Os ~~swaron in Village~~ prt 5 updated

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: ABBY92
Lol, that was a really sweet update to see both Sharon and Swayam lost in each other's thoughts and Swayam singing Pehla Nasha was perfect !!!

thanks a lot dear...its a pleasure that u likd ma small wrk...actually m big fan of ur wrting...read all three ff's...lovely...so really it means alot to me!!

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: nature7
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<font color="#ff00ff" size="6">Beautiful</p>
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thanks dear...

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: swayamsharon
<font size="3">awsum update himu!!!
swaron feelinh after first kiss is beatifully written!!!
loved the promotion in relationship😳 & eagerly waiting for swaron in village!!!
vm is nice, loved all the pictures!!! remind me of our beautiful swaron , which r missing in the show right now!!!
thanks for pm!!!

sorry for being late very busy with college works
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thanks shree...n soon scene would shift to village...thanks for liking VM i knw its bad but phir bhi...

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: frankyfio
liked it
bt too small????

thank you...
will try to update a big one this time...

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: beeny
<font size="3">sab se pehle sry late hone k liye...:(
naya update kya badhiya likha he & swayam ka feeling & sharon ka apne se bat karna & accept kar lena dat wo bhi swayam se pyar karti he & den expression all mind blowing & ye jo bhilikha wo sab jese ek picture k jese imagine kar sku itna clear he.. so thank u very much for creating suchh a beautiful update & PM me..😃
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thank u so much dear...
glad u likd it...

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730050

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

When is this going to be updated? :S

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ShrutikaSwaRon

@ShrutikaSwaRon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#217

Very well written...perfectly n beautifully described...swarons feelings seems so pure n they r so much in love...u have described their romance perfectly...pehla nasha=swaron...n poor sharon is so lost in swayams thought can't even sleep...plz update soon.

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-.Nisha.-

@-.Nisha.-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#218

sory for the late comment.. awesome update! 👏 awiee..swayam and sharon lost in each others thought..and swayam playing pehla nasha..😳😳 lukin fwd to the nxt update.. pls update ASAP.. Thanks for the pm!!😃

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neetha

@neetha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#219

this was nice n gorgeous...simple n sober...very well penned..loved the way sharon n swayam feelings of firrst kiss wer portrayed..i knw m late..well u knw i was inactive..nw that m finally here..n commenetin..