D3 FF : Bereaved [Multifandom] #1 - Page 32

Originally posted by: marauder

Finally I have completed this FF till the final update. So without any delay :)

Chapter seven : The best thing of this FF is the number of colourful character introduced to us apart from the gang. Each member with its own uniquness and with its own dimension with Swayam. So even though there was so little of gang here but still this one was one of the most impactful chapter of this FF so far. I have expected; after reading the note in last updae that here Swayam's illness will be revealed; that this update will be emotional roller coaster ride. But this was more than that. This was emotionally rich update. Starting with Swayam and his mom's conversation followed by his SMS conversation with gang was one of the high point this update. But I was expecting a seperate SMS from Sharon too. You know I scrolled the page twice to make sure there wasn't one.😕

But the best moment for me in this update was Arnav and Swayam coversation. It was really heart warming ina strange manner and it speaks about their bond in loads. The emotions runing thorough both of them was well depicted. And some of the best as well relevant dialgoues was spoken by Arnav. Just mindblowing stuff there.

P.S - Now looking forward to the next update. Update soon :)

Originally posted by: sajan_swaron

hi nivriti

im Lalita

ya im a die hard sajan fan i love them to the core😳

yes just send me the link to ur mjht ff i will read it once my exams are done

that would be after nov 9😃

Originally posted by: alisha.a.s

hey awesome work...

just read in 1 go n loved it...

plz update soon n plz pm me...

Originally posted by: swaron09

Hey

i am new to IF so just read ure post

but i loved it so much that i was glued to my laptop from chapter 1 to 7. just didn't move from my place and read it in a go.

thank you so much for this wonderful FF. really loved it.

also hats off to you, you're an awesome writer. really admire you when it it comes to this as i am not creative at all 😔.

also looks like you hav experienced quite a lot in life. explained the true meaning of friendship really well!

i am waiting eagerly for the update now. want to know what happens next!!!

So

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE FF!! URE AN AWESOME WRITER!!!

Originally posted by: troublemagnet

Hey..

This Story is entirely different from the ones I had been reading for a long time

You've successfully given a unique flavor to it..I must say

I read the first update today..and couldn't stop myself from reading the rest of the chapters..

An entirely new D3..:)..and I am loving it..:)..
kudos to you for that..:)

Do update soon..

P.S.What should I do to get the PM.?😳

P.P.S. I am your PANKHA..from now on..:D😎 ☺️

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Hey! I am glad that you liked my Fan Fiction and it's concept.

For PMs, just add me in! 😆

And thanks for being my PANKHA! 🤣

-Nivriti

P.S: What's your name? 😳

Originally posted by: troublemagnet

It's Mansi..:)☺️

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Actually I have nuanced characters in my Fan Fiction. 😳 See, you wouldn't find Swayam from New York or Shivam still friends with Sharon in the show! 😉

Understood you expected more out of Kria, Rey and Swayam but I would suggest just go with the flow, since whatever I have in my mind, you will find it nuanced from the show! 😃

It's a surprise-fulled package / Fan Fiction! And many things would be different as it is very vital for my future / forthcoming Chapters. 🤓

The story has an interesting twist ahead and also Swayam is currently on a FRAGILE state of mind.

Try to put yourself in his shoe and you would definitely understand! 😉

I did the same and this is what I could think of ! 😃

P.S : What's your name?

Originally posted by: mrash

Hey, I am Rashmi.

Waiting for the surprises!! Do update SOON!

I mean VERY SOON.