FF: Indecent Proposal #3 [Note + Final Part = Pg 87]

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YuksPM

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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

Guys it will take a few days to get the update up. I ask for some patience please

Yuks

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sam88

@sam88

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#202

take ur time ... will be waiting for next update

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systems

@systems

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

waiting fo rteh next update:)

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s_rh

@s_rh

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#204

don't take your time... update nowww... 30pages!!! what more do u want???

Sorry!!! please update sooon ...

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Priyaviki

@Priyaviki

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#205

Nice FF...!!!! And update it soon cant wait for a long time...!!!

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archmink

@archmink

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#206

I found this ff today n finished all the part in like 3hrs while I'm at work
N. Have say I have fallen in love with yr story it reminds me some what of shades o grey n this ASRhere is no less than Christian Grey ...
But I like him 'neways ... Khushi as usual full of life n caring n scraficing for her lovedones
I hope Arnav relizes her true value before it too late for him
N why do I have the feeling that lavnya is going to create trouble for khushi n make it hard for her
Well I'm eagerly waiting for yr next update darling
plz plz pm me when u update i would love to read further
Thanks

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KKKA

@KKKA

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Y UK S ...NICE UPDATE ,,,NEW TWIST IS THE RING

KHUSHI IS BEWILDERED

ARNAV IS COOL

PLEASE PM ME WHEN YOU UPDATE

THANKS

KKKA

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jeni

@nJENIs

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#208

wow... i just finished all the 16 parts... its just awesome... to be true , liking it more than the serial :p just bcos there is no dragging and its all about ARSHI... too good :) expecting more... gr8 work .. carry on !!! 👏

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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#209

phew..just finished reading all 16 chaps..it took me 3 almost 3 hours..

Gosh this Ff is really amazing..just the way i want ASR to be.a ASR in control with open eyes..taking nasty decision in rage,anger,,his atitude,being superior..and khushi too..loved them sooo.

the story itself is damn good..the concept..he would do anything to win..and she would anything for her family..after that meeting in dargah.he made her his mistres..and khushi had to agree...

dont want him to change..

im eagerly aiting for update..plz do pm me for next..