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Posted: 12 years ago
The Village Near Himalaya

Vishnu and Shankar were also resided in the same village where Sati and Parvati were staying..Vishnu went in searching for food..Shankar was sitting under a tree..out of tiredness his eyes became sleepy..suddenly he felt some soft spongy thing touching his feet...out of shock he woke up and found a small rabbit near his feet..he giggled and picked up the rabbit..and then only a sweet childish jingle soothed his ears

"
Dhabli Dhabli"

The voice came closer with its owner..and Shankar's heart got melted to see the same small doll of the mountainous forest running to him..Ashok Sundari also recognized him..and gave a heavenly innocent smile..

Ashok Sundari (addressing the rabbit) : Dhabali tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?? hum kitni derse tumhare sandhan kar rahe the??

Shankar (sitting on his knees) : acha to ye shashak tumhare hai??van mein to ise nhi dekha..

Ashoka Sundari : ye hamein Parididi ne diya..humne iske naam Dhabli rakha..

Shankar (smiling affectionately ) : aur tumhara naam kya hai..

Ashok Sundari : hum Ashok Sundari hai..

Shankar gave the rabbit to her and took her face in palms..

"jaisi sundar rup waisihi sundar naam..ise dekhk hamari batsalyabodh jagrit ho uthte hai."

he kissed her forehead..and picked her in arms

Shankar : ye parididi kaun hai?? vo jinhe hum van mein mile the??

Ashok Sundari : nhi vo to mausi thi..Parididi to ek Pari hai .us puskarini k nikat ek kutir mein rehti hai..aap miln chahenge??

Shankar (smiling) : pariya to tum jaise nispap saral shishuon ko darshan dete hai..humein nahin.. chalo tumhe tumhare parivar k nikat pohucha dete hai..

he moved to the direction where Sati and her group were staying..ith Ashok Sundari's guidence

Sati was searching ashoka Sundari as usual...and found Sukarna trying to get a kite hanging on the tree..

Sukarna : mausi hamare sahayata kijiye na..vo patang  hamein dila dijiye

Sati took her bow and arrow and set her target but then only a voice echoed in her ears from memory

"ban pr ban marke Vriksha devta k apman kyun kar rahe hai??"

She left the bow and herself climbed up the tree...she got the Kite and was about to climb down..and suddenly a voice ranged

"Mausi "

As Sati was tensed for Ashok Sundari so her voice deviated her and her feet slipped..and she fell from the tree..being horrified for the upcoming injury she closed her eyes..but after few moments she realized that she landed not on rough ground but on someone's strong arms..in reflex she  rounded the neck of the owner of that arms..and opened her eyes..and got absolutely speechless..the same person again saved her from being fallen..
  Shankar was so shocked in the whole situation that for few moments he forgot to put her down..he was only standing under the tree..when Ashok Sundari called so "Mausi" looking up..he also looked up and found something is coming towards him with full blow..in reflex he streched arms and ended up catching the same proudy girl of morning....
    Sati at last managed herself and got a bit annoyed with the fact that she is still on someone's arms..that too in front of her nephew and niece..Shankar's handsome appearance was making her embarrassed ..she doesn't know why..but at a time she felt annoyed too..

Sati : kya hamein niche utarne ka kasht karenge??hum abtak apne pad mein chalne mein saksham hai

Shankar got conscious and put her down..

Shankar : kshama karna devi..humein asha nhi tha aapse punah aise sakshatkar honge..

Sati (became rude in a try to hide her embarrasness)  : kya hum jan sakte hai aap yahan kya kar rahe hai??kahin aap us van se hamein anusaran to nhi kar rahe the??aapka uddeshya kya hai??

Shankar (confused): aap hum pr mithya sandeh kar rahe hai devi..hum aapke anusaran kyun karenge??

Sati : dekhiye...

Ashok Sundari stopped her..

"Mausi mausi..ye hamein hamare shibir tak chodne aye the.."

Sati realized her mistake..but accepting own fault was not in her nature..it would hurt her ego

Sati : asha karte hai yehi hamare shesh sakshat ho..

Shankar only nodded..he knew if he answers back it will only give fire to arguement..because this princess is not in mood to accept own defeat..

Sati again pushed back her braid..Shankar moved away before that braid could heat his face like it did in the morning...and then Sati left like a Swan..the way a proud princess walks..

Shankar sighed
" is garbita rajkumari se hamein ab savdhan rehna padega..yadi punah inse sakshatkar hogaya to yeh to apni churika jaise tikhn jihva se hi hamein dwikhandit kar dalegi"
then he smiles
...kintu manna padega..soundarya,tej aur ahamkar k mishran mein ek apurv shrishti hai ye rajkumari..

Shankar returned back to the tree and found Vishnu is waiting for him...but he lookedvery tensed..

Shankar : kya hua Vishnu..itna chintit kyun dikhai de raha hai??

Vishnu : kal hum teerth nahin ja payenge..kisiko hamare sahayata k avashyakta hai..

Shankar : vistar se bol mitra..

Vishnu : hum jab pushkarini k nikat se gujar rahe the hum do vyakti ko vartalap karte huye suna..ke us Puskarini k nikatwale kutir mein ek parmasundari kanya aj ashray li hai..kal brahmamuhurt mein vo Himalay k disha mein yatra karegi..tab hi yelog use apharan karne ki yojna bana rahe hai..aur un vyaktiyon k chalchalan se hamein prateet hua k vo asur hai...aur samvabta Tarak k rajya se hai

Shankar  (in mind) : pushkarini k nikatwale kutir..kahin yeh wahi Pari to nhi jinke vishay mein vo Ashoka Sundari baat kar rahi thi??
(to Vishnu) : tune usi samay un durachariyon ko dand kyun nahin diya??

Vishnu : karan hum janna chahte the ke in yojna mein keval vo hi dono asur hai ya aur bhi asur mile huye hai..isi karan humein kal us kanya ko durse anusaran karna hoga..aur pratiksha karna hoga kab ye asur use apharan k chesta kare

Shankar (fuming in anger) : us durachari asur ko hum aisa dand denge k kabhi kisi nari ko asamman karne ke vishay chinta bhi na kar paye..

and then two friends started to take preparation for the fight

Ashi is so cute that whenever I imagine her she looks an angel. But Dhabali ?? Isn't it a name of a name of a cow??
Shankar and Ashi are super cutest ??don't know actually😕 here they are not father and  daughter.😭
Sati Shankar encounter is awesome...but I have doubt because how could Sati climb up a tree with her royal attire and dupatta and all?? Didn't she struck anywhere?? By the way her fall is 🤣 Which tree that was?? May be Sir Newton would be happy if he came to knew that his Theory of Gravity led a new theory of Love story.☺️Sati direct landed on Shankar's arm due to Gravitational force.☺️But I have doubt on their relationship...don't know...may be they not able to unite ?? Or after knowing everything Sati will become devastated and heart broken.And agreeing whatever her father will tell her to do.Shankar-Sati...😭
😭😭😭
Hmm.Vishnu and Shankar are ready to fight with Asuras👏
About Parvati...I don't know ...but expecting that Maharaj Shankar will marry her at their first meeting🤣...Because his friend Vishnu is now desperate to get Shankar marry  off to any beautiful lady. But still the question is what will happen then to Sati?? And to Parvati as well??
P.S. I am very angry because Sati was very enthusiastic towards her archery but after Shankar's words about Brikshadevta ka apman and all She abandoned her hobby. Ab kya hoga?? I want to see her doing archery again.😭
Edited by mrmrfrevr - 12 years ago
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Wowww...gr8 upd! i loved it a lottt<3
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The Last Halting Village Before Himalaya

Sati and all her sisters and groups stopped their for night..Khyati and Aditi was inspecting all the arrangement for their night-stay of them and giving instructions to the guards..Madandev and Rati with Sukarna went for a round of village..Chandradev and Rohini were spending time with each other as usual..Revti was sadly watching that and feeling neglected as always..as for Sati's detachment from the group all of them got late and had to stop in the village so Khyati is avoiding her and instructed other sisters to do so..as none dares to scold Daksh's apple of the eyes Sati so it was Khyato chose this way..so
Sati was busy in dressing Ashok Sundari..its her favorite pass time to decorate Ashok Sundari with all her beautiful attires and ornaments..she finds her like a living doll of her..but now Ashok Sundari was feeling bored with all Sati's experiment with her hair..right now she wants to run and play around..

Ashok Sundari : mausi..aap hamare keshsanskar karna kab samapt karenge..hamein krira k liye vilamb ho rahe hai..

Sati : bas aur kuch kshan pratiksha kar le Sundari..

Ashok Sundari (being impatient): nahin hoti pratiksha humse..aaj pura dibas se krira ki absar prapt nhi hua..aap aise adrishya ho gayi thi..hamari puri samay aapke sandhan mein chali gayi (she made face at Sati)

Sati ( gives an affectionate smile holding her tightly) : acha mate humse bari bhul ho gaye..hamein kshama kar dijiye..hum kya kare us van mein itna samay nast ho gaya mera..vo bhi us ashisht vyakti k karan...
(she groaned remembering her confrontation with Shankar..an awkward yet completely new feeling occupied her thought for a moment)

Ashok Sundari : acha vo vyakti kaun the jinhone van mein hamein phal diya..vo kitna deerghkay aur sudarshan hai..aur dekhne mein koi veer yodha ya raja prateet hote hai..haina mausi??

Sati wanted to avoid the discussion..as she was feeling uncomfortable with the very memory of her meeting with Shankar..

Sati : Ashok Sundari..ab tujhe krira k liye vilamb nhi ho rahe hai kya??ja jak apne puttalikayon k sath krira karo..

Ashok Sundari : nahin hum bahar jake krira karna chahte hai..chaliye na mausi

Sati : sandhyakal asanna hai..is samay bahar jana uchit nahin hain..tum shibir kebhitar hikrira karo...

Ashok Sundari didn't feel much happy about the idea..she was about to say something in the meantime Revti entered into the tent..she doesn't like Ashok Sundari much..neither Ashok Sundari feels comfortable in the presence of her step mother..so her face got darkened

Revti : Ashok Sundari tum kuch samay ke liye hamein ekant mein chod do aur bahar jake krira karo..

Ashok Sundari left the tent..Sati got worried

Sati : didi..use bahar kyun jane diya..andhkar cha raha hai..is samay ek balika k liye bahar krira karna uchit nahin hai..

Revti : kyun uske mata-pita to bahar hi hai..kabhi Rohini ko bhi to mata k kartavya palan karne de..hum yahan tujhse ek mahatyapurn baat karne aye hai jiske liye ekant ki avashyakta tha...

Sati : aisi kaunsi baat didi??

Revti : Sati hamari swami tujhse atyant sneh karte hai..tere kathan vo kabhi bhi asweekar nahin kar sakte..kya tu hamare or se unhe ek suchna de sakti hai k..

Sati : k...??

Revti : yehi k hm apne shibir mein unke liye pratiksha karenge...hum jante hai k yadi tune unse hat kiya to vo avashya hamare sath samay vyatit karne k liye maan jayenge..tu karegi na aisa...
she held Sati's hands and almost begged to her

Sati realized Revti's grievance

Sati : didi hum Chandradev se avashya baat karenge..aap nischint rahiye..kintu is samay Ashok Sundari pr dristi rakhna avashyak hai...chaliye didi..

both came outside but there was no trace of Ashok Sundari..



In spite of all her effort Parvati failed to reach in Himalaya in time..so she had to stop for night staying in the village..in a small hut of an old lady three of them decided to stay for the night..the next day in Brahmamuhurt they will start for their goal again..in a nearby pond Parvati were making the horses drinking water and making herself fresh..Jaya was preparing dinner for them..Vijaya was taking care of the rabbit..suddenly the rabbit jumped from her hands and disappeared in seconds..

Vijaya : are are shashak to palayan kiya..

Parvati ran to her

Parvati (angrily) : Vijaya ek khudra shashak tak nhi sambhala jata tumse??aab hum use kahan sandhan karenge..

Jaya came to her..

Jaya : chinta na karo Parvati ..vo shashak palayan mein samarth hai iska arth vo sampurn swastha hai..ab chalo kuch samay vishram kar lete hai..kal brahmamuhurt mein prasthan jo karna hai..

  Parvati seemed not much convinced but she understood that she should give priority to reach to the medicine tree first..so she turned to go back to the hut..and suddenly she heard a scream of some child and ran towards the direction..and then she found a small beautiful girl with majestic royal dress and ornaments was siting on ground..it seemed she had a fall and got injuries on both hands and legs..her feet are bleeding heavily..the girl is crying out of pain..and most surprisingly the rabbit is sitting near her..it seems the girl was following the rabbit and slipped and got injured by the stones..the angelic beauty of the little girl stole Parvati's heart at once..she immediately took the scared and injured girl on her lap and started nursing her.Vijaya picked the rabbit again.she was determined not to let it go again..

Parvati : are krandan na karo kanya.bas sadharan si khat hai..hum oshodhi de dete hai..abhi tumhari yatna dur ho jayega...

she carried the girl to the hut..after applying medicine the bleeding stopped and with Parvati's soft affectionate touch and consolation..at last the girl stopped crying..Parvati tried to interact with her

Parvati : kanya tum kaun ho??aur tumhare mata pita kahan hai..

the girl (rubbing her eyes) : hum Ashok Sundari hai..

Ashok Sundari's adorable childish voice touched all the 3 girls heart..

Jaya : jaisi sundar balika waisi hi sundar uski naam..

Vijaya : han aisi kanya jinke paas hai unhe to shok kabhi sparsh bhi nahin kar sakte..

Parvati picked Ashok Sundari on her lap..and affectionately caressed her..Ashok Sundri also was mesmerized by Parvati's divine beauty and soft behaviour..she was no more scared

Parvati : acha Ashok Sundari..tum yahan kya kar rahe the..aur ye khat kaise aya??

Ashok Sundari : hum aapne shibir k bahar krira kar rahe the..tab bhi hamein vo shashak dikhai diya..hum uska anusaran kiya..kintu hamari padskhalan ho gaya ..kintu aap kaun ho?? kya aap Pari ho??

Parvati (smiled on her question) : Pari?? kyun tumhe aisa kyun prateet hua k hum Pari hai??

Ashok Sundari : hamari nani (Prasuti) hamein Pariyon ki katha sunaya karti hai..vo kehti hai..Pariya atyant soundaryashali  hote hai aur hum jaise balak-balikayon k sahayata karte hai..aur hamari mausi (Sati) se adhik sundar kanya to is sansar mein nahin hai aisa sab kehte hai..to aap to Pari hi huye na..kya hum aapko Parididi keh sakte hai??

Parvati (blushingly yet affectionately smiled) : avashya

Jaya and Vijaya : hamari Uma to (Parvati's pet name) Pariyon se bhi adhik sundar rup aur komal hriday k adhikari hai..

Parvati hugged Ashok Sundari tightly and kissed her..it created a devinely beautiful scene to see Parvati showering love on Ashok Sundari


when after a lot of searching Ashok Sundari was not found all of the people of group started mourning and thinking themselves as responsible for Ashok Sundari's disappearance..when Rohini came to know that Revti asked her daughter to go outside of Sati's tent she got furious...

Rohini : Revti didi hum jante hai aap hamari kanya ko utna pasand nahin karte kintu aisa kadapi nhi socha k aap usko aise kshati pohucha sakte hai..akhir sauteli mata jo hai..

Revti : hamein dosh dene se purv aapne dosh ko dekhna sikho..ma k kaunsi kartavya nibhaya hai tumne jo hamein gyan de rahi ho?? han hum mante ha k hum Ashok Sundari ko bahar jane ko kaha..kyunki hum jante the tum bhi swami k sath bahar hi bhraman kar rahi thi..aur hamein viswas tha k tum uski dhyan rakh logi..kintu tumhare paas  aapni putri ko dene k liye samay hi kahan hai??

Sati was feeling irritated with this discussion as she was most impatient and worried about Ashoka Sundri

Sati : bas bhi kijiye aap dono..na jane vo is samay kis dasha mein hogi aur aap dono hai k ek dusre pr dosharop se hi samay vyatit kar rahe hai...thik hai jo man mein aye kijiye..hum ekakihi uski sadhan mein jayenge

and she rided on her chariot..

Aditi tried to stop her but Khyati stopped her

Khyati : jane do use..vo hummse kisike nhi sunegi...hum apni taraf se anusandhan karte hain..

Sati after finding Ashok Sundari for hours at last reached around the hut where Parvati was staying..and a familier childish voice drew her attention and almost dragged her near the hut just to find Ashoka Sundari is drinking milk sitting on someone's lap..Sati somehow is not liking the scene as she is a bit over possessive about Ashok Sundari and then to see her drinking milk from an unknown girl which she denies to dringk often from her hand was quite unbearable to her..

Sati (a bit loudly) : Ashoka Sundari...tum yahan aparichit vyaktiyon k sath kya kar rahi ho..

her anger was not hided in her voice..

everyone got astonished and looked at her...Parvati put down Ashoka Sundari from her lap and stood up..and stared at Sati ..Sati also now noticed Parvati with full concentration..and both got speechless to see each other's beauty..both stepped towards each other looking at each other's eyes..everyone present there were lost in the most beautiful women n the world..but no question of comparison arose in anyone's mind..their beauty was uncomparable ..both were defining the term beauty in complete different way..for a while it seemed the time has also stopped being engrossed in sati and Parvati's beauty..

after a while Ashok Sundari broke the silence
"Parididi yeh hamari mausi ha..mausi yeh Parididi hai "..said Ashok Sundari holding both Sati and Parvati's hands...

with her words everyone got consciousness back..

Sati : Ashok Sundari..humne nishedh kiya tha na dur jane se..jante ho shibir mein sab kitna chinta kar rahe hai??

and then she noticed Ashoka Sundari's injury and got nervous..

" hey Ishwar ye kya hua hai??itna bada kshat kaise hua??"

Parvati : vo hamari Shashak ki anusaran karte huye iski padskalit ho gaye the..

Sati (with a temper) : tumhare shashak ko sambhal k nahin rakh sakti?? janti ho aj tumhari isi dayittwagyanhinta k karan is balika k sath kitni bada durghatna ghat sakti thi??

none ever talked to Parvati in such a tone till now...though Parvati didn't feel bad but .Jaya and Vijaya got really disturbed to hear Sati scolding Parvati like that...

Jaya : jis dayittwagyanhinta k aviyog aap hamare sakhi pr kar rahi hai hum bhi aapko usi aviyog mein aviyukta kar sakte hai..aapne is kanya ki dhyan kyun nahin rakha?? kyun sandhya k samay apne shibir chodke ise ane diya..

Vijaya : aur jis pr aap aviyog kar rahi hai..usine aapki kanya ki paricharya kiya hai..abhi ye kanya keval inhi k chesta se swastha hai..

Parvati : tum dono shant raho..hum inki manasthiti ko samajh sakte hai..yadi kisi priyajan pr anch ata hai to uttejit hona swavabik hai
(turning to Sati) ..Didi aap chinta na kare..Ashok Sundari ab sampurn swastha hai..humne unhe oshodhiwale dugdha ka sevan bhi karwa diya..ab koi bhai nhi hai..

"didi" the very word touched Sati's heart and melted all her anger at once..none called her didi before today as she was youngest among Daksha's children (as none knows Parvati is the youngest daughter of Daksha)..today this word gave her a feeling of completeness..Parvati's soft and polite words and devine smile created a feelings of affection in her heart towards Parvati..which she didn't feel before for anyone else than Ashoka Sundari..Sati came closer to Pavati and affectionately touched her cheek..generally she is always concern and a bit proud of her beauty so she doesn't praise anyone else's beauty..but today Parvati's beauty didn't create that jealouy inside her in first glance..she lovingly carressed Parvati's face...

Sati : tum atyant sundar ho

Parvati : hamein lajjit na kare didi..aapke sundarta ke age to hum kuch bhi nhi hai...

Jaya and Vijaya remained silent as this debate has no result

Sati realized its too late already ..and they have to return..

Sati : hamein jana hoga baht vilamb ho chuka hai.aaplogoko baht dhanyabaad hamai kanya k dhyan rakhne k liye ab chalo Ashok Sundari..

Ashok Sundari hugged Parvati...

"alvida Parididi "

Parvati : ruko jara

and she brought the rabbit and gave it to her..

Parvati : tumhe shashak priya hai na..lo ise tum rakho...

Ashoka Sundari looked at Sati to seek permission..Sati smilingly approved..Ashok Sundari took the rabbit and out of pleasure kissed Parvati..Parvati's eye became teary..

Ashok Sundari : dhanyabad Parididi...

and she held Sati's hand..

Sati : hum chalte hai..

Parvati : didiaise nhi kahiye hum ate hai..yadi niyati mein hain to punah hamari sakshat honge.

Sati : hum bhi yehi asha karte hai behn..and then she left for her tent..thus two sisters met for the first time unknowing  their relation and unaware of the fact that their fate will lead them on the same path again and again


Sati is little proud and attention seeking arrogant but sweet hearted cutest pie. So I don't like Khyati and her other sisters' behavior. And wow Rohini and Chandrama are always busy with each other that they don't have time for Ashi??😡And Revati and Rohini's fight over Chandrama is disgusting thing.😡
I find only Sati who has concern about Ashi...others are just...😡
😡😡😡😡

Parvati is a angel . And her companions are
😡😡😡😡. Kya yaar ek chhotusa rabbit ko pakad nahi sakte yeh log???
The entire scenes between Ashi-Parvati-Sati is fantastic. The two most beautiful diva...are staring at each other. One is little old and the other is little younger. God creates them with all his beauty and brain and talent.
"Lagta hai ki Rab ne
Tumko(here donon ko) banaya jisdam...
Apni Kudraton ko usne tum(donon)  mein kar diya tha gum.
Iss jahan ko husn bantna tha kar diya kam.
Tikhe tikhe nain naksh tere, kaliyon se komal honth tere,
Phulon se nazuk paon tere, donon jahan kurban tere...
Tarasha pyar se jisse
Rab ne woh murat ho tum.
Santarashon ki jaise devi tum.
Tumsa jahan mein koi na...
Ae Nazni shunon na..humein tumpe haq to do na
Chahe to jaan lo na
Dekha jo tumko hosh ud gaye
Honth jaise khud he sil gaye ..."(@blue they are saying this to each other).
What will happen??When they come to know their true self?? But Ashi instantly bonds well with Parvati and she is also very close to Sati. So I hope that She can do something to bring together these two wonderful sisters.😳😃

P.S.Though I don't like that Ashi is drinking milk from Parvati😡 and getting readyand decorated  from Sati😡😡 they do this very fondly😳😳. So this time okay..but next time I want to see Ashi playing with Sati in garden. If possible with Parvati too.😃


Edited by mrmrfrevr - 12 years ago
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Thanking you with a big hug🤗.
And,wishing you a very 'Happy Makarsankranti', buddy.
'Til Gul Ghya ani god god Bola.'
Hope you can understand Marathi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
so here i am...well both the part's were too good...as usual no doubt...😃
so himavan n daksh both were thinking for paro's n sati's marriage...n that too with same person...well koi zarurat nahi...wo toh phle se hi apni prem ke safar main apne humsafar k saath hain...😉...😆...bas pehchane ki der h...😉
n mainavati kinni selfish h...daksh is thinking about ganga's marriage n mainvati after knowing about that prince is thinking of marring paro in place of ganga...iske chakar main kahi paro n shankar ki love story main problem na a jaye...😡
n finally both the sister's were confronting each other...😛...ek mayan main do talwarein kaise reh gayi...😲...🤣
all this just because of ashok sundari...oh dear a big wala...🤗...for you...n paro had became her pari didi...❤️...n loved their talks...even they both were mesmerized by each other's beauty...akhir behenein kiski hain...but maza toh tab ayega jab ek anar aur sau bimaar wali situation ayegi...😆...tab dekhte hain ki ye us beauty se mesmerize hoti hain ya jealous...😉
n the second meeting of shankar and sati was...awww......she directly landed in her arms...haye ise kehte hai attraction...zatak lagaya tha ya axe jo wo directly apki arms main a giri...🤣
n vishnu and shankar are going to fight with asur's...for our paro...haye that means now paro and shankar's meeting is not so far......
update soon...
luv u...😊
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Update soon aru. Going good. 😊
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🤣Hey Riddzi good one. Sach mein situation dekne wali hogi...🤣🤣🤣
tab dekhte hain ki ye us beauty se mesmerize hoti hain ya jealous...😉
n the second meeting of shankar and sati was...awww......she directly landed in her arms...haye ise kehte hai attraction...zatak lagaya tha ya axe jo wo directly apki arms main a giri...🤣

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What a great piece...well done 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: FairyDreams

PART-12

Tripur (Kingdom of Asurraj Tarak)

In The big hall Asur King Tarak was sitting with his two sons Andhak and Vidyunmali..Shukra the wise teacher of Asuras enters..

Shukra : Maharaj Tarak ye hum kya sun rahe hai??aap Devlok pr akraman karne k chinta kar rahe hai??

Tarak : Guru Shukra is samay hum aapne Putra Vidyunmali aur maharaj Vritra k kanya ka vivah k vyavastha mein vyast hai..is samay yudh k vyavastha karne k samay kahan hai??

Shukra : humein bhramit karne k chesta na karo ..Asur Raj Vritra aur Asurkul k sabse bade yodha Mahishpur k Shashak Mahish k sath milke tum kya shadyantra kar rahe ho usse hum bhali bhati abgat hai..

Andhak : Guru Shukra..aapko to anandit hona chahiye ke hum Asur Devlok ko nast karne ka yojna kar rahe hai..aap chintit kyun ho rahe hai??

Shukra : karan hum Asurlok k vabishya se chintit hai..yudh k jati k vabishya ko ujjwal nhi karte hai..yudh mein mrityu k adhik koi phal prapt nhi hote hai..tabhi to Patal raj Bali bhi tum logo k sath nhi hai...aur tum log bhul rahe ho k Devlok mein Shankardev aur Vishnudev jaise amit vikramshali yodha rehte hai..

Tarak (shouted) : bas kijiye..us Vishnu aur Shankar ke naam humare samne na lijiye..Panch varsh paschad bhi us divas ka smriti hamare ankhon k sammukh prakat hai..

Andhak : un dono devon ne Asurkul k rajkanya ..hamare behn Lakshmi ka haran karke asurlok ka ghor apmaan kiya..isi karan hum Devlok k har ek sundar rajkanya ko asurlok k seva mein niyojit karenge...vises Devon k sarvse shaktishali raja Daksh k putri Rupbati Sati aur Parvatpur k pran Parvati ko asurlok ana hi hoga..

Shukra : Mahamurkh ho tum sab...Shumv aur Nishumv jaise yodhao ko bhi tum sabne Devlok k sundarta k mohjal mein achhann karke aapne sath kar liya ho..kintu itna smaran rakhna asad uddyeshya je kiya gaya karya kadapi safal nhi hota..Devlok aur Asurlok mein shanti sthapit karne k liye hum aur maharaj Bali itna prayas kar rahe hai..aur tum hamare samast parishram vyarth karna chahte ho??
jante ho yadi Devlok aur Asurlok mein shanti sthapit ho jaye to ye dono jat k liye kitna labhdayak hoga??

Tarak : humne un devon k hathon apne Putri k sath sath apna sabkuch khoya..hamare bhrata aur putron ne us Vishnu aur Shankar ke hathon pran tyaga..Lakshmi ko bachate huye..aur aap keh rahe hai unke sath mitrata kar le??jabtak us Vishnu sarvnaash na kar de hum shant nhi rh sakte

Vidyunmali feels bad..

Vidyunmali : parantu pitashree Lakshmi ab Vishnu ka Maharani hai aur uske santano k janani..pratishodh ke ye agni Lakshmi ko bhi peera pohuchayega..ye uchit nhi hoga

Andhak : Vidyunmali.tum apno se jyeshtha ko uchit nuchit ka shiksha de rahe ho??

Vidyunmali feels offended and leaves

Shukra : dekhk acha laga Tripur mein koi to suvivechak hai...hum to ek guru hone k karan tum sabka hit hi chahenge..baki tumhare ichha

he leaves..

Tarak : Andhak tumne Parvati ko haran karne k jo yojna banaya tha uska phal kya hua..

Andhak : chinta n kijiye..baht hi shighra Parvati hamari patni banke Tripur ki shobha badhyegi...aur Shumv aur Nishumv k sahayata se Daksh putri Sati pr bhi asuro k adhikar sthapit honge..aur tab Mahashaktishali Daksh bhi hamare vash mein hoga

Tarak : ati uttam

and gives an evil laughter..Andhak joins him



Shumbh-Nishumh, Mahishasur, Tarakasur, Vritrasura...ore baba jekhane joto chhilo sob asur deri Sato r Parvati ke chai😡.😲😆😆🤣🤣🤣🤣
Tobe ekta katha bolchi..juddhei manusher bhavishyat.shantite noi. Shwashwat Judhdhe manush Mahan hoyeche,Shwashwat Shantite tar binash ghotbe.(Mankind is graet because of eternal war, eternal peace will destroy mankind.)
Okay but Sati r Parvati ke haran kore ene ke biye korbe?? Andhak?Na Tarak?? Naki dujone?? Na dujone dujon ke?? Ete dujoner relation ki darabe??
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome .. STree shakthi full on 😎 But liked the touch of her being picked by shankar.
awww lovely darling loved it

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