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very interesting..excited for shankar sati paro track

Plz continue soon. Very interesting. 👍🏼

Hmm! Interesting.I will be waiting eagerlyfor your next updates di😊. Hats off to you👏👏👏and🤗.
This is very hilarious but intelligent part for me-
he also loves his young king Vishnu for his intelligence and adventurous nature..he was making him aware of asura's plan and activities..Vishnu was listening and smiling..Naraddeva got surprised..

Naraddeva : maharaj aapko hum asura k yojna k vishay satark kar rahe hai aur aap hai k hasya kar rahe hai..Maharaj vo asur devlok k rajkumariyon ko haran karne k yojna bana rahe hai..

Vishnu : uttam..
(Shree and Lakshmi were serving food..they stopped)

Naraddeva : vo tripur raj Tarak dakshputri Sati se vivah karna chahta hai..

Vishnu : ati uttam
(Shree's eye brows got up..Laksmi confusingly looked at her husband)

Naraddeva : maharaj tarak k putra to Parvati k rup mein mohandh hoke use haran karna chahte hai..
Vishnu : sadhu sadhu
(now everyone stopped taking foods..Shree stood up..Naraddeva lost his words and Lakshmi couldn't control anymore)

Lakshmi : swami yeh aapko kya ho gaya hai?? aap aise chintajanak sthiti mein anandit ho rtahe hai??

Vishnu : uttejit na ho devi...hamein in sangvadon se kisi k vabishya ujjwal hote huye dikh rahe hai..isi karan hum prasana hai

Shree : swami asur raj aap aur aapke mitra se pratishodh lena chahte hai .aise sankatjanak paristhiti mein apko kaunsi ujjwal vabishya dikhai de rahe hai??

Vishnu : ye asuron k yojna to hamare uddyeshya aur hamare mitra k jeevan ko sunhera avsarpradan karne wale hai..dhairya rakhiye devi aap dheere dheere sab samajh jayenge

Naraddeva : maharaj aapke man mein kya chalta hai vo to aap hi jane aur iswar..hum jaise nirvudhhi ko kaise samajh ayega..bas prarthana karte hai aapke uddyeshya safal ho..
Ha ha ha😆😆😆...



And Maharaj Shankar want to go parvatpur only to protect Parvati😉..😆😆😆. But what about Sati. I hope our king of Parvatpur may meet his wife and would be wife in Himalaya tirth . This one dedicated to them-"kehte hai khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye tera milna hai uss rab ka ishara mano mujhko banaya hai tere jaise hi kissi ke liye...kuch to hai tujh se raabta...kaise hum jaane humein kya pata...tu hum safar ho.. phir kya fikr ho...jeeney ki bajah yehi hai marna issi ke liye" huh kitna long gana hai.

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super gr8 part di...ur starting was too good...describing about shankara dev n his family...his yatra...
but loved that most where narrada was telling vishnu about asut's plan n he is saying ''uttam''...ha ha funny man...everyone is shocked...kya ho gaya vishnu ji ko...ha ha...
n laxmi ji was doubting on him that may be he is going for himself on yatra...laxmi ji shaq karna achi baat nahi hoti n he actually kidnapped her...ati uttam... ;-)
update soon
luv u :-)

Hi am back. On Vishnu-Laxmi's relation though it is shockingin ancient time no one asked to the would be brides about their wish/consent for the marriage. If we went throuhg 'Mahabharata" we will find so many abductions for marriage.And Shri Krishnadwaipayana Vyasa glorified this practice by saying-"A Skhatriya should prefer kidnapping a bride for marriage than a arranged marriage." Even Lord Krishna kidnapped Rukmini and Satyabhama for marring them and third Pandava Arjuna also kidnapped Krishna's sister Subhadra for the same reason with Sri Krishna. It was quite natural that time so no regets.
But di you again make me crying😭. Vishnu-Vidisha😭 sweet father-dauhter moments refreshes my father's memory . Every father love their dauhter the most from anything of this world. This is the only reason I can't hate Maharaj Daksh though I want.
And again this one is dedicated to His Majesty Maharaj Shankardev's lonliness-"suna/suna man ka aangan/dhunde payal ki woh chan chan/ suni man ki sargam/dhunde geet tere hum dum/man mein sham ho ya savera/laga tere he yadon ka mela/tune bandhan kyun ye toda/tune kahe ko muh mora/ kaho na..kaho na ..kaho na..."

Superb. So Mahadev and Paro finally meeting. And Vishnu and Laxmi wedding well what can I say. Abduction of wedding but loved it. And now am waiting for further updates. Please keep me posted.

Awesome update eager to see shiv-sati meeting

stupendous update di😊😊😊.you r really nice in writing words in hindi