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so i guess sati is going on yartra and there is will meet shankar.what about parvati and ganga?

nice character sckech
lol there so many options for shiv
but i like most shivsati!!

both the part are nice
u made kartikeya their bro!!

Very interesting plot. U are a damn gud script writer and a story teller with dialogues. Am very impressed. Wonder whom Shankar will finally choose to settle down with. I like the idea of Sati and Ganga both falling in love with him. But Parvati admires Shankar only because her sister is in love with him but Parvati has no feelings for Shankar herself..
But Shankar's heart get captured by Parvati that would be a great twist. But u go with your version this is an excellent base and groundwork to the story. Each character has been established well. It has all the makings of a blockbuster. Waiting to read more. 😃

O god...

Muumy😭miss you. Di you depicted each and every character very beautifully.Mainavati's madness for her children reminds me about my mother. She was also like her or we can say every mother feelings are same for their children.
😲Sati wants a perfect husband and doesn't want to share him. Ganga loves Shankar and alredy sends him a marriage proposal😲.Parvatiji ko apne family,friends aur praja se prem hai.😃Aww I admire her view.I want to dedicate somthing.
On Shankar and Sati-"kayee khwab tere khatir buna hai/par dar hai ye bhi tute to kya ho/mujhe raas aati hai khusiyan kaha re/kyun dil ko dukhana bebaja/phir aansu bahana ekdafa."
On Shankar and Ganga-"mein hun shab tu shubha/dono jur ke juda/mein hun lab tu dua/dono jur ke juda madno..."
On Parvati-'dil hai chota sa/choti si asha..." and
This one dedicated to Shankar's beloved deceased wife Panchidevi-"bin tere/ bin tere/ bin tere/ koi khalish hai hawao mein bin tere".

Lovely updates!
Aru, plz plz plz upd soon haan! Eager 2 noe wht'll happen nxt :)

read both the parts 2 n 3...both were nice...
hmmm...so sati is going on yatra...n ganga loves shankar a lot n paro wants to see him as ganga's husband...ou la la...this is going to be more intresting...sati,ganga,paro n one shankar...it's like ek anar sau bimaar...(don't mind about this just kidding)...
loved the convo b/w paro,ganga n karthikeya...
but one thing did sati knew about her marriage with shankar?????...
update soon...
luv u... :-)

Fantastic loved it. Waiting to see more. And please keep me updated.