*Completed* Th#2 ArHi SS: Fire and Fire

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#561

wow...it is awesome...what a plan...loved it...

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shubhadask

@shubhadask

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#562

Very cute ss. Loved it & last part was too good..

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#563

just loved it

His family and Khushi really played Arnav

At least it made him come out and say he loves her and want to marry her

I just love Ashutosh and him wiping blood with
his handkerchief from Pooja's cut was so cute

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ipkviewer

@ipkviewer

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#564

thanks for this

I liked the way you built the tension and depicted ardor between them nicely.

the surprise element added more beauty to this SS rather continuing with the flow that the marriage was Khushi's which getting cancelled with Arnav re-thinking about marriage.

Ashutosh and (Pooja in the end) is an added bonus (by reliving diwali scene :-)).

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Anu

@soapopera

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#565

a very cute story this was...

ashuthosh s intro was brilliant

t way arnav cornered khushi

t way things turned out to be..

it was such a cute story 👏

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#566

I read it too...😊
perfect plan for someone stubborn like Arnav...otherwise he would never confessed...sweet and cute one...and the ending...with Ashutosh,Pooja and Rabba vey...😆
Superb dear...