maneet ff:rishton mein uljhan..pt 32 pg 33 17/12 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sstylishdoll

Hey dear in pm link is not opening correct it

will correct it from next time...sorry...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 28
nice part...
poor Maan hes so confused...
cont soon dear...

thnaks for liking...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 29:
that day it was last day for geet in sameera's home and the last 2 days for her stay in HP...
maan came to take her and geet bid them bye and went with maan in his bike...maan started the bike and she was siting back..
M:geet shall we go first to hospital??
G:yes yes...first will go to hospital...
M:ok..
maneet drive to hospital...they enter their name in the reception and move through the corridor...they stopped before a room...they knocked inside but the doc was inside so they were waiting outside...after checking the doctor went outside..
D:can i talk with u for some time??
M:yaa sure...give me a minute..
M:geet u go inside and talk to him..
G:ok..
with this geet went inside and maan went with the doc...
IN DOCTORS CABIN:
D:i know this will be a kind of miracle but ur dad had started responding to the treatment from 10 days...i am glad that u listened to him and took ur life's biggest descision without thinking anything for the sake of ur dad...i am really proud that now a days there are that people who even think about others...
M:there is nothing great in this doc...it is not just i for dad..i too had some reasons...
D:no problem son...but now when his condition is improving i suggest that for him the environment of home would suit better than the four walls of the hospital...
M:what do u suggest??
D:to take him home...but hav a nurse for 24 hours for some days..
M:ok...will consult and say...
D:ok..
M:will meet him and come...
D:ok...
MEANWHILE IN THE ROOM:
geet slowly stepped inside...she saw that the elderly figure was lying down with many machines...many times when she had come to HP during summer holidays he used to come and meet her talk with her many things...though he was her grandfather he never showed any strictness...she liked and respected him very much and seeing him in this state was something she couldnt do...she slowly went to him...his eyes were opened...
G:nameate nanaji...
N:nameate beta...par nanaji nahi papa bolo...
G:mein nahi kahungi...(i will not tell)
N:kyun(Y)
G:kyunki mein aapse naraz hun..(cause i am angry on u..)
N:kyun..(y..)[with a sad face]
G:kyunki app is baar mere se milne nahi aaye...(becauce u didn't meet me...)[with a cute angry pout..]
N:alle mera beta...mere se naraz hai...par mein kya karu...mein tho hospital mien that na tho kaise aatha...aur thume tho khushona chaiye ki mein zinda hun..(oh my girl...is angry with me...what to do...i was in hospital...u must be happy that i am alive..)[stopped in middle by geet]
G:khabardar zo aise baat ki...tho mein aapse kabhi baat nahi karungi...phir aathe rehana mere piche mujhe manae ke liye...mein aapse phir bhi nahi manungi...(dare u say like thos again..i will never talk to u...then u keep on coming behind me for manoifying me..)
N:mere paas aabhi puri zindagi thodi na baachi hai jo tere peeche peeche aakar tujhe maanounga...(i dont hav whole life to come back of u...)
G:nanaji!!!
N:aacha sorry baba...
while they were talking maan came inside...
M:nameste papaji...
P:nameste beta..
M:aabhi aap kaise ho:???(how are u now??)
P:aabhi se bohut aacha...(now i am very fine..)
M:thik hai...mein maa se baat karke aatha hun...(ok...i will talk to mom and come..)
P:thik hai...(ok..)
after maan going out...
P:geet bete thank u...
G:thanks u kis liye???(y thanks??)
P:mere maan ki zindagi mein aane ke liye...(to come in my maan's life..)
G:yeh tho mera farz tha...aapki baat ka paalan karna...thatn u kehkar muhje sharminda mat kijiye...(this was my duty...dont make my shameful by saying thanks u..)
P:par phir bi bete...aapni zindagi ke bare me naa soch kar aapne maan se shaadi kar li meere kehne par...yeh bohut badi baat hai...(but then also...u took ur life's biggest decision by marriying maan...u never thought of ur life even once..)
maan entered inside..
M:aur isi badi baat ke wajah se aaj aap apne gahr wapas jaa rahe hai is hospital se 5 mahine ke baad...(and only because of this u are going back home..)
P:kya matlab??(what do u mean??)
M:matlab yeh ki doc ne kaha hai ki 10 dino se aapki improvement aachi hai aur aab aapko ghar ke mahoul ki zorurat hi...isliye aap ghar aa rahe hai aur maine saari formalities poori kar di hai...aab bas aapko pack karke ghar chalne hai...(doc said that u need home environment seeing ur speedy recovery from 10 days...i hav completed all the formalities...now just packing is remaining...)
G:saachi???
M:muuchi...geet now u hav 20 minutes to pack...do it soon then we will go...
G:ok...
with this geet started packing...and she finished packing in 10 minutes and then took him in teh ambulance provided by the hospital...when they reached home he was welcomed in a grand manner..all had a family time and a small family dinner...after dinner all retired for the day...maan rushed to the room before geet so that he could talk with her...unlike everyday when he reaches there to meet a sleeping geet...
after sometime geet came there and without noticing him she took her clothes and went to washroom...maan was bewilded...so to take revenge he planned to shock her...when she came out of the washroom and went near the dressing table maan hugged her from back...she was totally shocked...
G:what are u doing???
M:what am i doing???
G:leave me...
M:sry dear...today i wont leave u...
G:what happened to u???why are u behaving like this???
M:what will happen to me???
his hold became loose...taking this oppurtinity geet tried to run...but maan was fast he caught her wrist...and geet started to loose herself...
M:where are u going??
G:pls leave me...
M:y should i leave u???u are my wife and i hav full right on u...so now i wont leave u...
G:pls...dont do this...all will be regreted later..pls...
maan slowly left her...with pain in his eyes...first geet was shocked but then she started moving but maan's next set of words made her stop in track...
M:before going just tell me one thing and go...whether u did this marriage only for papaji's wish or was there some other reason...
this question made geet stop and turn towards him...she saw his eyes and saw that there was a layer of tears forming and there was soo much pain in then...this was the first time where she was seeing this pain...or may be this was the first time geet was staring his eyes...
realiszation dawned upon her...
G[st]:what should i reply???i think naina says correct that i am very selfish...in front of my destiny i never saw anything...i never saw the pain he is going through...i never thought what may be his expectations from his wife which is unfortunately me...may be my curse might take him away from me but my behaviour is killing him slowly...in two days i am going to go back then what will his condition be???i cant imagine myself living without him...then how will he be...in these days i saw how much he wants to be with me...but i everytime push him away...but now i think its time to answer all his questions...
she turned towards maan...
thats all for today...
PRECAP:GEET'S ANSWER...
HI FRIENDS...


I TRIED TO WRITE THIS A LITTLE ROMANTIC BUT I DONT KNOW HOW IT WAS...AND THE DEATILS FOR THE DISEASE OF MAAN'S DAD WILL BE IN THE NEXT UPDATE...



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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesme update dear
loved it
waitng for geet's ans
cnt sn
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Posted: 12 years ago
kyun geet aisi kar rahi hai...plz geet maan ko chhod k maat jaana...

excellent update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
I hope i hope geet forgets her past and starts a fresh with maan.
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Posted: 12 years ago



what is the advantage of first marrying a person and then leave him after some days...

why Geet married him if she was planning to leave him...

is it not better that she should have told no for marriage before...

he must have been heart broken but can move ahead after some period of time...but like this after marrying him and binding him in a relation then move away so that now he is not able to move ahead again...

what type of love is this where Geet ruined his life with own life...MAIN KHUSH NAHIN REH SAKTI TO TUJHE BHI HAQ NAHIN HAI KHUSH REHNE KA...

and in my opinion what she is going to confide to him now she should have done it before marriage so that time he was free to make any decision...when before marriage he was trying to talk to him then she was ignoring him...

interesting part...

thanx for pm...



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