Veer (The Warrior ) RTMC FF 21 on pg 47

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rashgirl000

@rashgirl000

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

loved it. thanks for the pm

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

thank u di for the part n welcum back...
veer ki wajah se sabki band baj gayi...n arti pagal ladki...she luvs him but the gr8 angry young man...everytime he show her attitude...
but arti is arti how can she give up...
n last part was aouuu...
update soon...
luv u... :-)

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shruja

@shruja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

welcome back
thanks for update
short but beautiful update!!
so all frnds cursing veer
and veer still rude towards aarti

Edited by shruja - 12 years ago

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Neha

@Asyalover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

awww feeling bad for arti nowas she is not getting any love by veer hope veer will start to atleast like her...update soon...

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

very nice update dii

but it was too short

but loved it alott...wow!! what a punishment😃

except veer all were crying ha ha ha 😆

n aarti she is so cute but i hate tears in her eyes...she is so charming why veer always avoid her...let me guess

he loved someone else?agar aisa hua to i kill him😡waise aisa hoga nhi i know😳

second reason ummm...shayad wo usse like karne lagega😃

yahi reason h na di

no more claps please

i know im very smart😃

hehehe

just kidding

ud soon dii

n please long one this time

love u

muahhh

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Sonali

@sonalimurat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

thanks for updating

nice update .. 👏 👏 👏

liked it

but why veer is always angry on her ..

the punishment was realy big.but it seemed that for only made as fuel to fire to his anger

.last scene between veer n Arati was very nice ..n she dissolve in veer strong touch ☺️

update soon

love u

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

thnks di for updating this afta long...
i ws missing veer...
but missed aartu the most...
childnes, all frivolities...

god they all r so sweet that cud melt any stone..
but this rude veer..
god, cant he see how cute she is???
like chubby bubbly kid...

i dnt like it at all wen he shout on her...
just like ma 12th cls chemistryy prof use to..
i hate such ppl...
and veer, pzl stop being rude...

day n night u think of ranga...how weird..

u hav aarti, more beautiful den anyone...think of her man...

why demon loking man ranga...

i hav a shairi ready wid me...

jo lega veer se panga..
wah wah wah..
jo lega veer se panga...

veer kardega usse nanga...
let it be ranga...

wah wah wah...

i m gr8.

loved the scn- WHO IS RUNNING...
god this gal is so similar to prithvi and sanyogita na,,,
evn they eloped.

hahaha...

lovly update.
lov u di

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

It's awesome update but too short... But I m happy that u r back

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Riya

@soniaparte90794

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#239

di thanks for nice and lovely upd.😊
di upd is realy amazing
i read that part many times i feel bed for arti 😭
becoz she luv him lot and he have no idea about that
plz god dono ko jaldi milwa do
last scean is raly nice
thank u di once again
luv u lot.
i m wating for next upd
happy new year😊
always keep smile😊

Edited by soniaparte90794 - 12 years ago