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Posted: 20 years ago
#71
such a good story plz continue writing
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Posted: 20 years ago
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author eran

PART 9

Dish-Dk u can't tell maa anything she wont be able to take it.[shock]

Dk-Ok i want to spend time with u disha. tell u what v'll have dinner at a restaurant tonight.

Dish-Ok! but u go now quickly.

In the background maa is calling "Sunny"!!!

Dk-coming maa! DK turns to smile at disha before he leaves.

Dish then falls on her bed like shes away with fairies and smiles like a mad.

That evening:

Dishis getting ready into a yellow sari, looking dead hot and of course with her ring and bangles on!!! Dk is also getting ready into the blue shirt disha had wanted him to wear for the party! both look god!! and Dk is to die for here, well he is in my head anyway!!!

Dk goes to his maa who is sleeping now. Kisses her forehead and saya - i am going to spend time with ur real bahu if u knew u would b happy to know that not Pori but Disha was ur bahu. [Dk has soft tears in his eyes]
Dk then turns to leave and c's Pori at the door. HE is mad but tries to keep a straight face so he doesn't spoil his mood..

Pori-where r u going so late DK without ur wife?

Dk-shut up pori.

Dish out of the blue.

Dish-who says he's going without his wife?[Dish is smiling at Dk and then has a sarcastic smile for Pori] ha ha ha !!!

Dish-shall v go DK? [she grabs Dk 's arm and they walk out together.]

Pori- Disha!!![in an angey tone!!!]
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wow wot a story u've ritten u shud be da director of td
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Posted: 20 years ago
#73

part 32:

at goa:disha:leaning on dks arm)wow wot a wonderful place

dk:i no thats y i bout u here

disha: its so romantic

dk: disha don u think v shud hav r baby gal here😉

disha:dk enouf of that joke now!!!!!!!!!!!!

dk lafes😆

disha: were r v goin 2 live

dk:in this hotel, even more romantic, only us 2 in only 1 room😃

disha:im so haappyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#74

exelllllllent

part 33:

dk n disha in1 room at 9ite

dk:disha look we hav told eech other that v luv eech other then y dont u sleep on da bed insted of da sofa?

disha:i donno

dk:comon disha!!!

dk:we,ll speak all night long

disha:dk did u no u r so rrrrrrrroooooommmaaaaaannnntttttiiiiiccccccc!!!!!!!!

dk:i no

disha;dk how much do luv me

dk: more than u can expect🤗

dk n disha

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Posted: 20 years ago
#75

hey eran

great jopb

lets see what is gonna happen in goe

love KP

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Posted: 20 years ago
#76
great job nice one waiting for ur next shot
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Posted: 20 years ago
#77

Part 32

After Lunch:

Disha goes to their room to find DK. DK is sitting on the bed looking at some papers.

Disha: Dk i've talked to Aai and she say's its fine and we can go. Have you told mummy ji yet?

DK: Yes, i left her a message and she rang back and says that it is fine for us to go and she will be back before we come back.

Disha goes towards DK on the bed and puts her head on his shoulder.

DK: What's the matter Disha?

Disha: Nothing, how long are you going to be?

Dk: not long, why?

Disha: just like that. Can't i ask?

Dk: of course you can ask, your my wife. Shall i leave all this paper work for later.

Disha smiles.

Disha: Yes!

DK: Ok!

Disha laughs, Dk puts the paperwork to one side and hugs disha.

DK: Just a few more days disha and i will have you to myself.

Disha: Don't you have me to yourself here.

DK: No i don't i share you with Aai, maa and now Ved. everytime i get a moment with you, you have to go and either cook are we are distured by Ved or anyone else. But not know. When we go away it'll be just you and me.

Disha: May be your right, Dk. Anyways where are we going to stay in goa?

DK: In a top hotel which my friend is the owner of.

Disha: great i can meet your friend while where there.

DK: you'll love goa disha, i promise.

Dk plays with disha's hair and kisses her neck and then goes to turn the light off!!!!😉

Next we hear:

Disha: DK!!!!!!!!!!!!!

stay tuned

love eran!!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#78
ya plz write next part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 20 years ago
#79
GOD THE STORY HAD JUST STARTED IT CLIMAX LOL REALLY CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT BIT IT WAS GETTING INTERESTING
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Posted: 20 years ago
#80

Part 33

The day has arrived and they are about to go on holiday!!!! to goa!!!!

Disha: DK are you ready, lets go.

Ved: Take care, and don't worry about bari maa i'll take care of her.

Disha: I know you will.

Disha: DK!!!! were getting late, we'll miss our flight.

DK: Im coming, im coming! (Dk comes round the corner)

Ved: Bye, and take care.

Arrival in Goa:

Disha: This is beautiful!! Oh! Dk!!! I love you!!!

Disha hugs Dk, they are looking at there hotel. (In my mind the hotel looks like this) Big white building with white lights. Lovely open entrance with roses of all kind surrounding the building. Lovely and romantic!!!!!

DK: Shall we go in?

Disha: Yes. (Disha smiles at DK)

They both go in and see a water fountain in the middle of the entrance, loads of lights nice and romantic. Dk see's that there is a man coming towards them and Dk smiles at him.

DK: You haven't changed a bit in these years.

A man wearing a suit and looking like a business man says.

Man: You also haven't changed either. Who is this beautiful lady?

The man looks at Disha. Disha smiles back.

DK: She is my life, my love, my wife! (DK puts his arm around Disha.)

Disha: Hello.

DK: Disha, this is my friend Raj, we worked together a few times and he has been a great friend to me.

Raj: Dk, please don't embarass me infront of your beautiful wife.

DK: I'll just be back Disha, i'll just get us our room.

Disha and Raj are left alone!😕

Raj: So Disha, how long have you been married to DK?

Disha: Just over 6 months.

Raj: You are happy with him?

Disha: Yes, what type of question is this?

Raj: Nothing, i will have to say you are brave to marry Dk after the women he has had in his life.

Disha is not happy and has a sad expression on her face. 😡

Dk comes suddenly:

Raj: DK! All booked in?

DK: Yes! In the honeymoon sweet! Come Disha, i'll see you later Raj. And nice hotel!

Disha looks at Raj in a unhappy way and grabs Dk's hand and walks to their room.

Raj Shouts: I hope you will enjoy your stay here Disha!

DK and Disha turn round and DK is smiling and Disha smiles at DK and looks at raj angrly!😡

DK and Disha reach there room and it is a loverly room!!! Nice and romantic!!!

Please reply and stay tuned!!!!

love eran!!!

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