maneet ff:rishton mein uljhan..pt 32 pg 33 17/12 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
THANKS FOR ALL THE LOVE SHOWN ON THIS PART...


HAV REPLIED TO ALL THE COMMENTS...


THE NEXT PART IS COMING UP...DO SHOW THE SAME LOVE...


FOR PMS PLS BUDDY MY NEW ACCOUNT...


PART 28 ON THE WAY...WAITING FOR UR RESPONSE EAGERLY...


LOADS OF LOVE AG...
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Posted: 12 years ago

HAPPY GANESH CHATRUTI





PART 28:

the next morning a new day and beginning of a new journey for 2 souls...MAAN and GEET...

first geet woke up and saw that maan was sleeping in a uncomfortable position...with the spread half on him and half on the ground...she got up prayed to babaji and then went towards maan and put the comforter properly and took her dress and went to wash room to get ready...slowly maan opened his eyes and saw that geet had gone to get ready...maan had woke up very early but just kept lying down and staring her...slowly he realised that geet

as waking up...so he just closed his eyes...and when geet put him comforter he was happy and confused at the same time...

happy because geet was caring for him and confused because that if she cares for him then why is she behaving like this...but at present leaving it aside he got up and went for jog in their garden...

when geet came out she saw that maan was not in the room...she put her bangles sindoor and mangalsutra and went down to do prayer...meanwhile maan came bsck from jog and when he entered he was welcomed by a melodious tune of BHAJAN which was sung by none other than his LIFE..he went and joined them...nayntara saw him immersed in prayer...

she went near him and said...

N:what happened BIL...today u went to jog???i thought that u would be sleeping because yesterday night you two would not hav slept...(teasingly..)

M:[st:what should i say that when i reached there your SIL had slept peacefully on the bed...]simply bhabi...u know one should never compromise with health...

saying so maan went to geet and did aarthi with her...many blessed that this couple would be together forever...after aarthi all went to have breakfast...while maan went to fresh up...when all came for breakfast dev announced a thing that was a shocker for geet and a happpy new for maan..

DEV:maan my dear bro i hav a marrige gift for u and geet...

M:what bhai.(curiously..)

D:i planned something for u and her...

M:say na bhai...don't give surprise...

D:ok ok dear hav patience...the surprise is that after some days when geet will go back to south u will also go with her for some days till ur college doesnt start...

hearing this maan started dancing...he was planning this for aa long time but was not able to tell...after breakfast every one became busy in their works...and that day passed with some guests coming...

5 more days passed like this with maan completing his works and getting ready for travelling...today it was 25th that is there were 5 more days...geet started to do the packing...she went to sameera's home to pack...then she would stay there for 2 days...as she didn't spent proper time with them after marriage...rano welcomed her and then all planned for movie...sameera teased her...but naina took her away..

N:geet why are u doing like this???

G:[not understanding]what am i doing???

N:dont act too smart...i know that u might not hav talked with jiji properly...

G:naina...dont start it again...

N:why geet???why???/waht mistake has he done????

G:pls...

N:no geet...today u must tell me..

G:what should i tell u...u know everything na...then y are u behaving like this???

N:i know geet...but i dont know that why are u behaving like this...i want to know what is in ur heart..

G:i cant understand!!!

N:oh...dont act smart...if u dont want him to suffer from the curse then why didn't u refuse from the marriage???if u really didn't like him then u wouldnt hav agreed in the first spot...if u hav agreed then why are u behaving like this with jiju...what would he be feeling??

G:naina evenafter knowing my curse i can never say no to him...i can never...

N:why geet why???/

G:because i am very selfish...i am very selfish...[tears started to come out...]

N:why???[angrily...]

G:because even after trying for 1 year i can never forget him and the dream i weaved with him...when i knew that i am going to marry him all my dreams which i was trying to forget came live in front of me eyes...[crying...]how do u expect me to forget the person whom i loved for 8 years...when i was on the verge of forgetting and trying to concentrate on my life then suddenly one day i get a proposal that i should fulfil a wish by marrying him...what do u expect from me??? i agreed because of my selfishness...but then i remembered the curse which was once a boon for me...tell me naina...what do u expect from me...i became selfish once and spoiled his life...do u want me to become selfish once again and take his life???

N:[started crying listening to geet..]i am really sorry geet...i am really...i should hav not said u these thing...waise am i ur friend??

G:yes u are my best frined...why are u asking this suddenly??

N:then why did u hide this thing from me??

G:what???

N:that u LOVE jiju???

G:[blushing...]woh...wo[stammering...]

N:hoye hoyee geet blushing...ok stop stammering...i was teasing u...

G:ok ok...lets go down...

they went down...unknow to them 1 person heard their conversation...and was pondering upon it...

PRECAP:maneet in hospital...

there is one person missing in this FF...i hav never mentioned...can anyone guess???that entry would be the reason for this...

THAT'S ALL FOR NOW...

HOPE TO HEAR FROM U...

FOR PMS BUDDY "AGpm"

LOADS OF LOVE AG...

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Posted: 12 years ago
so she also loves him...

what is that curse??

continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey dear in pm link is not opening correct it
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 28
nice part...
poor Maan hes so confused...
cont soon dear...
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Originally posted by: Tyro

so she also loves him...


what is that curse??

continue soon...

thanks for liking...

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