) ho gaye to kya hume hasne , mazak karne ka haq nahi ?? humaare bachhe humse naraz ho sakte hai, zid kar sakte hai to hum kyu nahi ho sakte.. are we not alive ''


dadi- haa didi bilkul ho sakte hai..chalo ab aap so jaao .. '' she left



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Next Morning



Geet woke up early morning. She freshen up and went to kitchen, made ginger tea and went to BD room. She knocked. Bd opened door and surprised to see geet.


"i am sorry bari dadimaa.. please mujhe maaf kar dijiye '' geet said meekly. BD smiled inwardly. She felt happy and light. " I made tea for you dadimaa''


BD- hmm'' she took tea and said geet to go..


Later in noon all were sitting for lunch, excluding dadi. She was not there. Geet asked where is she. Nakul said she is having headache and resting in her room. Geet left her lunch and went to her. She applied balm and massaged. Dadi felt good and BD as well who was looking then from door.



Whole day some way or other BD gave geet trouble and geet managed it patiently. Maan gave her support whenever she felt low.



At Evening


BD- choti m leaving'' she said stern


Dadi- kya hua didi '' she got worried as she thought bd was impressed with geet


BD- kuch nahi..bas I have to go '' saying she went in her room and closed door. Maaneet were dumbstruck what happened suddenly as BD was looking happy since noon..



All were standing in hall tensed when BD came with her bag. Maaneet n dadi tried to make her understand..

geet- dadimaa please ase mat jaaiye ''


BD- oo bahu .. mai akele nahi jaa rahi ..you are coming with me


Geet- ji mai '' she confused with all


BD- haa tu .. ab jaa jaldi ready ho ja


maan- per dadi..geet kaha jaayegi


BD- Shopping !!


"Whattt'' all in union...


'' tum log na mujhe bahre (deaf) bana ke rahoge.. geet ab chlo beta ..get ready fast '' she said smiling. Geet hugged her tight.. " thank you dadimaa'' bd patted her head and kissed her forehead.. all felt so happy. Later all went shopping together, had lots of family fun. Three days passed like minute. BD loved geet so much. She was now relieved from every burden for her choti … fourth day BD was leaving. All wanted to stay her more but she could not. Maaneet touched her feet " jeeti raho beta.. hamesha ase hi khush rahna..i will pray for you both.. '' she left... not knowing what babaji has written in their children forehead



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At Night


"maan !! aapko kal office nahi jana'' geet asked arranging his cloths in cupboard.


"h..hmm'' maan came from behind and hugged her. " nahi jaana'' he kissed her neck


geet- per maan shadi ke baad aap ek din bhi office nahi gaye.. your work would suffer na'' she turned and dropped her arm around his neck..


Maan- nahi karega.. aur wse bhi I want to spend my every minute with my beautiful wife'' said rubbing his nose with her then kiss. Geet shied and felt proud. She too wanted to stay every second with him. She looked him happily. He smiled and left her in arms. Both went to bed and slept having Completeness in life..



Next morning


Geet opened her eyes. She felt something new. She saw next to her . Maan was not there " ye maan kaha chale gaye '' she thought when she noticed it was not their room anymore. She wrapped bedsheets around her and stood up to see where were she and where was maan.. she dressed up and opened door. She shocked to see it was not Km. It was new place. She scared. She pinched herself thinking must be dreaming. But no..it was not her dream .. but then where am I'' she thought again n again and her fear was increasing when she felt a pat on her shoulder. She shuddered and turned back to see maan was standing there crossing his arm. She hugged him tight crying.


Maan shocked to see her cry. He took her tighter in his embrace and patted her head asking " kya hua geet?? tum thik ho na??''


Geet was crying n crying not able to calm her racing heart. " aap kaha chale gaye they maan'' she asked sobbing..'' kahi nahi geet..yahi to tha '' he kissed her head got she was scared. After some time she calmed and the thought stuck in her mind "then where are we" she asked.


" on our honeymoon '' he whispered in her ear kissing. She looked him wide eyes "honeymoon ??''


"hmm sweetheart'' he said huskily and kissed her cheek making it crimson in excitement.


"per maan..mujhe to kuch pata hi nahi chla..when we came here?? ''


" last night ..when you were sleeping like anything.. '' he laughed. " you were snoring geet ''


she made face and turned in anger. Maan stopped laughing seeing her anger. He held her arms and pulled to him " gussa ho gayi ''


she turned her face other side twisting her nose. He too bend his face to her side " bahut jyada gussa ho ''


she again turned next side. Maan followd her " puchogi nahi hum kaha hai ..hmm '' she was enjoying his attention. She made faces ignoring him and maan was pacifying her like a princess. Finally she smiled and hugged him.. he hugged her more tight...Both enjoyed their honeymoon with full mood and romance. They were very happy...



Precap : Maan going office & geet angry 😉


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Posted: 12 years ago
lovuuu that is sweet lovely update...sweet family drama thi but I loved the surprise part it was awesome.😉...geet ko pata hi nehi tha...hwww geet was snoring...hehehehehe😆...agr raat mein etna distrube karoge toh bechari gher nind mein chale jayegi naa😉...lovely lovuuu w8ing for next part
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