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Arunita Chandra

@RoseFairy

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

thanks to all of you for commenting...u knw i was thinking about writing a story since long.this story is so dear to me that i want to share it who are madly in love with dkdm like me..i knw its being a mytho show many members won't b interested to read any fictitious story..that's why the few people who reads it i want to comment and criticize me and also give me suggestions to improve my writing skill😃

a big 🤗 to everyone who commented

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Ria

@chand1234

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Very nice update nd CS! 👏

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816401

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

nice start aru di.loved the character sketch.will read the first part on sunday

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Paramita Ray

@DeewaniRimi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Wow Sukarna is Rajkumar Saket.Aww chho chweet.I loved him since he was seen in DKDM. But they won't contine him.Any ways please update soon di😊.

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shivamala

@shivamala

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Please translate in English because my Hindi language is very limited.

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A for Arpita

@A_for_Arpita

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Di interesting concept mujhe ganga or parvati bohat pasand ha so plz unke ache ache scenes dalna...

Cont soon love u di

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

hufff di itni jaldi...itna sara likh dala apne...but maine ek baar main sara pad liya...
nice character sketch...u know me too watch this show...i really like the effects they show in that...n the charcters were so apt...too perfect...in serial n in ur ff too...
read prologue n part 1 too...they too good...n cs of vishnu's children were too good...nice one...
continue soon...
luv u... :-)

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soumya vohra

@coolfizzy

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Extremely sorry 4 d late comment!

I luved it...

Especially d bonding of Shankar n Vishnu...

Evry gal z either married 2 Shankara or z in luv wid hm [except Parvati...well i m sure if she sees hm once...e1 she'll fall 4 hm...]

Felt sad 4 Devi Shree...

Bt d most yeay part z dat Vidhisha z d cute little parvati :) n saket z our GOLU-MOLU Sukarna :)

I luved it too d core...

Update soon :)

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Oh ! Lovely FF !!! Oh, The Way "He"'s Continuously Trying To Get Shankarji Married...Too Hilarious For Words !! Please PM Me Too !! Waiting For The Next Part And CS !!

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702755

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

omg why didn't you pm me?

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