maneet ff:rishton mein uljhan..pt 32 pg 33 17/12 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: dona86

loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: backy

oh wow.


love to read this FF again.

awesome parts.

love'em all.

nicely written.

thanks for the PM.

plz cont soon and add me in ur PM list.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 23:
it was almost midnight when geet's cell vibrated...it was a msg from MAAN...it read..
aaye ho meri zindari mein tum bahar ban ke..
mere dil mein yuh hi rehana...
tum pyaar banke...
geet read it and was blushing but hid her emotions immediately...she then acted a sif she didnt read it and slept of...but sleep was far away from her...tomorrow was her mehandi...then her sangeet...after that was her grand wedding...verey girl's dream is to make their wedding a memorable one...but here though both the family is leaving no stone turned to make it a grand one but she is not happy...
thinking about her future when geet slept she didnt know...sun's first rays feel inside a room which was more like a garbage area...there was a double bed in which there were 2 figures sleeping...suddelny the door of the room opened and lady came in...who was none other that naintara...she came in and went to the figures who was covered from face to toe...she removed the blanket from one end to see a leg poping on that side...then she smirnked...then she opened the other side...there poped the head of the first figure who was none other than our dear daksh entangled between the legs of maan...

naintara:[st]kaise soothe hai yeh dono...geet ko tho bhagwan hi bachaye...[smiling to herself]
after that she went near daksh's ear...
N:mere pyare devar ji aagar aap abhi nahi utthe tho mein aapni furure devrani ko yahan se bhaga dungi...[smrinking]

hearing this daksh opened his eyes immediately and sat on the bed pushing maan away...

D:kya???
N:haan aap bhi tho mere devar hai...tho mujhe aapki har khabar rakhni hoti hai na...
D:mujhe kuch smaaj nahi aa raha...
N:aacha...aapko samaj ne ki koi zarurat nahi hai...mujhe pata hai...aur aap aabhi uuthye...jaakar fresh ho jaayiea...mujhe devar ji ko bhi utthana hai...
D:aacha...
saying so daksh dashed off the room to get ready and meet his princess...though only he knows that she is his princess...

naintara came near maan and wispered...

N:geet ne shadi se mana kar diya hai...
maan opened his eyes immediately and got up and rushed out..without waiting for naintara to continue...she also ran after him saying someting which was barely audible to him...after reaching near the gate he saw mohinder there talking with dev...he really got scared and went near them slowly...
when he neared then he heard their conversation which left him fuming over naintara...
Mo:arre dev bete agar aap yahan se mehandi thodi dere se bheje tho...
D:jaise aap kahe jijaji..hume koi problem nahi hai...

after hearing maan was in peace but it was short lived when he realised that mnaintara played a prank on him...but left it...
after soetime naintara went with the mehandi to geet's home...the mehandi expert was called...she started applying mahandi...in between she asked the name to be encrypted in the desing...naina came there and said..."when MAAN is writen in her heart then that name only should be written in the mahandi's heart too..."listening to this all burst laughing...

the mehandi ceremony was over with laugh and dancing...but unknown to them 2 pairs of eyes hav seen the whople program...those two pairs were...maan who was niharoyfing his life and another daksh who was just staring at someone...
THIS IS THE END OF PART 23...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the ff
but wondering y geet is like this
is she in love with someone else or did maan do something when he was younger to scare her or is the incident haapened in childhood holding her
pl cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waiting to know who daksh is in love with and why geet is not happy with this marriage.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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geet is not happy with d marriage...but why...she loves only maan na...den?

fabulous update...

loved it sooo much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update...thank u for the PM...plz continue 😊







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