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Riti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Very Awesome Update 👏 Keep up the good work :):))) luvd it

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Skittle16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

interesting! 😊 great story 👏 cant wait for more

Edited by Skittle16 - 12 years ago

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Paramita Ray

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

very nice👏👏👏.So Maharaja Shankar remembers his deceased wife Panchidev...so sad😭.
He still memorises his marriage with Sati and keep thinking about her...very sad😉'
He is aware of Ganga's love towards him...too sad😆'
And he is ready to take a glance towards Parvati😳...it's really very sad.😳😆...🤣🤣.
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣.
Sare ke sare Rajkumari keval Shankardev ke pichche.🤣🤣🤣.
Anyway update soon.

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sati65

@sati65

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

very interesting👏 its superbbb

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Gopiii

@Gopiii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Go on want to read more. Very good.👍🏼

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hemavidz

@hemavidz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

wow such a sweet bond between Shankardev n Vishnu eagerly waiting for their journey update it soon 😊

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JAYASHREE

@jayvenk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Hi it is lovely dear .. enjoying it thoroughly.. One small request.. can u post in smaller sections. I feel it might be easier to read. thank u Loving it please do update quickly

Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago

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702755

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

awesome update and character sketch.

i love how vishnu so cares for shankardev.

i am waiting for shankar to meet parvati and sati again.

do continue soon.

don't get upset if i comment late.😉

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Foram

@foram.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr
very nice👏👏👏.So Maharaja Shankar remembers his deceased wife Panchidev...so sad😭.
He still memorises his marriage with Sati and keep thinking about her...very sad😉'
He is aware of Ganga's love towards him...too sad😆'
And he is ready to take a glance towards Parvati😳...it's really very sad.😳😆...🤣🤣.
🤣.
Sare ke sare Rajkumari keval Shankardev ke pichche.🤣🤣🤣.
Anyway update soon.

so sad🤣