Veer (The Warrior ) RTMC FF 21 on pg 47

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys ...i am sure you would love this one...😉






Veer ( The Warrior )



Chapter 1 Pg 1










chapter 8 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/64876377





Chapter 1

Thousands take birth who are brave


but it is only after many many thousands of years that a warrior is born...



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This is a story of Veer who always stood for his rights and never cared about any one except the truth...he landed into fights with anyone for the injustice... that was the reason he was sent away from home to hostel...

A 21 year old was as brave as a lion...he was so strong that he could easily twist the iron rods like mere plastic... there was always a frown seen on his glowing forehead... with strong and attractive features he was liked by everyone around him ...he had some loyal friends and enemies at the same time...

Fights were a part of his life now...he was least bothered about calling his parents or even attending their calls...he was close to his four best friends Arjun, Uday, Nakul, and Sameer...



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The college was surrounded with high mountains...and a small river that lead to a wild forest...no one dared to enter as it was believed to be haunted...

As usual the gang of these five young boys marched towards the college gates after parking their bikes outside... the most fierce being Veer... with chains rolled in his left hand he entered the building '...

It was very common for Veer to be gazed by girls... as he was too popular among the whole college girls... not only that, some girls would desperately wait for him to enter the college gates so they can have a small glance of their prince charming...

hockey sticks, metal rods, chains were a part of this gang... although they were least seen in the classrooms but still they managed to pass somehow...



It was very common for them to meet their opposite gang who was their most loyal enemy...but unfortunately they all were nothing in front of Veer who was enough for anyone who came in his way...


This was their second year and none of them understood why they were studying..


Arjun was curiously looking at the book "its been two hours and I am stuck in this chapter...God knows who created Physics..."





Uday threw his towel on him "well if I knew I would have killed him way back so that he couldn't write any more nonsense..."

Arjun "but the exams are near...what to do?"


Sameer looked at his notes "well I have something if you can understand...otherwise ask Veer when he gets back..."

Uday "i am seriously surprised at Veer...he doesn't open the damn book and still he remembers after reading once... well where is he now??"

they heard the door slammed against the wall... Nakul panicked as he entered "where is the first aid..."

It wasn't unusual for them to see blood on Veer's hands and knuckles... but this time he had a bruise on his head...




Uday and Sameer immediately got him under the tap... they knew Veer was strong... but they made sure he was alright...




"someone hit him from behind...Veer beat him badly..." Nakul said while applying the medicine...




Veer was least bothered about his bruise "leave it... he will not see tomorrow's morning sun..." with anger in his eyes...

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To be cont soon...😉





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apurva100 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsome concept
update soon and PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really nice dhanvi veer is acute but a handsome warrior update soon and do pm me , back to u after long time missed u. With love maria
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Posted: 12 years ago
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intresting...Nice concept...
oh so veer is like angry young man...n entry with a chain...super dhansu...n about physics...well itni bhi buri ni hoti...liked the bond b/w the buddies...
eager to know about his heroine...what's her name?
continue soon
luv u...
Edited by ridzzi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awesome start
now that's like our veer
to stand against injustice is second nature to him
luvd the beginning n the bond between the buddies
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow Very Interesting start yaar:-):-) Jus love the Concept:-):-) plz continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kya toddu admii h yeh banda…I tell you what di..he is bestest creation of you… lovd his attitude..

You know what…he is gonna smash everything..

Yes yes who created dis physics.. but u noe wat.. I like physics.. but not…chemistry….i hate chem…

One reason is teacher who thaoght me in 12th.. second is, we hav to simple remember it.. there is no lagic..remembering those useless reaction equation all day..

Physics has logic.. I m always topper in that..so dnt say anything to physics plzz…

Verna mujhse jadga ho jayega.. n beliebe me, mujhse jagda bhari hota h.. sachi main…

Hockey.. I lov hockey like hell…

Well I hav told dat before rite…

U noe, ma friends say, I will go to play hockey match evn on ma marriage day, n enter in marriage wid ma hockey dress…funny imagination na…bt we enjoy dis a lot…

Gonna lov dis stry like hell, lets see in how many pieces the guys who hit veer's head in gonna b minced…

Waiting fr mugdha's entry… she is gonna rest the devil in veer…

I noe.. she wil b the most pure…

Di tum mere ho ki yaadd aa gyi…😭


lov u ,

ud soonn

Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely Concept !! Update Soon !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow nice concept...veer looks like bhai with chain...omg exm nd physics!! I don't like it too pata nahi pass kaise ho gayee...waiting for next...hope heroin ki entry ho jayegi...luv u
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am sure this one is also gonna rock like SHIKAR & TUM MERE HO...

I am waiting for next update...

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