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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome yaar.
loved the meeting os shankara and sati and the next will be shankara nad parvati.
wow loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all I want to sing a song for Maharaj Shankar of Kailashpur...ahem...ahem...
"Koi Pathar se na mare/mere deewane ko/sho bhi lene do uska dard yehi hai/dawa yehi/sho bhi lenedo agar woh jag uthega toh darjayega/ kyunki payega pehlu mein uski Laila nahi hai/Phir kaise jee payega woh...koi pathar se na mare mere deewane ko."
Just change these words..."Koi kesh se apne na mare humare Shankar Maharaj ko/dekhne dijiye unka dard yehi hai dawa yehi hai/kyunki iss jeevan mein woh ekaki hai/ Donon Kanya Sati aur Parvati ko...Koi Kesh se apne na mare Shankar maharaj ko."
Edited by mrmrfrevr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😃
amazing update.
nice written
you are really an amazing writer yaar.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
It means reserved


Once again a beautiful piece of work👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
It means reserved


Once again a beautiful piece of work👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
It means reserved


Once again a beautiful piece of work
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fairy loved the update. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fairy very good. Go on dear. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Parvatpur

Parvateswar Himavan was taking rest in Mainavati's room..Mainavati is his favourite ueen so in spite of she often throws tantrumshe likes to spend time with her..

Mainavati : swami..hamein aapse ek gambhir aviyog hai

Himavan : tumhe to humse sada aviyog rehte hai Maina..kaho ab kaunsa bhul hua humse

Mainavati : Ganga ko tiraskar na karne ka..aapki isi namaniyata ne aj uski sahas itna badha diya k vo aj humari bina anumati k Parvati ko Sagarpuri le gayi..

Himavan : Maina ..Parvati ..Ganga ki bhi bhagini hai..kya Ganga ko Parvati pr itni bhi adhikar nhi hai??

Mainavati : kintu vo humse ake jane ka agya to le sakti thi na..aap to jante hai Parvati hamari nikat kya mahatya rakhti hai..vo hamari pita saman bhrata Daksh ka amanat hai...hamari apni santan Kartikeya se bhi adhik prem se sincha hai humne use..sada ye bhai lage rehte hai kahin uske rup uska abhishaap na ban jaye..

Himavan : vyarth chinta karte ho rani..humein apne ma shakti purn viswas hai .Parvati k swargiya rup unhi k den hai..uska raksha bhi wahi karenge..kintu han ye avashya satya hai k Parvati k aupasthiti mein sampurn Parvatpur andhkar aur asampurn prateet hote hai..

Mainavati : swami aapko Ganga k vishay mein ab sidhwant lena hi padega..Parvati bhi ab vivahjogya ho chuki hai kintu jyeshtha ki avivahit rehte huye hum uske Kanishtha k vishay mein chinta nhi kar pa rahe hai..ab aapko Ganga ki vivah rachana hi padega..

Himavan : kintu Kailaspati Shankar to punarvivah karna hi nahin chahte aur Ganga ki pan to tum jante hi ho..

Mainavati : jante hai..vo Shankar jiske karan hamare bhrata Daksh ko kasht pohucha tha usi Shankar k gale varmala dene ki pan li hai aapki putri..kintu nato hum is samvandh sweeekarenge aur nahi kabhi manyata denge..yeh aap jan lijiye..yadi aap Ganga k vivah Shankar se karwana chahte hai to hum Parvati aur Kartikeya ko leke Dakshpuri laut jayenge..aap rehna apni Ganga aur Vinayak k sath..

Himavan : krodh na karo Maina..hum Ganga k vivah k pravandh shigra i karenge..humne sunah hai Devlok k paschim mein Himalay k dusri disha mein abastit Suryanagar ke rajkumar ek devrajkanya se vivah hetu Devlok padhare hai..suna hai vo ayant rupban aur veer hai..Ganga k liye vo hi yogya patra honge..hum kuch hi samay mein unse vet karenge aur unke sammukh yeh prastav rakhenge...
ab to prasanna ho jaiye Maina

Maina smiles but became lost in her thought
"Yadi vo rajkumar itna rupban aur gunban hai to hum use apne Parvati k liye bhi to chinta kar sakte hai..."..


Mainavati is a supermom. Ma tomai pranam.erakam asadharan chinta tumie korte paro😉😆. Bechara Parvateshwar ki korben??? Kartikeya r Parvati ke niye Dakshpuri gale Mainavati..Himavan ki korben??? And Ganga should have asked Maina first.Ekhon thala samlao...Parvatpure dhuklei bodhoi oke biye diye debe or chhoto ma.😭
Dakshpuri

Daksh comes to andar mahal after finishing his royal responsibilities..

Prasuti : swami aap baht prasann lag rahe hai

Daksh : han prasuti prasannata k hi bishay hai..suchna hi aisa mila hai

Prasuti : aisi kaunsi suchna swami?? Asuro ne shanti prastav preran kiya hai kya??

Daksh (annoyed) : us Mahamurkh Vishnu aur Shankar ki karan Asur aur Dev ka shanti prakriya ka samvabna nast ho chuka hai...is vishay pr baat na hi kare to acha hai..hum to yahan hamare Sati k vishay mein baat karne aya tha..

Prasuti (curious) : Sati k vishay mein?? arthat uske vivah k vishay mein hai na swami?

Daksh : han Prasuti..humein Sati k liye jis sarvgunsampann Yogya var ka sandhan tha aise hi vyakti ka suchna prapt hua hai..Suryanagar k rajkumar Devlok aye hai ek Devrajkanya se vivah k icha se..aur Devlok k sarvshreshtha rajkanya Sati se adhik yogya patri aur kaun hai??

Prasuti (happy yet sad) : kintu Suryanagar to devlok se baht dur hai swami..kya aap apne hriday k ansh Sati ko videsh mein ek videshi rajkumar sath preran kar payenge??

Daksh : aur koi upay bhi to nhi hai Maharani devlok mein Sati k yogya var milna asamvav hai..aur yadi us Shankar se sath jude huye ateet se Sati ko dur rakhna hai to use videsh mein vivah dena hi uchit hoga...hamein Sati se dur hote huye atyant kasht hoga hum jante hai..kintu ye kasht pranghati bhi ho to bhi ek pita k kartavya ko palan karte huye is kasht ko hamein sweekarna hoga..

Prasuti (touching Daksh) : swami hamein ap pr sampurn viswas hai..jaisa aap thik samjhe waisahi kijiye..
Daksh has same fatherly feeling as Himavan. But I like Daksh more because somehow he is a strict and loving father where Himavan is loving fther but not so strict. But may be the deficiency of strictness is filled by his favourite queen Mainavati😆. Prasuti is not so persuassive thanks to God.😆But all 4parents are thinking about that Foreign Prince of Suryanagar for their respective daughters Parvati, Sati and Ganga...🤣


Edited by mrmrfrevr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Vaikunthpuri

in the afternoon Shree is feeding milk to Rajkumar Saket..Lakshmi is preparing Rajkumari Vidisha..but often becomes unmindful

Saket : badima dughdha samapt ho gaye aab hum krira karne jaye??

Shree : jao..aur Vidisha ko bhi le jao..

Vidisha's eyes gets teary..:
 Vidisha : humein nhi jana

Saket : vo pitashree k jane k paschad kabhi krira nhi karti..

Vidisha (clutching Lakshmi's neck) : ma pitashree kab ayenge..

Laksmi (suddenly regaining consciousness) : hum nahin jante..humse prashna na karo..

Shree understood there is something going in Lakshmi's mind..

Shree : dasi..jao Saket aur Vidisha ko bagicha mein le jao..

Dasi : ji maharani...

and she took them out..

Shree : Lakshmi ..Maharaj ko smaran kar rahi hai??..tujhse vivah hone k paschad vo Vaikunthpur se vises praojan k atirikt kabhi bahar nahin gaye..ab kuch adhik samay to lagega hi..

Laksmi : didi aap unhe sarvada smaran karte hai na...

Shree : pichle paanch varsh se yehi karte aye hai..(and then she felt she is indicating Lakshmi's coming in Vishnu's life ...so she stopped)

Lakshmi : didi aj Naraddev se asurlok k ek suchna prapt huye hai..hamare bhrata Vidyunmali ka vivah hone ja raha hai raja Vritra k kanya se..hamare sampurn parivar is vivah mein ekatrit honge..keval hum nahin honge..

Shree : yeh wahi Vritra haina jisse tumhare pita Tarak valpurvak tumhara vivah karwane k chesta kar rahe the??aur swami ne tumhare raksha kiya??

Lakshmi : han isi vivahmandap se maharaj ne valpurvak hamari haran kiya..didi Vidyunmali bhaiyonme sabse adhik humse prem karta tha..apne jeevan k har ek vishay vo humse alochana karta tha..kintu uske vivah mein hum upasthit nahin reh payenge..kyunki na to humare pita ye chahenge aur na hi hamare swami..

Shree : dukhi na ho Lakshmi..yehi to ek stree k jeevan hai..ya to pita ya bhrata ya phir swami k agyadheen ..tu ab devlok k rani hai..asurlok se ab tera koi sambandh nhi raha..

Lakshmi : jinlogoke bich  hamare jeevan k 16 saal bita vo aab mere koi nhi rahe??humare ab unke sath koi sambandh nhi hai??ye kaisa niyam hai sansar k??

Shree : tu akeli kahan hai??hamare pita maharaj Daksh ne bhi to humse sambandh tod diya..

Lakshmi : didi aapke sthiti vinna hai..dakshpuri na lautna aapke sidhant the..aap yadi ab bhi jana chahte hai to swami apko nishedh nhi karenge..kintu hamein to Vaikunthpur se bahar jane ka anumati hi prapt nahin hai..hamare jeevan k har ek sidhant sarvada koi aur hi lte aye hai.. hamare pita ne us vridha Vritra se apne shodasvarshiya putri k vivah tayar karne k samay ek bar bhi ye nhi socha k ye vivah se purv hum mrityu ko prapt hona uchit samjhenge..aur nahi hamare swami ne hamare haran se purv hamare sammati janna chaha..vo to vivah k liye bhi hamari ichha janne k chesta nhi kiya..aur nahi humare sath milan karte huye hamari sammati ka pratiksha kiya

Shree (keeping hand on Lakshmi's head) :kamsekam swami tujhse apne prano se adhik prem to karte hai..hamein to ye soubhagya bhi prapt nhi hai ...

Lakshmi kept head on Shree's souldier and both the queens kept shedding tears for same man but for different cause


No Comment. Because one of our ancestor invented a smriti called manu Smriti where this is mentioned clearly..."A Woman should have to  obey, in her childhood her Father, in  her Youth her husband and in her old age her son." Sarthak Janam Mor, Mago Janmechi meye hoye ei deshe.😡

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